In the World of Machine Girls, the School Beauty Teacher is Going to Heaven

Any ideas and suggestions are welcome to comment. Your support is the greatest encouragement to the author.

Finished scattering flowers! Thanks for your continued companionship! Xiaojiu, bow ninety degrees to thank you. The new book will probably be released in a week or half a month, and it is the work of [Zhan Ji Ji Niang Lei]. There are some similarities to this one, but many differences. [I will learn from Monster 8, Blue, National Team, Pacific Rim, etc.] Xiaojiu will summarize the errors in writing and setting, and improve it with everyone's opinions. And collect a lot of information and pictures. Let the next book of mechanical armor weapons be more professional, the settings more interesting, and the pictures richer. If you like Xiaojiu's works, please look for my pen name, and stay tuned, Aligado 3Q Smecta!

Two hundred thousand words. Thank you to those who like this book for their support. I won't list all the rewards and monthly ticket recommendations one by one. I bow and thank you.

The European author wrote something that made me feel good. The structure is also very good. So far, there are no flaws. The only thing I am sure is that there are too few and it is not enough. It is very uncomfortable to read

First of all, I kneel down and bow to thank the many readers for their support. Some people like a book and some hate it. Some people say it is a classic and some people say it... It's all normal. Novels are all these routines. Later, I learned how to illustrate, and started to add pictures to many places in the text. I was speechless when talking about AI when I saw it. I typed it word by word. I read the chapter reviews and book reviews every day. If the writing is not good or smooth, someone will say that they will correct it immediately. Some will reply. It is also said that the most 23 is V. This can only be explained. This is the book of creation. The rule there is fifty thousand plus V. Click here to find the channel. It is based on the rules. Xiaojiu can only bow and apologize, and finally kneels down on the spiral again to thank for the support.

I just asked you if you can update it? Do I need you to pay for this?

Writing a novel is full of language errors, the writing style is embarrassing, the subject matter is not new, and the plot is cliché. How can you still get such a high score?

The order is Qinglong Niang, White Tiger Niang, Suzaku Niang, Xuanwu Niang

This is the third month after finishing the book. I saw many readers reading and reading the book twice and three times. I was very moved. I also read it myself. I will start to correct the broken sentences, illogical words, and typos that everyone responded to this book every day. Because I am busy working on new books, I don't have much time to revise every day. Everyone is welcome to correct mistakes. I will read it every day. The milk tea reward for correcting mistakes in this book is still valid. A 90-degree bow of thanks. No matter what the income is, having readers like it is the greatest support for the author.

I took a look, it's not bad, but there are some problems 1. Sentence segmentation problems often occur, which greatly affects the reading experience. I suspect it is due to voice input. 2. The routine is repetitive, and wherever the protagonist goes, something will happen. Suggestion: The protagonist should go where he knows something is going to happen. He should be proactive in pursuing danger, rather than passively. 3. The plot is redundant. If you want to add new characters, don't always write about competitions. In games, the protagonist must win, and the game has nothing new. Suggestion: Change it to battle, promotion and daily life. Even if you want to be addicted, daily life is enough for you. Write some warm and sweet daily love stories that most people like to read. Daily can be written in the last leisure before the battle and the summary after the battle to buffer it. I have written so much, I hope the author can read it. After three days of chasing, I am almost tied. During this period, the problem of repeated routines was really serious. I could have tied it in two days, but when I saw the title, something happened again where the protagonist is, so I quit decisively and would wait for a few hours before coming back to read. But this is risky. I have never come back to read many novels after quitting them. This is how I ended up with hundreds of books on my bookshelf.