Versatile Mage: Starting Contract with Huangheilong

The emotional line is the same as that of Shi, and the characters are not well developed, and they also like to change the settings randomly. Jiang Yu has reached the middle level at the age of 16. You are so awesome. The government is still the middle level after almost 5 years. Is he a waste? Chapter 16 is even more sb-worthy. People who like to abuse their masters and make them disgusting should not write about Huang Hei Long. It looks disgusting.

Come on author, is there Irene as the heroine?

Has Mo Fan ever helped the protagonist? Instead of taking away the heroine, he also gave the dragon beast shares to help. It's too licking . I really can't stand it after reading the latest chapter. The setting of this book is obviously my favorite. There's nothing wrong with you not wanting to accept Mu Ningxue and Xinxia, ​​but you shouldn't use your own resources to help Mo Fan chase women. The relationship is really not that good. From the beginning to now, the protagonist has been helping various people. Even in the beginning, it was the protagonist who came to be friends with Mo Fan. I'm quite convinced.

It's not this book. The results are as bad as this. The author is still writing. Such a perseverance spirit is still worth learning. This book has absolutely no nutritional value at all, and it is a waste of time to read it. It is better to cut it up and write it again, learn from the lessons of this book, write the next one, and avoid these poisonous points.

It's good because the protagonist in Chapter 16 is too frustrated and feels a bit like Tian Ding Yumian. People are so easy to talk to you when they use spiritual magic on you. A full-time mage deserves to be killed when he uses magic on others in the wild. And no one would give her a good look if others spy on her thoughts. I hope the protagonist can be tougher and stop licking like this.

The writing of your dragon contract feels a bit long, and it is boring for people who don't know Monster Hunter World. It seems that the focus is a bit wrong. Since you write the whole law, then the people who read it will know the whole law to some extent, but your Goldfinger Monster Hunter World definitely does not know the whole law. This will cause certain reading difficulties. Just like I have read all the parts of the law before, but starting from the preparation of the second dragon of the contract, I just flipped through the table of contents and had no desire to read it (this is just my personal feeling)

Come on, do your best, the author hopes to see you on the new book list!

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Who are the heroines of the author? Could you please tell me?

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