Doomsday War Commander

The book review I just wrote was swallowed. . . . The author thinks that some things about Pig's Foot's strength can be gradually improved, but it's boring too fast. Moreover, the women around the author's Pig's Foot are too poisonous. Don't write about those two sisters. They are too poisonous. Also, what are so many women doing in this book in only a few chapters? Is this the author's idea of ​​a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists? Can the author Pig Knuckle not take the lead every time? This is a commander, not a king of soldiers, okay? The biggest poisonous point of this book is the two sisters and the group of women. I am not saying that the two sisters are too ungrateful. It is too uncomfortable to read. Moreover, I feel that the sense of substitution is not enough. Don't escalate too quickly. Some of the biggest events are written slowly and it is over all at once. There is no feeling at all. It is because this book is too bland and does not express the tension of the end of the world. The story of the dialogue between the pig's trotters and the government is a bit cliche, and it doesn't make people's eyes shine. The author came up with some high-level battles so quickly, and it was easy to write about it in the later stage.

What you write like this is not a human evolver at all! They are all evolved from zombies!

Come on, four of the six cards every day are yours.