Zongwu: Qixia Town Storytelling, Huang Rong Reverses It!

None of the story-telling novels tells a story on the theme. They are all ranked in various rankings and they always expose others' backgrounds. If they are beautiful women, they will stick to them. After decades of cultivation, have they become stupid? Is the protagonist the only one who is smart? The big guys are just like fools who dare not take action.

There are so many typos, and storytelling is the main line. When I go in and take a look, it's all rambling!

Sigh... I only watched it because of Huang Rong. The character design is terrible. The martial arts setting is also terrible. The plot is not very creative... And there are many changes. It is not credible to make a martial arts ranking. There are many magical skills left out. The three-point return vitality has been released. There are a lot of magical skills in Fengyun World that cannot be released. The author's understanding of the settings in martial arts is very poor... There are too many thorns for people who love to watch martial arts...

You're talking nonsense, you're talking nonsense, even one star is superfluous

The idea is good, but don't spend too much time in the novels we are familiar with. If you tell a story, just tell a story, and if you sell information, sell intelligence. There is no need to write so much about the well-known Qiao Feng bridge section. The six major factions besieging Guangmingding is none of your business. There are many ways to write hydrology. Things that everyone knows are not so attractive if they are written repeatedly. You can sit in Tongfu Inn and make more people think you are mysterious. If you have seen Tongfu Inn, you should know the plot inside. There are so many episodes where everything does not happen inside the inn. There is no need to go outside. Write this, write that, and your force value. If you don't know the specific value, you can search and accumulate some knowledge. To be honest, there is no comparison between the martial arts worlds such as Tianlong, Shooting Condor, Divine Condor Yitian, etc., And the immortal martial arts worlds such as Mingyue and Fengyun in the Qin Dynasty. Let's first understand the meaning of these worlds. For the power system, make a TXT document and sort it out bit by bit. Writing a novel is not as easy as you think. If you do your homework well in advance, you can first appear in the martial arts world, and then package the martial arts world into an island version. After writing the mainland version, you can also add the fairy version. Another thing is that others think that you, a storyteller, know everything, but when something happens to you, you are confused and ask others, which is very embarrassing. You have a system and can pretend to be mysterious at any time. For example, Lin Pingzhi, no matter what others say or ask, you are confused and surprised. What does it mean? There is no need. Yes, everything is under my control. I only need to know everything. You sit in the Tongfu Inn and look at the outside world with a smile. When people come to ask you, tell them and let them solve it by themselves. And you have a bunch of martial arts equipped with a divine elephant to suppress the prison. This technique is no more powerful than the martial arts and immortals. Why do you have to learn so many novice techniques slowly? You are a time traveler. When you get this skill, you should know that there are cultivators and immortals, gods and demons in this world. Your thoughts should be to get ahead and not to mess around with the world of martial arts and immortals. Servant, you made a lot of mistakes in this choice. You also want others to think you are powerful behind the scenes, and you also want to be able to show off in any way, so you created a character who is neither low nor high nor high. There is really no need to be so entangled. Just create an awesome character, what? Just let him do everything. The state of pretense does not require you to appear, but the matter has been solved before you appear. You two slaves cannot beat you at a high state. If you don't pretend to be a low state, according to your idea, you can't even defeat Duan Yanqing. So what is the meaning of their existence? Regarding Huang Rong, Huang Rong in Jin Yong's works is a resourceful character, but when it comes to you, she becomes a monster who only knows how to cry. You can want her to be the heroine, but don't write it in such a disgusting way. She doesn't just care about how knowledgeable you are. What a nymphomaniac likes you? She is chivalrous and righteous by nature, and what she likes is heroic spirit. You did not appear in time in The Condor Shooting. Ouyang Ke is a living example of your character. May I ask why she doesn't like Ouyang Ke but likes you instead? Just because you are a storyteller and told her a novel that is comparable to Journey to the West? I said that Huang Rong in your novel is a nymphomaniac, and I felt that I was looking down too high on her. A special reminder is, don't write too many storylines that we readers are familiar with. If you write like this, I might as well just watch the TV series and it will be more exciting.

After reading it for a long time, I found that there were really many typos! The author should be careful

What kind of stuff is written! Xiaoyao sect, Bei Mingzi? What did you do to Wu Yazi? What a mess!

With the way you write it, you can write a hundred chapters for one list, which is too watery.

When the teachings began, Zhang Wuji was the leader. Later, when Zhang Sanfeng appeared, it was said that the child of Zhang Cuishan and Yin Susu's marriage was named Zhang Wuji. Yang Kang was as old as Guo Jing. Yang Kang had never met Mu Nianci, got married and had children, so Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu left the ancient tomb? The timeline is a mess, and there are too many typos. You wrote that Guo Xiang founded Emei. The problem is that Guo Xiang's mother is not married yet. Even if Guo Jing marries Hua Zheng, I'm afraid Guo Xiang won't be that much older than Huang Rong! It's difficult to write about comprehensive martial arts, but it shouldn't be so messy. Like the book I read before, Zhu Yuanzhang had never seen it, and it was passed down to Zhu Houzhao during the Ming Dynasty.

The divine elephant's prison-suppressing power actually has to be trained to the divine elephant before it can compete with the land. What a mess of settings. It's really ridiculous.