List of Strange Things

Author, you don't mean that your writing is lacking in writing style, nor does it mean that there is no plot. It's just that your writing is very messy, you know. What you wrote before is really confusing. Many people said they didn't understand it. It's not because they are stupid, but because you, the author, are out of touch. You are too out of touch! It's not like I haven't written novels before, but reading one like yours makes me very tired as a reader. You are like an inspiration in your brain. If you don't catch it one moment, it will be gone the next moment. The article is written like going to the market. Some things are obviously meant to be cut into a new natural paragraph, but you didn't cut them off. As a result, when I read it, I read it in succession, and I felt that this sentence was not logically correct, you know. It's not that what you think is wrong, what you think in your mind is right, but if you put this sentence in a natural paragraph and you don't cut it, it will be easy for others to read the sentences before and after the natural paragraph together. You know, this is very difficult to do. I sometimes can't understand it. The first thing is about traveling through the world, and you jump a lot. It's messy, you know? The first world is a Western one, and then you inserted another one into it, saying that you have entered a world of immortality. Forget it, then another world popped up, um, okay, I accepted it Then he collected five marks and ran out to a new world. In that world, Mr. Yan and a neighbor woman appeared. You have calculated how many worlds there are. If you have written so many worlds, how many chapters have you written so far? If you don't want to read it yourself, I told you seven chapters, so you wrote seven chapters, and you gave me seven chapters, and you gave me four world views. Although they were all explained very briefly, the problem is that readers sometimes can't jump to it, and you only talk about a little bit of each world, which can easily make people's logic confusing. You know, you are the author yourself, so of course you don't feel good about yourself, but when readers read it, they will think that what you wrote is bullshit. As for the explanation, there isn't much explanation. The author's words at the back don't explain much either. It's too hasty. You're too hasty. I would say this is the easiest point to eliminate in the early stage of this book. If 1,000 people read your book, I estimate that only ten will read your book. Only people who are interested in this book or have no books to read will read your book. First of all, your writing style is not bad. I didn't feel anything after reading the whole story. Secondly, the plot is not logically written. The IQ is just above the line. In terms of language, it feels okay. There are relatively few descriptions of facial expressions and psychology. It is difficult for people to guess the psychology of the protagonist. I feel that the protagonist is very tall and awesome, but I don't know why he is so confident. Anyway, it's up to you, the author, to change it or not. I just feel a little speechless and want to say a few words. I will still read it. I will continue to read it from Chapter 7 to see how you explain it. I can't stand it anymore, so I'll give it up. There are so many trees in the forest anyway, I can't catch just one tree.

Starting from Chapter 18, this novel finally shows its due charm. The premise is that you must understand everything in front of it, otherwise you will get a weird novel that you cannot understand at all. This novel is very interesting. I can only say that people who understand it feel that this book is at least a high-quality product. Come on, author, I will order it all!

Is the monthly ticket in the author's QQ reading useful to you?

I don't understand. Can you be more normal? I can read roughly classical Chinese. It makes my head hurt to read it, but I still give you a thumbs up. Maybe this style is not suitable for me.

Restraining, strange, startling, creating, changing, dark, unique

Not bad, not bad. When I saw the latest chapter, there were both devious ways to cultivate immortality and science fiction civilization. The elements are diverse but not confusing. The writing is interesting and the author will update soon.

Damn it, I don't understand it. Can anyone explain it?

The writing is good and the world view is quite interesting. It's just that the handling of some plots is a bit stiff and cliche, and some of the character settings are embarrassing. It is recommended to directly establish a persona of a seeker and follow the cold flow route without emotion or ambiguity. At the same time, you can focus on adding some anti-routine elements, which may be more popular.

There is a reason for the low rating. The most important thing about a novel is the beginning. Many novels have an explanation at the beginning, such as how the protagonist came to be, or a sentence and a paragraph that can connect the previous and the following. The author didn't explain anything and just told the story directly.

The master of time and space who is free from the long river of time and travels between worlds, the giant python that controls the forest, and the eye in the skull that controls knowledge and the power of Tahoe.