Rebirth of Northern Technology

I have admired three men, one is Xu Xian, the other is Dong Yong, and the third is Ning Caichen. One dares to sleep with a snake, another dares to sleep with a fairy, and the last one doesn't even let go of ghosts. It wasn't until I watched Hua Qiangu that I realized that Luo Shiyi was a real man who dared to sleep with a caterpillar. The most despised thing is Sun Wukong, who immobilized seven fairies and went to steal peaches, but I have to admire Sun Wukong's father for being able to conceive a child with a stone! Some people said that my experience was low, so I went up and slapped me, T Mom, D, isn't that nonsense? How can I upgrade if I don't have good experience? I have experience in writing comments, and I need experience to upgrade, so I copied these words and commented every day. After I finished the review, I flashed. I'm just here to earn experience.

The sea! You are a fool. It took more than 30 chapters to publish a paper, and it took hundreds of chapters to produce results. I feel that this is not like a novel, but like a composition. You can make a thing as long as possible. I thought it was a scientific article! To earn your first pot of gold, you have to get hundreds of chapters of water. How deep the water is. The sea! You are a piece of water. Ah! Endless water.

The ending and beginning of some articles are completely disconnected. However, the author says at the beginning of the article that it is an introduction, an introduction to the characters, plot and background. The background of each character introduced by the author street is really very good, but each chapter cannot be connected at all and cannot be integrated. You can't put one ring within another Some suggestions for the author: the background introduction of each character should not be too detailed or too detailed, which completely takes up the protagonist's role. I hope the author will continue to write well. The introduction is well written. Come on!

It's not like a rebirth novel. Instead, it's a fantasy record. Inside it and outside it. The writing is not great. The plot is pale and empty. It should be said to be a narrative of the history of science and technology. Personal history, autobiography. It's still an autobiography of a character without any sense of life.

The author forcibly builds a team, but the rhythm is not good and the thinking is wrong. If they don't want money, fame, fortune, or anything else, then the number of readers who enjoy the points and ratings will naturally be very low. For example, in the beginning, papers that the protagonist did not participate in later were not signed, which is normal, but the paper of the protagonist's first author was only translated into Chinese, and the protagonist's name was not included? Don't understand the logic Then there is the money, thesis bonus, how much can the protagonist get? This is the tone. Do you understand what the rules are? Once you start, you can't take it back. The small money in the front is distributed randomly and the ratio is fixed. Why do you change the ratio of the big money in the back? If you really change it, then the kindness of the small money in the past will be gone. Don't you ever think about why other authors start making money? Look at other people's scores

The most important thing about a novel is the sense of immersion, but this book has a very poor sense of immersion! First of all, I feel that the protagonist has not fully integrated into this era and world. Secondly, the author always reminds readers that "the protagonist is a middle-aged man." As soon as he has a sense of immersion, the author will refresh his sense of presence and remind you that "the protagonist is a middle-aged man who time-traveled", which is very confusing. The most important thing is the heroine (I just read more than 50 chapters and I still don't know if she is the heroine). A thousand people have a thousand people's aesthetics. What is the advantage between novels and TV? It's imagination! I can completely substitute my favorite goddess, but the author came to enhance her presence at this time. "The heroine looks like Gong Li." Although I don't hate Gong Li, I can't like her at all. It's better not to describe her appearance in detail. Moreover, after more than 50 chapters, it has not yet fully adapted to this era and world. After only a few chapters, I felt a strong sense of separation. It is really not as strong as the general sense of immersion in a refreshing novel.

Looking at the introduction, I have read a hundred chapters. There is no serious scientific research, but a bunch of trivial matters. Isn't this a scientific article? It's a crappy thesis. Friends join, professors join, classmates join, graduate students join, all kinds of paper signatures, what the heck, no wonder the score is so low, it's like a diary assembly line

I looked at a dozen of them and didn't understand what they were writing.

I can't hold on, the plot is too slow, a giant in thought, a dwarf in action, this won't work, that won't work either

The subject matter is good and the content is also good. Do you know why the collection is so low? It's because you talk too much. You talk a lot of nonsense about a trivial matter. It's like a rat droppings ruining a pot of porridge. If you leave it, it's a pot of rat droppings and a grain of rice.