Divine Seal: Abandoned by Long Xingyu, Cai'er Depends on Each Other for Life
About This Novel
Traveling across the Holy Demon Continent, Long Xuanye became Long Haochen's twin brother. I thought that by finding Long Xingyu in advance, the two brothers could escape poverty. Long Xingyu believed from beginning to end that he and Long Haochen were the heirs of the Demon God Emperor and was extremely defensive. Long Xuanye silently took care of the young Long Haochen and the frail Bai Yue, enduring the humiliation and burden. When he was six years old, Long Xingyu believed that Long Xuanye had a complex mind and would become a hidden danger. He took Bai Yue and Long Haochen away at night, laid a monster trap, and vowed to eradicate Long Xuanye. Fortunately, Long Xuanye has a god-level selection system that has long been awakened. [Choice 1: Kill the monster and obtain the secret skill: Instant Step, innate inner spiritual power +2] He killed the monsters and kept dealing with those who were searching for his body in the Knights Temple, triggering system rewards and gradually increasing his innate spiritual power to 98 points! Until one day, the system prompted again. [Choice 1: Save the little beggar in front of you. Reward: The innate inner spiritual power reaches 100 points, and the inner spiritual power awakens. What little beggar could make the system give such a high reward? ? She is Sheng Caier! ? ... My name is Sheng Caier. After awakening and becoming the Saint of Reincarnation, I lost everything, including the care of my parents and the love of my relatives. Until I met someone in Odin Town. He tried his best to save me among the monsters and said: "We are all abandoned unfortunates, let's live together." ... Many years later. Long Haochen: Brother, are you not dead? But how can you be so strong? ? Long Xingyu: "Sheng Cai'er, you have to help Long Xuanye kill me! I'm the Divine Seal Knight!"
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Official(177)Scraped 5d ago
Do you have any suggestions for the protagonist's mount?
As I write this chapter today, I find that some people think that reconciliation with Long Xingyu is possible, but how is that possible? Before starting the book, all I was thinking about was the small twist in chapters 27 and 28. Then how to kill Long Xingyu. Just these two images. One is. Conflict in the protagonist's small home After going through difficulties, when it finally reaches perfection, it is reversed through the core events of this book. The other is the great justice of the human race. Long Xingyu has dark spots, but he is a responsible divine seal knight Because of the interesting plot. It was definitely not the protagonist who wanted to kill him, he deserved to be killed, so Long Xingyu died. The protagonist shouldn't be killed, there are countless resistances. But he did it anyway. Other plots are extended. Also, regarding the protagonist's mount, if you have any suggestions, please post them here. Because I didn't think about it at all when I actually started the book. What kind of mount should the protagonist set up? I even thought about how the protagonist would end up at the end, but I never thought about this issue.
If you don't know how to write, don't write. There are more than 200 pictures and they are still at the peak of level six. What do you think you are good for? Suppressing combat power, the rebel boy Go and be brothers with Tang San
Two-star limit. The early setting is a bit interesting and attractive, but later on there are too many poisonous points.
Poison point 1: The author's typical cloud, there are a lot of plot errors. According to the author himself, he has not read the original book at all. From the information collected from the bean bag, I don't understand. He is writing a fan without reading the original book? To a human-machine like Xin Doubao? This is a big poisonous point 2. The writing is poor. Writing a crushing battle can take several chapters, and the various reactions of passers-by are repeated back and forth, which is extremely disappointing. The protagonist and villain make a slight move and use the reaction of the people around them to boil the water, which is serious water injection. There is also the protagonist's operation, which is always subdued from time to time. It makes people feel that it does not seem to be tempered in life and death. It is just for the sake of the plot. 3. Pressure on combat power is still a problem of hard water. For the sake of water, the protagonist's combat power grows slowly in the middle period. He is the same person and it is not an original work. If the fandom wants to retain readers, it needs to have enough coolness and explosive points. Slow growth in combat power will bring about a serious drop in coolness. If you don't want to write something cool, you must have writing skills. The problem is that writing skills are not good either. 4. The protagonist's characterization is very indecisive when it comes to relationships, and he looks like a child with a glass heart, unlike a time traveler. Especially when I saw the protagonist preparing to return to the human race, I didn't see Cai'er because Cai'er was not in the team. The way the glass heart broke through the defense was really speechless. Is it difficult to see Cai'er after you become stronger? What kind of trouble is this breach of defense going to cause?
Very frustrated
The plot is okay, but it's all because the protagonist's personality is an enhanced version of the anti-inflammatory personality. He's disgusting when he likes to make trouble, and he's just looking for trouble. He just shows off his anger. Anyway, it's disgusting. And the relationship aspect is also a version of the anti-inflammatory. I just flirted and flirted with other women. Bullshit, but I still only love you, Xun'er (Cai'er). I'm very loyal, but I just don't know. Anyway, just like Xiaoyan, I like to be passive and not take the initiative. I should be able to read this book. The only difference is this. Generally speaking, I just don't like it. Protagonist's character
No, the author's fandom is too embarrassing, and it's really frustrating to watch, as if there's something wrong with it. The protagonist is just pure sb about feelings.
Special setting, mother-level Shengcaier
I have read both the book by Douluo and this one. Personally, I feel that the book by Shen Yin is more exciting. Sheng Cai'er, who wants to be the protagonist's mother, and Xuan Ye, who is bent on revenge, always have redemption in their hearts. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. There are too many character descriptions and psychological descriptions in this book. I personally feel that it is quite good. The character descriptions are very good. However, the updates are too slow, which makes the content and plot advance slowly. It makes readers feel like they are reading the descriptions of the characters. I still hope that the author will focus more on this book. I feel that this book has greater hope.
It's not a demon-killing system. Why not let the protagonist recognize the Demon God Emperor from the beginning?
Personally, I feel that a score of 7 is the limit of this book. It is too ugly and has too many poisonous points.
If it's a revenge story, it's best to go it alone. Just create some bonding in front of them so that they can have a deep impression on the protagonist. It's like writing a daily story now. I don't see any determination to take revenge for myself to become stronger.
Zhang Wei is a character who can write a character who is so compatible with the cuckold and the God of Doubt.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(177)Scraped 5d ago
Do you have any suggestions for the protagonist's mount?
As I write this chapter today, I find that some people think that reconciliation with Long Xingyu is possible, but how is that possible? Before starting the book, all I was thinking about was the small twist in chapters 27 and 28. Then how to kill Long Xingyu. Just these two images. One is. Conflict in the protagonist's small home After going through difficulties, when it finally reaches perfection, it is reversed through the core events of this book. The other is the great justice of the human race. Long Xingyu has dark spots, but he is a responsible divine seal knight Because of the interesting plot. It was definitely not the protagonist who wanted to kill him, he deserved to be killed, so Long Xingyu died. The protagonist shouldn't be killed, there are countless resistances. But he did it anyway. Other plots are extended. Also, regarding the protagonist's mount, if you have any suggestions, please post them here. Because I didn't think about it at all when I actually started the book. What kind of mount should the protagonist set up? I even thought about how the protagonist would end up at the end, but I never thought about this issue.
If you don't know how to write, don't write. There are more than 200 pictures and they are still at the peak of level six. What do you think you are good for? Suppressing combat power, the rebel boy Go and be brothers with Tang San
Two-star limit. The early setting is a bit interesting and attractive, but later on there are too many poisonous points.
Poison point 1: The author's typical cloud, there are a lot of plot errors. According to the author himself, he has not read the original book at all. From the information collected from the bean bag, I don't understand. He is writing a fan without reading the original book? To a human-machine like Xin Doubao? This is a big poisonous point 2. The writing is poor. Writing a crushing battle can take several chapters, and the various reactions of passers-by are repeated back and forth, which is extremely disappointing. The protagonist and villain make a slight move and use the reaction of the people around them to boil the water, which is serious water injection. There is also the protagonist's operation, which is always subdued from time to time. It makes people feel that it does not seem to be tempered in life and death. It is just for the sake of the plot. 3. Pressure on combat power is still a problem of hard water. For the sake of water, the protagonist's combat power grows slowly in the middle period. He is the same person and it is not an original work. If the fandom wants to retain readers, it needs to have enough coolness and explosive points. Slow growth in combat power will bring about a serious drop in coolness. If you don't want to write something cool, you must have writing skills. The problem is that writing skills are not good either. 4. The protagonist's characterization is very indecisive when it comes to relationships, and he looks like a child with a glass heart, unlike a time traveler. Especially when I saw the protagonist preparing to return to the human race, I didn't see Cai'er because Cai'er was not in the team. The way the glass heart broke through the defense was really speechless. Is it difficult to see Cai'er after you become stronger? What kind of trouble is this breach of defense going to cause?
Very frustrated
The plot is okay, but it's all because the protagonist's personality is an enhanced version of the anti-inflammatory personality. He's disgusting when he likes to make trouble, and he's just looking for trouble. He just shows off his anger. Anyway, it's disgusting. And the relationship aspect is also a version of the anti-inflammatory. I just flirted and flirted with other women. Bullshit, but I still only love you, Xun'er (Cai'er). I'm very loyal, but I just don't know. Anyway, just like Xiaoyan, I like to be passive and not take the initiative. I should be able to read this book. The only difference is this. Generally speaking, I just don't like it. Protagonist's character
No, the author's fandom is too embarrassing, and it's really frustrating to watch, as if there's something wrong with it. The protagonist is just pure sb about feelings.
Special setting, mother-level Shengcaier
I have read both the book by Douluo and this one. Personally, I feel that the book by Shen Yin is more exciting. Sheng Cai'er, who wants to be the protagonist's mother, and Xuan Ye, who is bent on revenge, always have redemption in their hearts. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. There are too many character descriptions and psychological descriptions in this book. I personally feel that it is quite good. The character descriptions are very good. However, the updates are too slow, which makes the content and plot advance slowly. It makes readers feel like they are reading the descriptions of the characters. I still hope that the author will focus more on this book. I feel that this book has greater hope.
It's not a demon-killing system. Why not let the protagonist recognize the Demon God Emperor from the beginning?
Personally, I feel that a score of 7 is the limit of this book. It is too ugly and has too many poisonous points.
If it's a revenge story, it's best to go it alone. Just create some bonding in front of them so that they can have a deep impression on the protagonist. It's like writing a daily story now. I don't see any determination to take revenge for myself to become stronger.
Zhang Wei is a character who can write a character who is so compatible with the cuckold and the God of Doubt.
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