The Alchemist's Life-saving Method

Although the writing is okay, I felt that most of the content was in the clouds. The extraordinary setting was very confusing. I couldn't tell what abilities the protagonist had when he was promoted to extraordinary. After reading dozens of chapters, ordinary extraordinary people did nothing at all, and I was really confused.

For example, when watching a mecha series, we usually only pay attention to the plot and look at the appearance of the mecha. Then the screenwriter of this series actually used most of the space to describe the functions of the operation buttons in detail, giving me a feeling that if I can remember it, I can do it even if I travel back in time 😂. Someone in the comment section said that the author excerpted this from the game? Most players won't care about the background story of the hero you play, or the descriptions of the firearms in Peace Elite? The live broadcast is also about teaching playing methods and showing off operations. So this novel is indeed written in a niche style. Only the first volume is this abstract introduction? It's too niche, or the author is too deliberately screening readers. How many people can persist until they finish reading the free chapters😂 Or maybe they plan to go the recommended-only route like Stinky Tofu Durian. Ordinary people can't get close to stinky tofu stalls, nor can they accept the price of durian. They can only get enthusiastic recommendations from generous and reliable good friends.

It can be said to be a very standard esoteric novel. I may have read less and played less. In total, I have played the esoteric simulator and the Book of Sichen for less than 100 hours. Although I have little experience, I just feel that this book is inexplicably standard. It is the kind of feeling that others also write esoteric novels, but they just can't write the author's version. It's not that people can't write it, it's that it's not standard, and I feel that this book is very standard. I may have read less of it, but I just feel that it is standard and very standardized. Although the first volume was confusing to read, it's not too confusing. It's probably still readable. It's just that some of the parts in it are too Riddler-esque and boring, because they are all sentences that the author excerpted from the game's commentary. The esoteric-style sentences are very Riddler-esque. After you put them in more (the author has insisted on putting them in, then you can continue to put them in. I think this thing is turnip greens) Everyone has their own preferences, you have put it in for so long, there must be some people who like it, not all of them are fans. Since you have persisted for so long, then keep going down and put it in, it is good), although the information on the golden finger panel is basically displayed as a carrier, but I still feel very speechless. It is the kind of feeling that I look at in confusion and feel very high-end, but in fact I don't understand what the specific meaning is. It can't be said that the author doesn't explain, because once this kind of thing needs to be explained, there are a lot of things that can be explained, but if you explain a lot of things, the previous plot will be incoherent. I can understand it, and then adding these, I can feel that it is powerful, but I am not willing to give up. I can also understand, so there is a little contradiction, but overall it is very standard, and this is true. I don't know how to put it, it's quite a niche book, but I think that although this book is niche, it doesn't mean that the author is very good. I think if the author switches to another niche, he can write very well. However, after changing to a niche niche, the audience is smaller, resulting in fewer people reading this book. That's about it. It feels pretty good. It's a high-quality esoteric novel. To put it bluntly, I think if this book can be filled with 2 million words, it can basically be said to be the esoteric novel in the starting point. I think it ranks among the top three. Although I still think this book can be regarded as the first. There are few written in the esoteric genre. Among such high-purity novels, I really think this one is the first.

At that time, I thought you were going to die when I saw that you were suffering from laziness caused by rest. I didn't expect that you were still writing after stumbling. To be honest, I will accept your book on esoteric teachings. Now I have no expectations for other people's esoteric teachings. It's all up to you. You must write well, even if you write slowly, it doesn't matter.

I can't understand the settings-- As the title states, many readers have recently reported that the setting of this book is relatively obscure and concentrated, making it difficult to understand it well. I can only express this. Is my problem. Because of the difference in perspective and foundation, I have taken it for granted that some content throws out settings, which is more difficult for newcomers to understand. Therefore, I would like to ask book friends who have doubts and confusion about the setting of this book to leave comments in the text or express their opinions here. As long as their comments are reasonable, I will take them into consideration for revision and help this book become better. Here, thank you in advance for your valuable comments. Above

Although my criticism was a bit harsh and I only said that it was very standard, I still silently bought this book for free with the gift coins.

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As mentioned, I have sorted out some of the settings that do not involve spoilers, and will post them when they are sorted out.

The novel system has its own set of logic and its own endogenous relationships, but it is also absurd and uninhibited in its external performance. Occasionally, it can show a sense of grand narrative in just a few words. It is really addictive, but it can be controlled. There are very few people who can write it well. There are only a few who can truly show such charm. It is difficult to write well, even more difficult to write well, and it is not easy to write for a long time. It is a really interesting genre. For now, I think this book is really good and powerful. Of course, the author occasionally falls into a state of over-exporting information, which is not good because there are only so many words in one chapter. Too much settings and information will be filled in it. It makes people feel boring, and I can understand it. After all, the Tantra flow does have a lot of settings. If you don't spread the settings, you will definitely be confused later, but alas, this is a kind of balance that is difficult to coordinate. It is not easy to compromise between the amount of information and the smooth reading experience.

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