
Sherlock Holmes
by Magic Melon
About This Novel
God is creating a legend! ! ! ! ! We need a little faith to give people a backbone, and some man-eating demons to make the big guys fight! Add a little love... Add a little hate... Rebellion, and impulsiveness. Finally, a familiar protagonist is inserted, and his personality needs to be a little dark, otherwise it will be boring. Grass... Too much! ... So, in an alley on the street in London, Sherlock slowly walked out of the shadows with his head in hand, blood dripping down his spine on the ground, tick, tick, tick. Great, now the killer has been solved. The next problem is to prove that the murderer is the murderer.
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Official(125)Scraped 25d ago
I'm disappointed that this book didn't reach the heights it could have.
The early plot really has the potential to become a god. I haven't seen a novel that was so refreshing to me in a long time. However, starting from the plot of the Academy of Sciences, the plot began to turn to repetitive and meaningless foreshadowing, and the plot progress was also slow and flat. It began to create an omnipotent protagonist image, and repeatedly suppressed the supporting characters to set off the protagonist's image. From the beginning to the end, it seems that the early and middle stages are written by the same person, as if they were written by different people. The early stage is a bold, innovative and thoughtful potential work of the Gods, while the middle and later stages are a trick-or-treating novel trying to disguise itself as a masterpiece with profound thoughts.
Not pretty, a bunch of girls
I didn't open it much, but a bunch of women popped up in front of me out of nowhere. There were probably more female leads. I moistened it first.
Mogua, do you really know what your readers want to see?
The novel world view and character settings in the early stage are indeed very attractive and are a rare masterpiece. Take a look at what you have written recently. They are pretentious for the sake of pretense, dragging out plots, and dragging out suspense again and again - human patience has its limits, and not everyone will like this kind of suspense designed to whet their appetite repeatedly. The character of Sherlock Holmes is not one of pretentiousness for the sake of pretense. It is more fitting for the character to be neat, rational and calm. In these dozens of chapters, the repeated supporting role of Rabbi as the villain contrasts with Sherlock Holmes' nb; the constant micro-manipulation shocks the supporting characters. This method is enough two or three times. How about you look at how many times you have been fooled in these dozens of chapters. The current protagonist is like a pig-eating tiger pretending to be a criminal with a layer of Sherlock Holmes' skin. The routines of Xiaobai's novels cannot match Sherlock Holmes, so the content updated every day is bland and the characters are distorted.
Open high and go low
The plot drags on more and more as we go to the end, and I always like to use unnecessary pretentious plots to increase the number of words. The most important thing is that I came here to watch Sherlock Holmes, not to watch a 2B young man with the name of Sherlock Holmes become the military god Long Aotian in a different world.
boring
It's quite boring. The only setting that interests me is the spread of tentacles. The theme of Holy Light and Hell is too old. I don't think it's a tribute to the classic plot of Jiake. Sheng Love Day and the Yi family heir's coming-of-age dance, Sherlock and Xu Le, Watson and Shi Qinghai, St. The source of Zi and Yi, a rather long similar plot, "The bad news is that the stitching monster has sewn all the good news." This is the author's own confusing statement. Sewing is not old wine in new bottles. In the name of Sherlock Holmes, the reasoning ability is repeatedly emphasized, but the logic is not there. It drags down the supporting roles and is quite boring.
It was attractive in the early stage, but was it replaced in the mid-term?
The author superimposed so many "abilities" on the protagonist that he neglected to shape his own reasoning ability. What's worse is the frequent use of bad one-time NPCs, and the methods of looking down, thinking they are related, shocking, and reversing to set off the protagonist's routine. It once made me wonder if this was a novel from ten years ago. Secondly, the villain is very shallow. Frame, groundless, say you are a criminal, you are a criminal, direct assassination, explicit killing, if failed, then accuse the protagonist of murder and continue to slander. Brother, what you write about is an extraordinary world of reasoning ability! How do you solve this routine for the protagonist? Use reasoning? The other party is clearly slanderous and won't listen to you. They just want to take the protagonist away and kill him somewhere. With extraordinary abilities? The villain's official identity makes killing his lackeys only more trouble. So our protagonist can only wait aggrievedly for his friends from the Holy See to resolve the matter. Why can't he win over some vested interests that conflict with the emperor? Why can't we spread public opinion? You spent the night collecting demons in hell, and the next day you were blocked outside the factory and listened to others spraying feces. The madman who came to kill you, knocked him unconscious and threw you there to wait for him to wake up. Are you worse than a holy mother? Facing the traffickers from the debt collection company who had no backing, I struck hard, and I defeated the powerful villain killer who was in place and then let him recover while he recovered. Aggrievance is the general tone of this book. It is obvious that the author wanted to write a story about the turning point of the changing times, but the result was a kind of officialdom drama mixed with extraordinary elements. Disappointed, very disappointed
I can only say that it's pretty good, but the plot is a bit boring, and it's not much different from fighting monsters and upgrading.
Feel
After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel a little strange and slightly disgusted [I have read several books by Zhu Fei Gua, and I came to read this time after seeing him open a new book]. Overall, the reading is good, but I am not sure why I wrote about beautiful girls [maybe I just got disgusted by a book that made my favorite character girlish, and the feeling continues. I will read this book later, I will purify it before coming back]
Before Chapter 140, there is indeed the potential to become a god, but after Chapter 140, especially in the Life Science Academy section, the perception drops sharply, the plot is dragging, the characters are witty, and the routines are old-fashioned. It does not reflect the strength of the veteran author at all. In other words, the author's strength has always been more than the previous one, but not as good as the previous one. The beginning is amazing, the middle is dull, and the ending is hasty.
The starting salary level is the best, but the zombies become serious later on.
The research chapter on boots is worth reading, but the standard dropped seriously after that, and the Academy of Life Sciences collapsed when I wrote about it. It is also understandable that the author's anger at this point should have been sucked out by the contract demon. The ability to write self-contradictory chapters and imitate humans as much as possible is almost the limit.
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Official(125)Scraped 25d ago
I'm disappointed that this book didn't reach the heights it could have.
The early plot really has the potential to become a god. I haven't seen a novel that was so refreshing to me in a long time. However, starting from the plot of the Academy of Sciences, the plot began to turn to repetitive and meaningless foreshadowing, and the plot progress was also slow and flat. It began to create an omnipotent protagonist image, and repeatedly suppressed the supporting characters to set off the protagonist's image. From the beginning to the end, it seems that the early and middle stages are written by the same person, as if they were written by different people. The early stage is a bold, innovative and thoughtful potential work of the Gods, while the middle and later stages are a trick-or-treating novel trying to disguise itself as a masterpiece with profound thoughts.
Not pretty, a bunch of girls
I didn't open it much, but a bunch of women popped up in front of me out of nowhere. There were probably more female leads. I moistened it first.
Mogua, do you really know what your readers want to see?
The novel world view and character settings in the early stage are indeed very attractive and are a rare masterpiece. Take a look at what you have written recently. They are pretentious for the sake of pretense, dragging out plots, and dragging out suspense again and again - human patience has its limits, and not everyone will like this kind of suspense designed to whet their appetite repeatedly. The character of Sherlock Holmes is not one of pretentiousness for the sake of pretense. It is more fitting for the character to be neat, rational and calm. In these dozens of chapters, the repeated supporting role of Rabbi as the villain contrasts with Sherlock Holmes' nb; the constant micro-manipulation shocks the supporting characters. This method is enough two or three times. How about you look at how many times you have been fooled in these dozens of chapters. The current protagonist is like a pig-eating tiger pretending to be a criminal with a layer of Sherlock Holmes' skin. The routines of Xiaobai's novels cannot match Sherlock Holmes, so the content updated every day is bland and the characters are distorted.
Open high and go low
The plot drags on more and more as we go to the end, and I always like to use unnecessary pretentious plots to increase the number of words. The most important thing is that I came here to watch Sherlock Holmes, not to watch a 2B young man with the name of Sherlock Holmes become the military god Long Aotian in a different world.
boring
It's quite boring. The only setting that interests me is the spread of tentacles. The theme of Holy Light and Hell is too old. I don't think it's a tribute to the classic plot of Jiake. Sheng Love Day and the Yi family heir's coming-of-age dance, Sherlock and Xu Le, Watson and Shi Qinghai, St. The source of Zi and Yi, a rather long similar plot, "The bad news is that the stitching monster has sewn all the good news." This is the author's own confusing statement. Sewing is not old wine in new bottles. In the name of Sherlock Holmes, the reasoning ability is repeatedly emphasized, but the logic is not there. It drags down the supporting roles and is quite boring.
It was attractive in the early stage, but was it replaced in the mid-term?
The author superimposed so many "abilities" on the protagonist that he neglected to shape his own reasoning ability. What's worse is the frequent use of bad one-time NPCs, and the methods of looking down, thinking they are related, shocking, and reversing to set off the protagonist's routine. It once made me wonder if this was a novel from ten years ago. Secondly, the villain is very shallow. Frame, groundless, say you are a criminal, you are a criminal, direct assassination, explicit killing, if failed, then accuse the protagonist of murder and continue to slander. Brother, what you write about is an extraordinary world of reasoning ability! How do you solve this routine for the protagonist? Use reasoning? The other party is clearly slanderous and won't listen to you. They just want to take the protagonist away and kill him somewhere. With extraordinary abilities? The villain's official identity makes killing his lackeys only more trouble. So our protagonist can only wait aggrievedly for his friends from the Holy See to resolve the matter. Why can't he win over some vested interests that conflict with the emperor? Why can't we spread public opinion? You spent the night collecting demons in hell, and the next day you were blocked outside the factory and listened to others spraying feces. The madman who came to kill you, knocked him unconscious and threw you there to wait for him to wake up. Are you worse than a holy mother? Facing the traffickers from the debt collection company who had no backing, I struck hard, and I defeated the powerful villain killer who was in place and then let him recover while he recovered. Aggrievance is the general tone of this book. It is obvious that the author wanted to write a story about the turning point of the changing times, but the result was a kind of officialdom drama mixed with extraordinary elements. Disappointed, very disappointed
I can only say that it's pretty good, but the plot is a bit boring, and it's not much different from fighting monsters and upgrading.
Feel
After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel a little strange and slightly disgusted [I have read several books by Zhu Fei Gua, and I came to read this time after seeing him open a new book]. Overall, the reading is good, but I am not sure why I wrote about beautiful girls [maybe I just got disgusted by a book that made my favorite character girlish, and the feeling continues. I will read this book later, I will purify it before coming back]
Before Chapter 140, there is indeed the potential to become a god, but after Chapter 140, especially in the Life Science Academy section, the perception drops sharply, the plot is dragging, the characters are witty, and the routines are old-fashioned. It does not reflect the strength of the veteran author at all. In other words, the author's strength has always been more than the previous one, but not as good as the previous one. The beginning is amazing, the middle is dull, and the ending is hasty.
The starting salary level is the best, but the zombies become serious later on.
The research chapter on boots is worth reading, but the standard dropped seriously after that, and the Academy of Life Sciences collapsed when I wrote about it. It is also understandable that the author's anger at this point should have been sucked out by the contract demon. The ability to write self-contradictory chapters and imitate humans as much as possible is almost the limit.
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God is creating a legend!!!! Let people have some faith so that they have a backbone; add some man-eating demons so that the big guys can fight! Add some love... Add... Rebellion, and impulsiveness. Finally, a familiar protagonist is inserted, and his personality needs to be a little bit dark, otherwise it will be boring. ..... Too much ... So, in an alley on the street in London, Sherlock slowly walked out of the shadows with his head in hand, blood dripping down his spine on the ground, tick, tick, tick. Great, now the killer has been solved. The next problem is to prove that the murderer is the murderer.


I had read it recommended on a book recommendation post before, and I felt good about it after reading it. Fantasy. In the parallel world of the Victorian era, everything changed due to the invasion of demons. Contractors who conquered demons and signed contracts to gain power to fight against the demon army emerged and became superiors. A new system emerged in which class was determined by extraordinary power. The protagonist with a mysterious origin earns a living by working as a detective and is involved in internal cases within the church. He is rewarded for saving an old priest and a nun with a profound background and becomes a contractor. Why read this book: The victorian era with the invasion of demons, the combination of extraordinary power + reasoning, looks interesting. To be honest, although it is called Sherlock Holmes, it is actually a rip-off. In essence, apart from the "reasoning" and the namesake, it basically has nothing to do with a famous detective, but it just suits my taste. I personally don't like to use certain famous characters as the protagonists, because the characters of famous characters are solidified. Once the character is not written well and the image in the reader's mind is not the same, it will be quite embarrassing, so it is better not to write it. The pretentious plot at the beginning is well written and has a bit of a fantasy flavor. Why not read this book: To be honest, judging from the pretentious plot and the title of the book at the beginning, I thought it was a pretentious article about the invincible flow of the game Big Devil, but I didn't expect to find out later that it was an upgrade article starting from scratch. I wonder if it will collapse later. Generally speaking, between grain and grass-to grain and grass, the evaluation will be revised depending on the situation in the future.




❀S❀ [Detective Grammar] A weird detective in a foggy London that has been invaded by demons. The plot is very good. Plot ★★★★★☆ Settings ★★★★★☆ Character ★★★★★☆




Dark version of Sherlock Holmes Extraordinary contractor, demonic invasion, the Holy See of mankind's hope, a man coming with a blood-soaked suitcase, claiming to be a detective. At the beginning, there was a case similar to Jack the Ripper, with bloody scenes, broken chambers, and the visual sense was immediately full. What is dark aesthetics... I love it! ! The style of this book is very direct, and I hope I won't write about Beng and eunuchs in the future. Food and grass (temporarily, the author must hold steady)













