
Mystery: Order and Disorder
by The Bright Moon Hidden In The Clouds
About This Novel
"Secret" fan. I watched Lord of Mysteries twice and found a lot of uncomfortable moments. "The Guardian", "The Faceless Man of Time", "She's a Person", "Some Things Are Above Others" Maybe Squid is right, tragedy is destroying beautiful things for people to see. But I couldn't calm down. Ps: I am a newbie writing, and I am definitely not as experienced as Cuiyu in all aspects. Please give me more advice.
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Official(10)Scraped 11d ago
Sorry, I'll quit first
Some reasons why I quit 1. Give Audrey the magic potion prematurely and take her into the extraordinary world. And the dog of fantasy is gone. (Audrey didn't see the dog of fantasy until after she took the medicine, and I didn't see it afterward, so I don't know.) 2. The author's writing style is okay, but for some things, he is a little eager to get things done. The mouse at the beginning can be a simple summary. 3. I personally don't like to watch it. The protagonist interferes with the early plot decisions of Mystery before he is incapable. Xiao Ke needs to grow up quickly. In the early days, Old Neil and the captain all played a role in promoting the story, and their effect was very large. The captain's death even interfered with the promotion of mystic. Not to mention 0-8 If there is really too much interference and Xiaoke is gone, Tianzun descends and the end comes, Amon, will you take the lead👀? What makes it difficult to write a mysterious fanfic is not only the hugeness of his world view, but also the fact that there are too many threads in the protagonist Xiao Ke. In the later stage, it was okay, but in the early stage, I just wanted to stay away from it as much as possible.
If it only becomes Sequence 2, it's better not to write it.
If you become Sequence Two, you will be settled immediately. If you don't become the old days, you might as well just change the protagonist if you want to write some mysterious fan fiction.
Long live
Long live Miss Audrey, woo woo woo heroine, after watching many events in sequence, the audience will be able to recognize the shortcomings of human beings, and will accept the protagonist, and Earl Hall also intends to bring them together, and the protagonist's father died for Earl Hall, and the protagonist is the youngest viscount.
It won't support sequence two, right? Aren't the Great Old Ones delicious?
I hope the protagonist is ambitious and doesn't stop at Sequence 2. He needs to be in the old days to get started.
No, buddy, what about the oath making in Chapter 27? A slave oath? How is this possible in a western setting. It should be something like "xxx hereby swears to regard the king as the supreme lord in this life and will never violate the laws of the kingdom." How could it be possible to obey all leaders as the author wrote and violate the slave contract of being disposed of by others? What people call my vassal is not my vassal.
Don't think about changing anything
These are all tests for Mr. Ke
Carol's original character? Ahhh
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I still want to tell the author, can I not kill Lao Huang? My personal suggestion is to do this: either turn into a judge, or you can resurrect Lao Huang first, and then let Xiao Ke steal the uniqueness and other things, and then promote the protagonist. Klein is a semi-pillar after all, so it shouldn't be difficult to cleanse the contamination of the other 3/7 pillar (the Mother Goddess has no essence, so her strength should only be this much, or maybe even less), right?
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Official(10)Scraped 11d ago
Sorry, I'll quit first
Some reasons why I quit 1. Give Audrey the magic potion prematurely and take her into the extraordinary world. And the dog of fantasy is gone. (Audrey didn't see the dog of fantasy until after she took the medicine, and I didn't see it afterward, so I don't know.) 2. The author's writing style is okay, but for some things, he is a little eager to get things done. The mouse at the beginning can be a simple summary. 3. I personally don't like to watch it. The protagonist interferes with the early plot decisions of Mystery before he is incapable. Xiao Ke needs to grow up quickly. In the early days, Old Neil and the captain all played a role in promoting the story, and their effect was very large. The captain's death even interfered with the promotion of mystic. Not to mention 0-8 If there is really too much interference and Xiaoke is gone, Tianzun descends and the end comes, Amon, will you take the lead👀? What makes it difficult to write a mysterious fanfic is not only the hugeness of his world view, but also the fact that there are too many threads in the protagonist Xiao Ke. In the later stage, it was okay, but in the early stage, I just wanted to stay away from it as much as possible.
If it only becomes Sequence 2, it's better not to write it.
If you become Sequence Two, you will be settled immediately. If you don't become the old days, you might as well just change the protagonist if you want to write some mysterious fan fiction.
Long live
Long live Miss Audrey, woo woo woo heroine, after watching many events in sequence, the audience will be able to recognize the shortcomings of human beings, and will accept the protagonist, and Earl Hall also intends to bring them together, and the protagonist's father died for Earl Hall, and the protagonist is the youngest viscount.
It won't support sequence two, right? Aren't the Great Old Ones delicious?
I hope the protagonist is ambitious and doesn't stop at Sequence 2. He needs to be in the old days to get started.
No, buddy, what about the oath making in Chapter 27? A slave oath? How is this possible in a western setting. It should be something like "xxx hereby swears to regard the king as the supreme lord in this life and will never violate the laws of the kingdom." How could it be possible to obey all leaders as the author wrote and violate the slave contract of being disposed of by others? What people call my vassal is not my vassal.
Don't think about changing anything
These are all tests for Mr. Ke
Carol's original character? Ahhh
How to vote for recommendation?
Say thank you
a suggestion
I still want to tell the author, can I not kill Lao Huang? My personal suggestion is to do this: either turn into a judge, or you can resurrect Lao Huang first, and then let Xiao Ke steal the uniqueness and other things, and then promote the protagonist. Klein is a semi-pillar after all, so it shouldn't be difficult to cleanse the contamination of the other 3/7 pillar (the Mother Goddess has no essence, so her strength should only be this much, or maybe even less), right?















