With the System in the World of Detective Conan
by When Comes Wonderful Sound Buddha
About This Novel
The protagonist Liao Quan brings the system to the world of City Hunter and Detective Conan comics. Because of the arrival of the protagonist, many things will change. All kinds of tragedies will be rewritten because of the protagonist (farming, cultivation, and elixirs, etc. Will be added later). I'm a newbie, please support me.
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Official(62)Scraped 4d ago
I write novels just for fun, and I am not very good at writing in the early stage.
As mentioned above, I am a novice in writing, and I didn't even know how to segment at first. The writing style at the back is a little better than the first. If you want to read it, read it. I don't have money to write novels. If you don't like it, can you please stop writing those offensive words?
Halfway through the movie, I felt like the main character was too arrogant.
The protagonist is too arrogant and the system points are too easy to earn and the cheating is too much. Are you asking this question of being invincible?
I really like watching it... If you don't update it, I'll let the tiger bite you!
Come on! I think the author will get better and better as he gets older
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To be honest, your writing is not very good. I didn't pay attention to the paragraphing in the previous part, just like a primary school student writing a diary (similar to keeping a running account) There is no need to say or think about what the characters say in the book. It feels very awkward and almost makes no sense. Of course, this does not mean that your work is not good. No one can definitely criticize the hard work of every author. I'm just pointing out the shortcomings of this work. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Although I don't know if the author reads the comments, but I have something to say, keep up the good work
What was the monitor used by the author in the later period?
Is she the protagonist's girlfriend? I want to ask, Koizumi Hongzi's mother's ability is so awesome, damn, it should be weakened. He can only advance part of the future, otherwise it would be too speechless, right?
The writing is okay, but can the heroine be replaced by Xiao Ai? Under Emperor Ai
Can it be updated every day in the future?
Rubbish
I wrote it well in the early stage, but I felt like vomiting in the later stage.
suggestion
The author should change the first few pictures. I didn't want to read the first few pictures. He kept talking about the word count. Forget about it, it was also streamlined. It's like a primary school student taking notes. Alas
Give you a suggestion
Author, you either need to start a new book, or you can follow the plot of Conan closely, with all kinds of pretense and slapstick cases, as well as the plot of City Hunter and the plot of Conan's Black Organization. Then I feel that if you want to have a harem yourself, then you need to write emotional scenes. It's written like an emotional drama in an urban novel. In the end, of course, all kinds of evil tricks on Conan are inevitable. In fact, regarding the black organization, the author can be the operator behind the scenes, allowing the black organization and the FBI to interfere with each other.
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Official(62)Scraped 4d ago
I write novels just for fun, and I am not very good at writing in the early stage.
As mentioned above, I am a novice in writing, and I didn't even know how to segment at first. The writing style at the back is a little better than the first. If you want to read it, read it. I don't have money to write novels. If you don't like it, can you please stop writing those offensive words?
Halfway through the movie, I felt like the main character was too arrogant.
The protagonist is too arrogant and the system points are too easy to earn and the cheating is too much. Are you asking this question of being invincible?
I really like watching it... If you don't update it, I'll let the tiger bite you!
Come on! I think the author will get better and better as he gets older
...
To be honest, your writing is not very good. I didn't pay attention to the paragraphing in the previous part, just like a primary school student writing a diary (similar to keeping a running account) There is no need to say or think about what the characters say in the book. It feels very awkward and almost makes no sense. Of course, this does not mean that your work is not good. No one can definitely criticize the hard work of every author. I'm just pointing out the shortcomings of this work. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Although I don't know if the author reads the comments, but I have something to say, keep up the good work
What was the monitor used by the author in the later period?
Is she the protagonist's girlfriend? I want to ask, Koizumi Hongzi's mother's ability is so awesome, damn, it should be weakened. He can only advance part of the future, otherwise it would be too speechless, right?
The writing is okay, but can the heroine be replaced by Xiao Ai? Under Emperor Ai
Can it be updated every day in the future?
Rubbish
I wrote it well in the early stage, but I felt like vomiting in the later stage.
suggestion
The author should change the first few pictures. I didn't want to read the first few pictures. He kept talking about the word count. Forget about it, it was also streamlined. It's like a primary school student taking notes. Alas
Give you a suggestion
Author, you either need to start a new book, or you can follow the plot of Conan closely, with all kinds of pretense and slapstick cases, as well as the plot of City Hunter and the plot of Conan's Black Organization. Then I feel that if you want to have a harem yourself, then you need to write emotional scenes. It's written like an emotional drama in an urban novel. In the end, of course, all kinds of evil tricks on Conan are inevitable. In fact, regarding the black organization, the author can be the operator behind the scenes, allowing the black organization and the FBI to interfere with each other.
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