[World-class from the Neck Down] A Collection of Graded Recommendations for High-quality Online ArticlesProject establishment demonstration: T3 level. Work tags: Steampunk, Cthulhu, Official Organization Gambit, Resurrection of Goldfinger, Western Fantasy.
Rating:
A. The background setting and painting style are compatible and harmonious, and the extraordinary system is mysterious and systematic;
B. The integrity cannot be evaluated temporarily;
C. The author's plot rhythm and text expression are both bonus points.
A brief review in one sentence: realistic steampunk, a Western fantasy novel with a strong sense of mystery and measurement.
1. Introduction
Langdon traveled to a world in the steam age.
This is a prosperous era - the flag of the empire is flapping in the morning mist, and the difference engine is calculating the glory of reason...
This is also a time when madness breeds - the man in the mirror begins to whisper, dreams erode at the edge of reality, legendary angels descend into the world...
Reason and miracles go hand in hand, and prosperity and disaster coexist.
Langdon Lorenzo, a new agent of the Department of Abnormal Affairs, a good citizen of Trisus, and a living sealed artifact.
Facing the ancient god who wanted to drag the world into the abyss, Langdon helplessly stood up from the pool of blood for the nth time.
"How about you try to kill me again? What if I really die this time?"
2. Plot, characters and writing level
The protagonist traveled through time and became a sealed object contained by the official paranormal control agency. After the cultists failed to steal it, it was discovered by the officials. After passing the review, he joined the official paranormal control agency. Goldfinger has high inspiration and resurrection abilities that can communicate with the sealed object.
Not much can be seen in the character creation yet, but the characters with relatively large roles are relatively solid. So far, the characters should not be a deductible for this book.
The author's writing ability is worthy of praise, the plot unfolds with a sense of narration, and the description of extraordinary scenes is quite graphic.
3. Highlights
First of all, the opening scene of the book is well played. The protagonist starts as a sealed object that has been stolen but is undoubtedly a relatively novel idea. The subsequent description of the spirit sea also shows the author's strength in expressiveness. Secondly, the content of the book is quite solid. The background, settings, characters, and plot all show a considerable degree of harmony and solidity. You can feel that this is indeed a carefully conceived and prepared book. The story is not just a toy that just throws away the beginning; thirdly, the author controls the rhythm of the plot reasonably, and does not introduce an overly large plot at the beginning to test the readers' patience, and advances the plot by connecting small plots in several chapters; finally, the extraordinary sketches in the book are more brilliant, showing the author's imagination and accumulation of materials in mysterious and magical aspects.
4. Questions
① The protagonist's ideas and abilities are relatively close to those of ordinary people, and some choices and processing methods are slightly flawed. Some readers who prefer perfect protagonists may have some negative experiences;
②The current plot lacks enough impactful breaking points, and the overall story line is slightly dull;
③ There is still room for improvement in details, such as the lack of distinction in the name of the organizational hierarchy.
