Douluo: Unparalleled Sword Immortal!
About This Novel
Ji Wushuang was adopted by the Wuhun Palace. On the day he awakened his Wuhun, the Wushuang Sword Box and Tianzhan came out together, and their sword energy was everywhere. Bibi Dong, who had become the Pope just a few years ago, fell in love with Ji Wushuang at first sight and accepted him as his disciple. Bibi Dong, who has lived a complicated life, feels more and more controlling as she sees her getting better and better and growing into a real man. Mental problems are gradually getting bigger, and there is a tendency to become a yandere. Ji Wushuang was helpless. Every time they met, Bibi Dong's eyes that wanted to "eat" him were always so creepy. "You don't blame me for leaving the Wuhun Hall, I just blame the teacher for being too scary..."----[Synchronized serial novel: Douluo: The Blue Silver Emperor at the beginning, but Tang Hao killed me,] [New book: Douluo: Chaotic Time and Space, Wuhun Ten Thousand Soul Banners]
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The protagonist feels a bit like a stallion.
Don't drive high and go low!
Currently, you are born with full soul power and twin martial souls, which is much better than those writers who suppress the innate soul power. Moreover, you also have sword control and country-breaking sword skills, which are all well written! The disadvantage is that your growth rate may be a bit low, 30% in the first round is really too low! Change it quickly! 50% Is more reasonable! And sometimes when readers give you suggestions, don't give them tit-for-tat. Basically, they don't scold you because they think your writing elsewhere is pretty good. Only those who plan to pursue books will give suggestions ^O^ Come on!
I'm still young now, it's time to work really hard, get up and work
The first part was pretty good, but after 100 chapters I let myself go.
The beginning of the game is quite interesting, with the emotions going back and forth, the structure of the system, the relationship between the characters, and some foreshadowing. Well, starting from Chapter 100, it is very sudden that the careless little Chu man transforms into a kidney seeder, and the head soup turns out to be Ling Yuan Douluo, who has no key scenes.
Current situation! Bye now
What the author said is not detailed. The more you read, the worse it gets. The first, middle, and later stages are pretty good, and the later stages are not good. No skills or anything is written clearly. There is no introduction to abilities. In the end, the writing becomes more and more ugly. Ji Wushuang·Super Divine Weapon. Shura Divine Sword-Nine Dragon Xuantian Divine Armor (Double Gods-Second Level God-God King. Shura God) The first martial spirit: Unparalleled Sword Box. Thirteen Swords: Yunshuo - Qingshuang - Fengxiao - Hongye - Butterfly - Jueying - Breaking the Tribulation - Killing - Jade Ruyi - Wrapped Finger Rou - Cang - Mang - Ming Suzaku • (God level) Soul ring: 1. Black 2. Black 3. Black 4. Black 5. Black 6. Black 7. Red 8. Red 9. Red gold Soul skills: 1. Attack 2. Thunder God Transformation 3. Instant Sword Shadow Streaming 4. Sky-Splitting Sword Wave 5. Break 6. Dark Demon Evil Thunder Sword Domain 7. Unparalleled True Body - Invincible Sword Domain 8. Realm Soul Sealing Whale Photography - Sword Shadow Whale Wave Broken Teeth 9. The second martial spirit: Sword of Heavenly Dao. Heavenly Slash Soul ring: 1. Blue gold 2. Red gold 3. Red 4. Red 5. Red 6. Red 7. Red 8. Red 9. Platinum Soul skills: 1. 2. Flame dragon roars through the sun 3. Breaking demons - God slaying 4. Breaking boundaries - slaying voids 5. Dao Sword Domain - Dao Judgment 6. Dark gold terror claws 7. Heavenly slayer true form - Dragon God's Claw 8. Emperor Sword - Emperor's Palm Soul bones: 1. Skull of the Holy Illusion Demon Ape (100,000 years) 2. Externally attached soul bones. Left and right metacarpal bones of the Titan Giant Ape 3. Left arm bone of the Ice Dragon King (one million years) 4. Right arm bone of the Fire Dragon King (one million years) 5. Right leg bone of the Blue Silver Emperor (100,000 years) 6. Attached soul bone. Eight Wings of the Dragon God 7. Left leg bone of the Evil Orca King (100,000 years) 8. Trunk soul bone of the Deep Sea Demonic Whale King (one million years) Soul bone skills: 1. Skull. Holy Spirit Magic Flash - Absolute Defense 2. Right Palm. Sky Destruction Kill Left Palm. Titan Defense 3. Left Arm Bone. Cold Ice Realm 4. Right Arm Bone. Dragon King Destruction Kill 5. Right Leg Bone. All Things (Domain) - Endless Life 6. Soul-attached Bone. Devouring Golden Thread 7. Left Leg Bone. Whale Blade Instant Cut - Demon Ax Special abilities: Unparalleled Sword Domain, Killing God Domain, Soul Core x3, Sword Controlling Technique - Kingdom Splitting Sword Technique - Sword Formation - Type Control Technique - Unparalleled Sword Technique, Nine Dragon King Spirits. Ice - Fire - Light - Darkness - Mountain - Time - Space - Golden Saint (Heavenly Sword. Sword Spirit) One Sword of Heaven and Earth Special treasures: Belt storage soul weapon, Ice and Fire Eyes all fairy grass, Blue Silver Emperor Ah Yin, Golden Eyes Black Dragon King torso soul bone, Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear left and right arm bones, External Terrorclaw soul bone Current heroines: 1. Bibi Dong (double first-level gods - Poseidon - God of Death - God level) 2. Ye Lingyuan (99) 3. Hu Liena (98) 4. Qianrenxue (first-level god - Angel God) 5. Zhu Zhuqing (65) 6. Ning Rongrong (64) 7. Liu Erlong (78) 8. Ye Lingling (66) 9. Bo Saixi (level 100) 10. Naer. Half Silver Dragon King (God King. God of Life) Heirs: Ji Youyue. Level 20 (Bibi Dong) Ji Jue (Liu Erlong)
It's time to get up and code. If your liver doesn't feel strong, just use your strength.
I hope there won't be any interruptions. It's very beautiful. Can the heroine have Bibi Dong? [Emot=default,14/]
Author, you'd better read the original soul ring increase!
At present, the increase of soul rings is obviously not up to the level of top martial arts, and you are almost absorbing soul rings beyond the limit. The reason why Ning Rongrong, the original author of the first ring, has an increase of 30% at more than 20 levels is because it can evolve, and the basic 10% is increased by 10% every ten levels! If your first soul ring is 50-100, it is just right. If your third soul ring is 100-300, then increase it by one or two if you think it is strong. If you have all attributes, 100% of the third soul ring is also suitable. Please don't stress on your combat power, don't stress on the increase in soul rings. Let me put it this way, people's lives are very depressing now. If you write a fan fiction, you can write dozens more chapters, but many people may leave after seeing that the first and second rings are suppressed by you. You will lose one-fourth or five-fifths of your readers invisibly. If you lose one-third of the readers later, do you still need to write?
Did you enjoy the review later on in this book? ?
Come on, come on, come on, update and update (all the beauties have been collected). Receive ([url=bn]Bo Saixi[/url])
Must accept: Bibi Dong, Hu Yuena, Ye Lingyuan, Qian Renxue Liu Erlong Zhu Zhuqing Zhu Zhuyun Ning Rongrong Xiao Wu Jiangzhu Bai Chenxiang Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, Zi Ji, Auspicious Beast, Bi Ji, Ah Yin, Gu Yuena, Xiao Bai, Sea Witch Dugu Yan Ye Lingling Ye Qingyi Shui Bing'er Shui Yue'er Xue Wu Yu Hairou Shen Liuyu Gu Qingbo Qiu Ruoshui Huo Wu Tang Yuehua The Princess of Tiandou Purple Pearl Ji Wushuang: Wushuang Sword Domain (Field) First Spirit: Wushuang Sword Box. Thirteen Swords (Level 83): 1 Cloud Shuttle 2 Qingshuang 3 Wind Flute 4 Red Leaves 5 Butterfly 6 Jueying 7 Breaking the Tribulation 8 Killing 9 Jade Ruyi 10 Winding Fingers 11 Cang 12 Vast 13 Ming Suzaku (Level 88) Soul Ring: 1. Purple 2. Purple 3. Black 4. Black 5. Black 6. Black 7. Red 8. Red Soul skills: 1. Attack 2. Thunder God Transformation 3. Instant Sword Shadow Streaming 4. Sky-Splitting Sword Wave 5. Break 6. Dark Demon Evil Thunder Sword Domain 7. Unparalleled True Body. Invincible Sword Domain 8. Realm Soul-Sealing Whale Photography. Sword Shadow Whale Wave Broken Teeth 9. Second martial spirit: Sword of Heavenly Dao. Heavenly Slash. Soul ring: 1. Blue gold 2. Red gold. Soul skill: 2. Flame dragon roars through the sun. Soul bones: 1. Holy Phantom Demon Ape. One hundred thousand year old skull 2. Externally attached soul bone. Titan Ape left and right metacarpal bones 3. Ice Dragon King. One million year old left arm bone 4. Fire Dragon King. One million year old right arm bone 5. Blue Silver Emperor. One hundred thousand year old right leg bone 6. Attached soul bone. Eight wings of Dragon God 7. Evil Killer Whale King. One hundred thousand year old left leg bone Soul bone skills: 1. Skull: Holy Spirit Magic Flash. Absolute Defense 2. Right Palm: Sky Destruction Kill Left Palm: Titan Defense 3. Left Arm Bone: Cold Ice Realm 4. Right Arm: Dragon King Destruction Kill 5. Right Leg Bone: All Things (Domain). Endless Life 6. Soul Bone: Devouring Golden Thread 7. Left Leg Bone: Whale Ge Instant Slash. Demonic Axe Special treasures: Kung Fu, Sword Controlling Technique, Kingdom-Splitting Sword Technique, Sword Formation, Type Control Method, Belt Storage Soul Weapon, Ice and Fire Eyes, All Immortals, Blue Silver Emperor Ah Yin Current heroines: 1. Bibi Dong (99) 2. Ye Lingyuan (92) 3. Hu Liena (66) 4. Qian Renxue (72) 5. Zhu Zhuqing (44) 6. Ning Rongrong (43) 7. Liu Erlong (78) 8. Ye Lingling Naer (Gu Yuena) (67) 9. Children: Ji Youyue Ji
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Official(257)Scraped 20d ago
The protagonist feels a bit like a stallion.
Don't drive high and go low!
Currently, you are born with full soul power and twin martial souls, which is much better than those writers who suppress the innate soul power. Moreover, you also have sword control and country-breaking sword skills, which are all well written! The disadvantage is that your growth rate may be a bit low, 30% in the first round is really too low! Change it quickly! 50% Is more reasonable! And sometimes when readers give you suggestions, don't give them tit-for-tat. Basically, they don't scold you because they think your writing elsewhere is pretty good. Only those who plan to pursue books will give suggestions ^O^ Come on!
I'm still young now, it's time to work really hard, get up and work
The first part was pretty good, but after 100 chapters I let myself go.
The beginning of the game is quite interesting, with the emotions going back and forth, the structure of the system, the relationship between the characters, and some foreshadowing. Well, starting from Chapter 100, it is very sudden that the careless little Chu man transforms into a kidney seeder, and the head soup turns out to be Ling Yuan Douluo, who has no key scenes.
Current situation! Bye now
What the author said is not detailed. The more you read, the worse it gets. The first, middle, and later stages are pretty good, and the later stages are not good. No skills or anything is written clearly. There is no introduction to abilities. In the end, the writing becomes more and more ugly. Ji Wushuang·Super Divine Weapon. Shura Divine Sword-Nine Dragon Xuantian Divine Armor (Double Gods-Second Level God-God King. Shura God) The first martial spirit: Unparalleled Sword Box. Thirteen Swords: Yunshuo - Qingshuang - Fengxiao - Hongye - Butterfly - Jueying - Breaking the Tribulation - Killing - Jade Ruyi - Wrapped Finger Rou - Cang - Mang - Ming Suzaku • (God level) Soul ring: 1. Black 2. Black 3. Black 4. Black 5. Black 6. Black 7. Red 8. Red 9. Red gold Soul skills: 1. Attack 2. Thunder God Transformation 3. Instant Sword Shadow Streaming 4. Sky-Splitting Sword Wave 5. Break 6. Dark Demon Evil Thunder Sword Domain 7. Unparalleled True Body - Invincible Sword Domain 8. Realm Soul Sealing Whale Photography - Sword Shadow Whale Wave Broken Teeth 9. The second martial spirit: Sword of Heavenly Dao. Heavenly Slash Soul ring: 1. Blue gold 2. Red gold 3. Red 4. Red 5. Red 6. Red 7. Red 8. Red 9. Platinum Soul skills: 1. 2. Flame dragon roars through the sun 3. Breaking demons - God slaying 4. Breaking boundaries - slaying voids 5. Dao Sword Domain - Dao Judgment 6. Dark gold terror claws 7. Heavenly slayer true form - Dragon God's Claw 8. Emperor Sword - Emperor's Palm Soul bones: 1. Skull of the Holy Illusion Demon Ape (100,000 years) 2. Externally attached soul bones. Left and right metacarpal bones of the Titan Giant Ape 3. Left arm bone of the Ice Dragon King (one million years) 4. Right arm bone of the Fire Dragon King (one million years) 5. Right leg bone of the Blue Silver Emperor (100,000 years) 6. Attached soul bone. Eight Wings of the Dragon God 7. Left leg bone of the Evil Orca King (100,000 years) 8. Trunk soul bone of the Deep Sea Demonic Whale King (one million years) Soul bone skills: 1. Skull. Holy Spirit Magic Flash - Absolute Defense 2. Right Palm. Sky Destruction Kill Left Palm. Titan Defense 3. Left Arm Bone. Cold Ice Realm 4. Right Arm Bone. Dragon King Destruction Kill 5. Right Leg Bone. All Things (Domain) - Endless Life 6. Soul-attached Bone. Devouring Golden Thread 7. Left Leg Bone. Whale Blade Instant Cut - Demon Ax Special abilities: Unparalleled Sword Domain, Killing God Domain, Soul Core x3, Sword Controlling Technique - Kingdom Splitting Sword Technique - Sword Formation - Type Control Technique - Unparalleled Sword Technique, Nine Dragon King Spirits. Ice - Fire - Light - Darkness - Mountain - Time - Space - Golden Saint (Heavenly Sword. Sword Spirit) One Sword of Heaven and Earth Special treasures: Belt storage soul weapon, Ice and Fire Eyes all fairy grass, Blue Silver Emperor Ah Yin, Golden Eyes Black Dragon King torso soul bone, Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear left and right arm bones, External Terrorclaw soul bone Current heroines: 1. Bibi Dong (double first-level gods - Poseidon - God of Death - God level) 2. Ye Lingyuan (99) 3. Hu Liena (98) 4. Qianrenxue (first-level god - Angel God) 5. Zhu Zhuqing (65) 6. Ning Rongrong (64) 7. Liu Erlong (78) 8. Ye Lingling (66) 9. Bo Saixi (level 100) 10. Naer. Half Silver Dragon King (God King. God of Life) Heirs: Ji Youyue. Level 20 (Bibi Dong) Ji Jue (Liu Erlong)
It's time to get up and code. If your liver doesn't feel strong, just use your strength.
I hope there won't be any interruptions. It's very beautiful. Can the heroine have Bibi Dong? [Emot=default,14/]
Author, you'd better read the original soul ring increase!
At present, the increase of soul rings is obviously not up to the level of top martial arts, and you are almost absorbing soul rings beyond the limit. The reason why Ning Rongrong, the original author of the first ring, has an increase of 30% at more than 20 levels is because it can evolve, and the basic 10% is increased by 10% every ten levels! If your first soul ring is 50-100, it is just right. If your third soul ring is 100-300, then increase it by one or two if you think it is strong. If you have all attributes, 100% of the third soul ring is also suitable. Please don't stress on your combat power, don't stress on the increase in soul rings. Let me put it this way, people's lives are very depressing now. If you write a fan fiction, you can write dozens more chapters, but many people may leave after seeing that the first and second rings are suppressed by you. You will lose one-fourth or five-fifths of your readers invisibly. If you lose one-third of the readers later, do you still need to write?
Did you enjoy the review later on in this book? ?
Come on, come on, come on, update and update (all the beauties have been collected). Receive ([url=bn]Bo Saixi[/url])
Must accept: Bibi Dong, Hu Yuena, Ye Lingyuan, Qian Renxue Liu Erlong Zhu Zhuqing Zhu Zhuyun Ning Rongrong Xiao Wu Jiangzhu Bai Chenxiang Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, Zi Ji, Auspicious Beast, Bi Ji, Ah Yin, Gu Yuena, Xiao Bai, Sea Witch Dugu Yan Ye Lingling Ye Qingyi Shui Bing'er Shui Yue'er Xue Wu Yu Hairou Shen Liuyu Gu Qingbo Qiu Ruoshui Huo Wu Tang Yuehua The Princess of Tiandou Purple Pearl Ji Wushuang: Wushuang Sword Domain (Field) First Spirit: Wushuang Sword Box. Thirteen Swords (Level 83): 1 Cloud Shuttle 2 Qingshuang 3 Wind Flute 4 Red Leaves 5 Butterfly 6 Jueying 7 Breaking the Tribulation 8 Killing 9 Jade Ruyi 10 Winding Fingers 11 Cang 12 Vast 13 Ming Suzaku (Level 88) Soul Ring: 1. Purple 2. Purple 3. Black 4. Black 5. Black 6. Black 7. Red 8. Red Soul skills: 1. Attack 2. Thunder God Transformation 3. Instant Sword Shadow Streaming 4. Sky-Splitting Sword Wave 5. Break 6. Dark Demon Evil Thunder Sword Domain 7. Unparalleled True Body. Invincible Sword Domain 8. Realm Soul-Sealing Whale Photography. Sword Shadow Whale Wave Broken Teeth 9. Second martial spirit: Sword of Heavenly Dao. Heavenly Slash. Soul ring: 1. Blue gold 2. Red gold. Soul skill: 2. Flame dragon roars through the sun. Soul bones: 1. Holy Phantom Demon Ape. One hundred thousand year old skull 2. Externally attached soul bone. Titan Ape left and right metacarpal bones 3. Ice Dragon King. One million year old left arm bone 4. Fire Dragon King. One million year old right arm bone 5. Blue Silver Emperor. One hundred thousand year old right leg bone 6. Attached soul bone. Eight wings of Dragon God 7. Evil Killer Whale King. One hundred thousand year old left leg bone Soul bone skills: 1. Skull: Holy Spirit Magic Flash. Absolute Defense 2. Right Palm: Sky Destruction Kill Left Palm: Titan Defense 3. Left Arm Bone: Cold Ice Realm 4. Right Arm: Dragon King Destruction Kill 5. Right Leg Bone: All Things (Domain). Endless Life 6. Soul Bone: Devouring Golden Thread 7. Left Leg Bone: Whale Ge Instant Slash. Demonic Axe Special treasures: Kung Fu, Sword Controlling Technique, Kingdom-Splitting Sword Technique, Sword Formation, Type Control Method, Belt Storage Soul Weapon, Ice and Fire Eyes, All Immortals, Blue Silver Emperor Ah Yin Current heroines: 1. Bibi Dong (99) 2. Ye Lingyuan (92) 3. Hu Liena (66) 4. Qian Renxue (72) 5. Zhu Zhuqing (44) 6. Ning Rongrong (43) 7. Liu Erlong (78) 8. Ye Lingling Naer (Gu Yuena) (67) 9. Children: Ji Youyue Ji
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