Versatile Mage: Hell Starts, but the Eight Demons

Check it out with a trumpet, I'm disgusted by this

The writing is getting more and more disgusting, just like that kind of Dragon King novel. The protagonist is so awesome, he gets so angry that he bleeds like a river, and no one dies in the end. Anyone can step on the protagonist. I was slandered by this and insulted by that, and then a woman came and persuaded me to forget it. There will be no next time.

As expected, he is the author of The Eight Demons at the Beginning. He has the same problem. There is too much nonsense. It is all psychological description and all kinds of inexplicable logical nonsense. I have no idea what the author wants to express. Can't the writing be more straightforward? There was very little fun in it. I was ridiculed in various ways, and then I forgot about it. I also had to brag about how powerful the protagonist was in the third person for no reason, but the whole text didn't show it at all. Just like the book about the Eight Demons at the beginning, I probably couldn't finish it halfway through. It was all kinds of psychological activities, and the journey in my mind made me wonder what I was reading. Is this a fan novel or a literary youth novel written by someone?

It's okay at the beginning, but why does it get worse the more you write at the end? In the face of absolute force, why would you want a forbidden curse to scare you? Especially the conversation with Old Man Bao after the end of Hangzhou was even more outrageous. You, an uncontrollable and dangerous person, want to make others afraid to kill you with a Sharon? Are you more important than Wen Tai? Although Mo Fan is arrogant and awesome, he will explode at the slightest disagreement, but he has weaknesses and most of them are for his own woman to act truthfully. The protagonist will definitely be defined as the Black Church in a situation like Hangzhou that threatens the lives of civilians, let alone being brought up by Sharon.

The first part is very good, but the second part is like a coward. I really liked Tang Yue, but the author made a mess and it made me sick.

Don't look at the author's female channel. It's equivalent to an 800,000-strong army. King Qin's rescue is just for justice. It's disgusting for others and it's disgusting for yourself.

The male protagonist is a pure eunuch, but he also likes to pick up girls, but he doesn't use it. He is the kind of guy who just occupies the toilet and doesn't shit. He doesn't allow the girls he picks up to sleep with him, and makes her have no sexual desire if she wants to sleep with him.

Your logic in writing novels is not suitable for fan fiction with a small worldview. I suggest you write about the world of immortality, perfect, covering the sky, or three-body. In particular, perfection is very suitable for your so-called rational logic. The foreign world inside is like the three-body star in the three-body world, and the primitive ancient world is like the earth. The setting of the alien world is the product of darkness. They are very afraid of the liquidation of darkness, so they invade and destroy many ancient worlds. Among them, the pitfalls written by Chen Dong are flawed. The alien world is a bit afraid of darkness. Then the original ancient world and the fairyland dare not face the alien world alone, and even combined together cannot defeat the alien world. The reason why the alien world is not completely wiped out is because they are afraid that they will be disabled after defeating them. And there is such a huge disparity in strength between the two sides. Some of the Immortal Kings of those people from the primitive ancient world even went to Jiehai to talk about how to pacify the darkness. What's even more ridiculous is that you can't defeat the darkness in foreign lands, so you go to fight the darkness that foreign lands are afraid of. Then Liu Shen also said that if I was in Jiutian at that time, I might not be like this now. Then there was the trap of Yun Xi. When Shi Hao was caught, you didn't think of a way to save him. You just stood by and waited until his cultivation level was almost gone. You were thinking of going to the lower world with him. I read the novel and thought that the Celestials deliberately let Yun Xi spy on him. My classmates and I all had a strong opinion of Yun Xi. Then Yue Chan also gave me the feeling that her clone would not have interacted with Shi Hao if it were not for survival. I feel that she is just using her. She is mindlessly thinking about becoming an immortal and other things are not important at all, or that she can undress others in order to become an immortal. Fighting Nine Heavens in a foreign land is similar to the setting of Three-Body Problem. In the Law of the Dark Forest, I will destroy you for better survival and resources. And the Dark Corpse Ancestor pushed the novel to a climax. They all said that darkness is unknown and hinders the Holy Spirits from becoming immortals. In fact, I feel that without the Dark Heavens, the Holy Spirits would still fight each other. The Perfect World and the Three-Body Novel have many common arguments. Cultivation and development are inseparable from resources. However, many of the Holy Spirits in the Perfect World will stand for all living beings. If you really want to do it for all living beings, just stop practicing. After practicing, you can use your magical powers to kill enemies and compete for resources with each other. Without cultivation, Holy Spirits will be like the animal world, and the survival of the fittest will be the same as the natural selection of the fittest. Including the protagonists, all of them are righteous. He banished immortals and killed 100,000 geniuses in three thousand states. Almost no one said that cultivating immortals depends on strength and you will die if you don't have strength. Those from foreign lands who also killed Jiutian complained that foreign lands were too bad. Liu Shen said that she went to the assessment in order to avoid those innocent creatures from evil disasters, but what is innocence in her eyes? Some of the intelligent ferocious beasts that Shi Hao killed were weak and had not yet started to do evil. Even if they did evil for the sake of survival, were they not innocent? After watching Perfect, I feel that the Immortal Realm has more of a charm. What it says is that you from another world came to destroy me, so I have to resist and I kill you just to be powerful and obtain resources. I don't want to be a chess piece. There is no self-movement and it is very rational. I feel that the author's logic or ability to refute is very applicable to Perfect World. As for The Three-Body Problem in the Immortal Realm, the outrageous operations of the characters in it can only be criticized but not the setting of the novel. It is equivalent to the kind of outrageous characters but not the novel.

You have a few completed books, and they are basically all bad at the end. The more you write, the worse they get and you go crazy at every turn. Do you feel good about going crazy?

Damn it, you are the author. The protagonist of the book you wrote before is the same as a fucking child, and the black dragon. They are the same. They have been withdrawn. They have been withdrawn. The emotional description is too complicated.