Tower of Elements

It's understandable that the first part of this book is written by a woman, the second one is also written by a woman, that's okay, and the third one is still written by a woman, that's okay. Bye-Bye

I am a boy, but I think that one heroine is normal, two are understandable, and three are acceptable, but it takes a group just to make money. Do all the beautiful girls who appear in the novel have to be included in the harem? Really speechless😓

The author of this book has a good idea and good writing skills, and at least he can hold up his plot. But part of the reason why people want to abandon the book is that every few chapters, a relatively novice plot and writing style appear. The plot alone is not bad, and even the writing style is like a different person. Of course, it's not serious, not much, just a few paragraphs, but I can't help but have him come every few chapters. It would be nice if the author had some control over it. You can read it when you are short of books.

Okay, you can take a look! Holding the sun and moon in my hands and picking up stars, there is no one like me in the world.

Let me spread the word to the author, the fish smell will not be removed! If you can eat it, I will be cruel to you

How should I put it, if I was looking at a girl before, I did feel a little bit like that. But the more I read later, the more I felt like I was reading an Eastern fantasy novel about cultivating immortals. At first, I thought it was like the Bone King, an invincible farming and air battle of wits and courage. As a result, all the combat capabilities collapsed in the end, and the characters were also written in a mess. I don't even understand what the main plot is and why. Logically speaking, the protagonist can just find a random place to hang up and grow up and support his wife, but he ends up causing trouble everywhere. The early plot said that high-level professionals can get titles and so on, but there are not many in a country. As a result, those people in the back actually became pirates? ? ? I was confused, what's the point of a group of masters becoming pirates for money? Then came new master and hero levels. The kind of master who can kill a bunch of high-level professions in seconds is as bad as a dog. A secret realm even appeared! ! ! Isn't this a Western fantasy? Isn't it sword and sorcery? What a small world, everyone has a space storage, and passersby can fly through the air. I literally threw up. If you want to write about Eastern fantasy, then write about the East. If you want to write about the West, then write about the West. No matter how bad it is, you can write about modern cities or future science fiction. The way things are put together makes me feel like I'm watching a hodgepodge, and I can even guess the plot behind it without even reading it. No, I thought it would be enough to just look at the girl, but then the whole plot fell apart. The main plot of the Tower of Elements is no longer written, and the details of the girls are also gone. It's all about getting into trouble and fighting, and then hunting for treasure and fighting. Isn't there a peaceful day?

You can take a look. . .

What does the author like about elements? Don't know what game this is

There will be beauties of all kinds in the harem, right? Author, please update

The plot and setting of "Water's Batch" are really a cheap mobile web game. . . . I think your idea is not as good as practicing self-cultivation and letting go of the witch farming style. As a result, the beginning is full of bad taste, and This plot introduces a character information card, and even if you eat it without seasoning, you will be watery, 🐮🐮🐮🐮🐮🐮🐮🐮🐮🐮🐮, too 🐮🐮🐮🐮 spicy