Create a Game World

I'm urging you to update. Do you have a dimension? Please push me up.

I was playing a game last night and got into a fight with a guy. He gave me his phone address and wanted to make a fight with me. I ignored him and ignored him. The game was over and I started a new game. I didn't expect that people were so angry and someone was scolding me again. This time I couldn't bear it and took the initiative to make a fight. I gave the guy's address and phone number!

You want to trick me into going back to protect Arad again! I can't go back, things have changed. I used to go to Internet cafes with disheveled hair to practice leveling secretly, eating instant noodles and drinking Nutrition Express The man who had been rubbed wantonly by thunder and prison breath came back to life, and he returned to the city with hatred to wait for his weakness. Once upon a time GSD Linus Albert Boken Kelly profiteer jarhead and many more Once, I was sitting in an Internet cafe wearing a suit and tie, taking a sip of coffee and playing group games slowly. Now it's a beautiful day to see Celia again Now that I see you again, the Terra Stone Warehouse is full of memories. Nowadays, I am a second-hand thing that has been forgotten by the times The warrior is old and the old friend is dead Put down the sword in your hand and bury it for a while Without the first 8 million warriors, there will eventually be the next 10 million warriors Flowing Star Meteor Knife Black Knife-Dark Moon Light of the Moon Demon Sword-Apophis Blood Butterfly Wrath "If mind energy can be attached to bullets" "Listen with your ears, cut with your heart. Cut the body with the sword, and cut the soul with your heart." The sword never hesitates." "Definitely not one empty" "I will obey the orders of the great Tyrannosaurus King Bakar and guard the Sky City forever." "As long as it's for the peace of Belmare" "Treat your equipment like you would your lover" "Please be kind to your pets" "I am the master of Fengken style - Feng Zhen" "How about a cold beer?" "I'm the best alchemist here - Norton" "God has been protecting you silently" "Will you pursue eternity?"

I think the biggest poisonous point that makes me unable to stand it is that it is too gamified. What you write is like playing a game by yourself. You shouldn't write like this, because you are writing a novel and you should write more events. I'm a little confused. The most important thing is that I don't know the system. What's the use behind it? I just wrote that I was playing games and was always in trouble.

To: Dear author, Children's Day is coming soon, in order to satisfy the wishes of all readers. I hope you will wear a cat-eared maid outfit and white stockings, dance to the Pure Land, and sing majesticly in this sunny time. I wish the author happiness, and others will copy and follow! 2019.5.31

Jiang Qiao and his harem, Hailan, milk at no extra price, and Wanxiang are all very cute girls! Mo Shigui and his wife, Freya, and oh yes, they also have a daughter, so they can be considered happy! But what should he do with Freya? Zhao Mingwei is the second protagonist. I almost thought this book had two male protagonists! He may appear to be a fool, but he is actually a very responsible and emotionally intelligent big brother! I wish Qi Junzi and Zhao Mingwei happiness, Yelena's little apprentice is so cute! Mr. Yin finally found happiness! ! Bai Di, you idiot, tons, tons, tons! Caramel, who is also a fool, is a mermaid. After reading it, I felt a bit uncomfortable... A bit depressed!

Can it be sent out? The system is busy and won't let me reply to you so I can only post. Then talk about your question. Do you think if you don't show the players extraordinary power and the protagonist controls the game and doesn't give the boss a promise to generate tasks, will the players believe the boss? Besides, the player's weapons are created by the game. Enemies who want to invade can't create them. How can the players use the things they give them if the protagonist doesn't transform them? Moreover, the players' weapons are good things in the story of the next year. They can't be used by non-players for a long time, otherwise the neutral characters behind will come and steal them. Therefore, if you want to seduce players, you can only find ways to bypass the protagonist's game, which is the real world. So if you choose to show players extraordinary power, there will definitely be people who are lucky enough to hook up with the invaders. If it succeeds, then the bet is right. If not, then it proves that this is just a game. At worst, if you are killed by the boss once, it's not like you have never been killed before. Do you dare to say that there are no people who think this way? Isn't this because you originally wanted to seduce players with benefits, but instead were instigated by the invaders? If you can see it, just take a look. If you can't see it, I will copy it and reply to you after a while. After reading the first sentence of the screenshot, I really have to say, hundreds of times the return? Although the protagonist runs a hospital at home, he earns more than 10,000 yuan a month by writing novels. At the beginning, he can use the energy of creation to create small squares. But if you divide these things by 1000, it is the upper limit of the first batch of players. See how much you can give to players in a month. Is it enough for the Internet fee? I will also tell you a cheap 30 an hour for the Internet fee. Calculate it yourself. See how you can make up for the benefits you mentioned with such a big gap. 300%? Are you talking about using superpowers to change electronic banking information? Uh-huh? The protagonist doesn't dare to change himself, and he doesn't dare to eat instant noodles for the big eater Hailan when he is short of money. Do you dare? Aren't you afraid of being caught by the state? Uh-huh? Money is not being transferred to your account? Directly to players? Uh-huh? Even worse, players are arrested one by one and their assets are frozen or even imprisoned. If you find that your own funds are transferred to players, you will also be in trouble. Are you hiding? What's even worse is that there are no players left, and they can only wait to see the world being invaded. So why did you use benefits to attract players in the first place? It's better to pick some game masters to send activation codes yourself, and let interested players draw the rest. If the game is well done, the game masters who understand the game will naturally be willing to play, and interested players will also be willing to play. It is better than attracting people with a 300% return rate and smearing it everywhere in the forum when they see that the return rate does not meet expectations and may even repay money. After all, the people you find are for profit. If you don't provide enough benefits, will they look good on you? Occupying a limited quota and passively slowing down work, do you think you can develop in the early stage? The development of the game is slowing down, and those who come here for profit have no motivation. Can those few who really want to develop develop quickly? Is this a vicious cycle? Can it still resist invasion?

The writing is too poor, dry and white, the plot is very dull and boring, it is just a rundown, the characters are thin, the protagonists and supporting characters are all the same, without any bright spots. The only interesting thing is the setting. Unfortunately, the setting is also full of loopholes, many places cannot be justified, and unreasonable details appear frequently, which greatly affects the reading experience. Please be careful when reading. I am already poisoned before I finish reading the free chapters. 😨

After reading the latest chapter, I can feel that the author wants to give up, or that the author's ideas are somewhat restricted, and that there is no room for development in this book. However, in my opinion, this book has just begun! The real thing has just begun! There are still so many natural disasters that have not been touched, and the Annihilation Legion has not been eliminated. Hailan feels like it has only recovered one-tenth? And in the past, there were only a few followers of Hailan, Miss Cat? Can Zhao Mingwei really be called extraordinary? Is Earth really safe on the star map? No! Far from enough! In my opinion the story is still very long! I always feel like I'm only a third of the way through the story? Or less? Also, seeing that the latest chapter brings up the idea of ​​a parallel world, can we use the parallel world as a medium to see other natural disasters, or help Hailan recover some abilities, and then completely restore Hailan in the main time and space? To contact the remaining followers of Hailan?

Are there any book friends who have read for 25,000+ hours? Let's have a round of mutual relations