My Beast Control Training Plan
by Poetic Sheep
About This Novel
When I wake up, the world becomes a different place. This is a magical world of beast control. Origin Contest, Eight Regions, Big Ranking, Time and Space Battle... In the world of beast control, Li Xingrou treats every extraordinary life seriously with sincerity. Many partners gradually gathered around her. ......... The golden-tailed monkey who unexpectedly mastered time skills Healing ice water attribute frost turtle Military ants that master unlimited phagocytosis of evolved cells... Li Xingrou thought her experience was a passionate story Unexpectedly, it was a relief? Favor each other? Warm A story about bonding and exploring the unknown world with partners...
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Official(6)Scraped 15d ago
The imaginative setting is very good, but the writing style is not very good, and the description tone is a bit childish.
book review suggestions
After reading three chapters, I can't stand it anymore, so I'm here to comment: 1. No matter how powerful the heroine's talent is, you don't have to show all your settings at once. You can show it bit by bit. You write it out at once. They are all novice tasks guided by the elf. Just like a game, you can't skip it. It will make people dazzled. For a while, they don't know what you have written. In the end, you can conclude that the heroine's talent is very powerful, and you don't have a metaphor for what is so great. For example, talents with multiple contract slots can play two against one, and evolution talents can allow pets to use resources to quickly evolve, thereby achieving what effect. 2. Awakening a talent. Luo Li talked a lot with the part-time college student, and finally (seemed to) reached an agreement to be admitted to that university. Then the college student lamented the cuteness of the heroine (seemed like)? To be honest, he didn't get it. 3. The heroine's personality is not very likable (should it be?), She is a bit narcissistic, more narcissistic than the average person. She is studying her awakening talent before the contract is signed (it seems that she was still visiting the breeding house at that time), and then she is happy there.
Beast-controlling beast-controlling beast-controlling essay, I want to cheer up＾0＾~
When will the author update? I've been waiting for several days and still no update! Urgent update! ! ! ! ! !
Like 😍
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo more updates for you, I will keep up with the updates every day.
The author writes very well, I look forward to the following plot, keep it up (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎)
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Official(6)Scraped 15d ago
The imaginative setting is very good, but the writing style is not very good, and the description tone is a bit childish.
book review suggestions
After reading three chapters, I can't stand it anymore, so I'm here to comment: 1. No matter how powerful the heroine's talent is, you don't have to show all your settings at once. You can show it bit by bit. You write it out at once. They are all novice tasks guided by the elf. Just like a game, you can't skip it. It will make people dazzled. For a while, they don't know what you have written. In the end, you can conclude that the heroine's talent is very powerful, and you don't have a metaphor for what is so great. For example, talents with multiple contract slots can play two against one, and evolution talents can allow pets to use resources to quickly evolve, thereby achieving what effect. 2. Awakening a talent. Luo Li talked a lot with the part-time college student, and finally (seemed to) reached an agreement to be admitted to that university. Then the college student lamented the cuteness of the heroine (seemed like)? To be honest, he didn't get it. 3. The heroine's personality is not very likable (should it be?), She is a bit narcissistic, more narcissistic than the average person. She is studying her awakening talent before the contract is signed (it seems that she was still visiting the breeding house at that time), and then she is happy there.
Beast-controlling beast-controlling beast-controlling essay, I want to cheer up＾0＾~
When will the author update? I've been waiting for several days and still no update! Urgent update! ! ! ! ! !
Like 😍
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo more updates for you, I will keep up with the updates every day.
The author writes very well, I look forward to the following plot, keep it up (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎)
