
Yin's Soul Lingers
by Obi Coconut
About This Novel
Gao Hong was delighted to receive the Yin Soul System, extracting the players' souls to form the strongest club in the world.
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Official(12)Scraped 11d ago
I'm here, I hope you know.
I support you, but spend more time with your family, and don't care what other readers think. Your writing is very good, and the pace of the book is also very good, but it is too impatient. You must be patient. The first few works that were supposed to become sacred books ended up being unfinished because of your impatientness. Don't imitate other people's pretentiousness and slap in the face. You don't know how to do it, and it will be embarrassing to write it down. Come on, Obiye, you are a good father and a good author!
Alas, this book is on the street again
Why do all the books you write have to be counter-intuitive to readers? ? You have to write about the plot that you don't like, but you don't write about the plot that you like. . There is a reason for being thrown out, and there is a reason for being banned.
persuade to quit
The direction of this book is basically correct. It's boring. I'd advise you to give it up.
.
Will you pay to read if the writing is in-depth?
What the hell are you writing? Lao Mo's books are getting less and less deep. You have to come up with your own style.
😍What the hell are you writing? Lao Mo's books are getting less and less deep. You have to come up with your own style.
To brother, brother, brother, brother, brother, brother
Why is the weird movie missing?
I watched it a few years ago. Why is it gone now?
I haven't read it yet. Is this book a suspense?
What type of novel is this? ? ? ? ?
It's best not to touch the national football team
It's best not to touch the national football team, not many people want to watch it.
Not bad, after all, I am also playing this game
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Official(12)Scraped 11d ago
I'm here, I hope you know.
I support you, but spend more time with your family, and don't care what other readers think. Your writing is very good, and the pace of the book is also very good, but it is too impatient. You must be patient. The first few works that were supposed to become sacred books ended up being unfinished because of your impatientness. Don't imitate other people's pretentiousness and slap in the face. You don't know how to do it, and it will be embarrassing to write it down. Come on, Obiye, you are a good father and a good author!
Alas, this book is on the street again
Why do all the books you write have to be counter-intuitive to readers? ? You have to write about the plot that you don't like, but you don't write about the plot that you like. . There is a reason for being thrown out, and there is a reason for being banned.
persuade to quit
The direction of this book is basically correct. It's boring. I'd advise you to give it up.
.
Will you pay to read if the writing is in-depth?
What the hell are you writing? Lao Mo's books are getting less and less deep. You have to come up with your own style.
😍What the hell are you writing? Lao Mo's books are getting less and less deep. You have to come up with your own style.
To brother, brother, brother, brother, brother, brother
Why is the weird movie missing?
I watched it a few years ago. Why is it gone now?
I haven't read it yet. Is this book a suspense?
What type of novel is this? ? ? ? ?
It's best not to touch the national football team
It's best not to touch the national football team, not many people want to watch it.
Not bad, after all, I am also playing this game
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