Please Be Careful with Red Envelopes
by Cao Xin
About This Novel
We are just a group of ordinary students, but we were dragged into a terrifying game because we grabbed a red envelope. In the game of death, we are constantly looking for opportunities to live and the reasons why we were chosen. We don't want to think that deeper mysteries are still waiting for us, and more fears are still coming...
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Official(209)Scraped 22d ago
How come this book is almost exactly the same as the one I have read! It's all a game about grabbing red envelopes, death, etc. The only difference is that one of the protagonists is a male and the other is a female. One side is a student and the other side is working.
The other link can't be connected at all.
It was good at the beginning, but then it started to get messy. Either the author accidentally arranged the wrong chapters, or you simply didn't notice that the later storyline could not keep up with the previous content. Especially the storyline between 46 and 47 has a big sense of gap. It felt like jumping from another story to another. Is there a missing chapter between these two chapters? If the chapters between these two stories are not connected, the layout of your entire novel will be messed up! ! ! !
Don't you think it's strange to use the first person to describe yourself as a soft-hearted and kind-hearted person? Although the author wanted to create a full-bodied character and write about complex human nature, it was counterproductive because of his lack of skills. For example, the squad leader who reversed himself into a pair of scissors seemed to reveal his true face at first glance, but upon closer inspection, it was clearly his friend who betrayed him first. Is there anything wrong with the squad leader's reversal and retaliation? And as an ordinary student, it is obviously not normal for him to not feel uneasy at all when his friend dies. Moreover, the author talks about the insidiousness and cunningness of this squad leader from beginning to end. He always says that he tricked his good friend to death, but it was clearly his friend who betrayed him first. It is really disgusting for no reason, so do those who survive have to bear all the mistakes? On the contrary, this made the monitor one-sided. The author should add a little description to make the transition. And the "honest guy" in the back who used force on girls, you are still honest even though you have a knife? There is something wrong with the logic. The portrayal of the protagonist is also strange. From the beginning, I felt that the protagonist was a wise but cold person, but later on, he was said to be soft-hearted and kind-hearted? ? I won't read this book again
Brother, you copied this, right? It's not complete.
It's rubbish. You charge money for just a dozen chapters, and you pay more than a dozen book coins for one chapter. You plagiarize from other books. It's really bad.
Alas, I can't afford to be hurt
After reading more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist is still a weakling and a holy mother. I get beaten up everywhere, but I still try to save others when I can't protect myself, so why should a girl leave first?
Well, I remember that there was a person whose mission was to have a relationship with a girl. He didn't say what the relationship was, and he could also accept her as his mother. . .
Chapter 46 and Chapter 47 cannot be connected.
The first person of all evil!
We are just a group of ordinary students, but we were dragged into a terrifying game because we grabbed a red envelope. In the game of death, we are constantly looking for opportunities to live and the reasons why we were chosen. We don't want to think that deeper mysteries are still waiting for us, and more fears are still coming...
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Official(209)Scraped 22d ago
How come this book is almost exactly the same as the one I have read! It's all a game about grabbing red envelopes, death, etc. The only difference is that one of the protagonists is a male and the other is a female. One side is a student and the other side is working.
The other link can't be connected at all.
It was good at the beginning, but then it started to get messy. Either the author accidentally arranged the wrong chapters, or you simply didn't notice that the later storyline could not keep up with the previous content. Especially the storyline between 46 and 47 has a big sense of gap. It felt like jumping from another story to another. Is there a missing chapter between these two chapters? If the chapters between these two stories are not connected, the layout of your entire novel will be messed up! ! ! !
Don't you think it's strange to use the first person to describe yourself as a soft-hearted and kind-hearted person? Although the author wanted to create a full-bodied character and write about complex human nature, it was counterproductive because of his lack of skills. For example, the squad leader who reversed himself into a pair of scissors seemed to reveal his true face at first glance, but upon closer inspection, it was clearly his friend who betrayed him first. Is there anything wrong with the squad leader's reversal and retaliation? And as an ordinary student, it is obviously not normal for him to not feel uneasy at all when his friend dies. Moreover, the author talks about the insidiousness and cunningness of this squad leader from beginning to end. He always says that he tricked his good friend to death, but it was clearly his friend who betrayed him first. It is really disgusting for no reason, so do those who survive have to bear all the mistakes? On the contrary, this made the monitor one-sided. The author should add a little description to make the transition. And the "honest guy" in the back who used force on girls, you are still honest even though you have a knife? There is something wrong with the logic. The portrayal of the protagonist is also strange. From the beginning, I felt that the protagonist was a wise but cold person, but later on, he was said to be soft-hearted and kind-hearted? ? I won't read this book again
Brother, you copied this, right? It's not complete.
It's rubbish. You charge money for just a dozen chapters, and you pay more than a dozen book coins for one chapter. You plagiarize from other books. It's really bad.
Alas, I can't afford to be hurt
After reading more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist is still a weakling and a holy mother. I get beaten up everywhere, but I still try to save others when I can't protect myself, so why should a girl leave first?
Well, I remember that there was a person whose mission was to have a relationship with a girl. He didn't say what the relationship was, and he could also accept her as his mother. . .
Chapter 46 and Chapter 47 cannot be connected.
The first person of all evil!
We are just a group of ordinary students, but we were dragged into a terrifying game because we grabbed a red envelope. In the game of death, we are constantly looking for opportunities to live and the reasons why we were chosen. We don't want to think that deeper mysteries are still waiting for us, and more fears are still coming...
