Douluo: Martial Spirit Black Dragon, I Am the Lord of the Gods

I really recommend that the author change the title of the book to this 😓 You wrote a Douluo fanfic, and you also opened a black dragon sky with ability and appearance. If you don't take off, forget it. You have to upgrade rationally. I think everyone has their own way of writing, but I will use the content of your article combined with the introduction of the work to summarize the following points: 1. Twin top-level spirits at the beginning: "Special Black Dragon Spirit" + "Mutated Blood Spear Spirit". Twin martial souls are the symbol of top cheats among Douluo fans. They are given to two as soon as they come. It is also a mutated and enhanced version, and the starting point is directly full. 2. A classic adverse start, but then reverses immediately: "Being kidnapped at the beginning" creates conflicts, but "luckily escaping" means that the crisis is quickly resolved, including subsequent repeated kidnappings, which are all reversed immediately, and the aura of the protagonist begins to appear. 3. Get to know the key supporting characters: "On the run with Dugu Bo". Dugu Bo is an important character in the original work and possesses the treasure of "ice and fire eyes". There is also the ice and fire dragon king grandpa mode, as well as the yandere version of Bibi Dong, the arrogant Qian Renxue, the gentle A Rou, the lively Xiao Wu, the eldest sister Dugu Yan, the introverted Ye Lingling... The protagonist is directly bound to these characters of different levels, which is a typical "noble helper" ➕ "harem" feeling. 4. Exclusive core resources: "Acquire the inheritance of two dragon kings in the Ice and Fire Eyes". This is equivalent to directly inheriting the top hidden professions and a full set of magical equipment in the game, which is the key to a leap in strength. Like Yao Lao, these two dragon kings can also teach the protagonist to identify herbs, fairy grass, and make medicine pills, and they can also fight with their upper body. 5. Slap the authority of the original work in the face: · Yu Xiaogang (theoretic master) was slapped in the face when he questioned → Showing the "unknown power" of the protagonist's martial spirit. · The field of Qian Renxue (the descendant of the angel god) is suppressed → The "supreme" that demonstrates the protagonist's talent. · Tang Hao (the best soul master in the world) was compared with his hammer → Demonstrating the "indestructibility" of the protagonist's martial soul. ·There are also some famous scenes of crushing the male characters of the protagonist group, etc. These are all classic "trampling on famous celebrities" scenes. 6. Obtain ultimate recognition: Even the Silver Dragon King Gu Yuena (the current supreme leader of the Dragon Clan) believes that the protagonist has hope of "reappearing as the Dragon God". This is the "certification from the source of the bloodline", and it's cool to upgrade again. 7. Ending ceiling: "Beyond the God King and rule the God Realm". The goal is directly set at the peak of combat power in Douluo World, a standard "shuangwen" ending. The above introduction is combined with the content. The first sentence of your first chapter is: Not a cool article? ? ? I want to ask you what are you pretending to be? 🙄You just use romance routines to write it. You may think that as long as the protagonist is not at full level at the beginning and has some embarrassing experiences of being "on the run", it is called "non-splendid writing". But you ignored that the essence of Shuangwen is "protagonist centralism" and "instant satisfaction of wishes." When beauties, opportunities, and power all over the world fly towards the protagonist like being attracted by magnets, and all the strong characters in the original work make way for him or become stepping stones, this is the purest and most extreme cool novel, and it can even be said to be a YY novel.

The writing is quite delicate and the character of the protagonist has been established in the early stages. Black Dragon was also a passionate young man in his early days The character design should be reversed in the later stage. After more experience, it will definitely change. This book feels like it was written at the wrong time and in the wrong place. Nowadays, they are all mindless and cool articles, and the quality and quality of readers are getting worse and worse. If you don't have fun within five chapters, you'll curse and you won't be able to appreciate good works. I can only say it's sad. Come on, author, keep writing.

It is outrageous that a book can achieve such success in just one game. After reading a few chapters, you will find that there is no progress at all

Author, don't say that the heroine is Qian Renxue. I would rather the heroine be Tang San than Qian Renxue. The main reason is that Qian Renxue's early behavior in your novel is really disgusting (not that I hate Qian Renxue, but you Qian Renxue in this book feels that her own behavior is very annoying. As for Qian Renxue's early operations, if she can still be the heroine, she will be awesome, so in my opinion, the probability of Tang San being the heroine is higher than him))

I've read about 30 chapters in Qidian. Since it's not a cool novel or a harem, then you should publish a female channel on this subject? I dare say that readers of female channels will love reading it. As for why I say this, it's because your book is a bit like a Douluo version of a romance novel. The protagonist is invincible, reasonable and kind... And the audience is different If this book was placed in the female channel area, it would probably rank first on the list To be fair, there is almost nothing interesting about Douluo on female channels. This book of yours must have received rave reviews. It can even be said that readers of female channels dare not give negative reviews Because novels about romance on female channels, including this kind of non-invincible fandom, must be very popular

It's very frustrating. Basically, all the emotional lines are passively accepted, and how could Bibi Dong's strong character allow you to open a harem? Moreover, when the protagonist was first brought back to the Wuhun Hall, Bibi Dong had already started the divine examination. After knowing that the protagonist might join the Enshrinement Hall, How could that camp keep the protagonist alive? If you are a second-generation character, just pretend I didn't say it. There are already signs of stallion. All the people who have entered the team are from the harem. With Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, there are already 8, not to mention some others will be recruited later. Don't go back and accept the Ice Dragon King as well. The key is to give the protagonist an emotionally insensitive setting, only to end up being a stallion. This kind of portrait is really boring. There is also a decisive factor in killing. Real decisiveness in killing should not be to kill Qian Renxue when he develops, and then enter the killing city to develop. Qian Renxue has treated the protagonist like this before, and he can still be included in the harem. He is really invincible. The writing is very poor and I can't figure out how to get the 20,000 yuan reminder. I feel that the author is quite suitable to be the sadist of a female channel and passively accept feelings. He is a good writer for a female channel

Author, did you write the protagonist too well? Be more upright. If you write a little more upright, forget it, you still made the early stage so depressing. It was so unfortunate to write it. This is still the case in the later stages of writing. The rating will definitely be lowered. Personal advice. For reference only. I suggest the author make it a little more cheerful. It's always so depressing to write. Work and life are already very depressing. You also made the protagonist so unlucky and depressed. It's really hard to watch at the end. Also. Can we add more heroines? [Emot=default,01/]

The writing is okay, but the character design needs to be maintained later on. The character of the protagonist in this book is still very similar to the original Black Dragon Sky. The character design must be based on the character. If it is a female protagonist, it is best to have a single female protagonist. The image of a harem will be ruined. At present, Qian Renxue is recommended first. The speed of cultivation cannot be slowed down. As long as she maintains it, she will definitely become popular.

It's too abusive to the master, it makes my head hurt when I watch it, it's a bit unnatural, I keep arguing with Er Bidong and Qian Renxue, I don't understand what's the point, it's a bit unnatural😣😣😣😣

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