Liu's Xiaoqi

Farm life is also magnificent

Introduction: There is a girl named Xiaoqi in the village. When she was born, the Tengu was eating the sun! She is so strong! Book review: The style is more straightforward and refined, with a faster pace. It can be said that this article is a detailed outline after the outline is refined. Because it does not have too many calculations and psychological descriptions like other books, it will be a bit special. However, I quite like that the plot of this book is not protracted. The beginning of the book tells about the "unusual" father of the protagonist Xiaoqi. I think this part may be a bit long, and it may be a bit confusing to appear in front of the protagonist. It might be better if Liu Dahe's paragraph could be written when Liu Xiaoqi was born. When Liu Dahe saw the Tengu eating the sun, he remembered his past life memories and associated it with his daughter who was about to be born. It might be better if Liu Dahe felt that he needed to protect his daughter from being like him. Or when asking the old woman in the village to tell the children about the past, when she saw Xiaoqi who was several years old, she would tell the strange story about Xiaoqi's birth and the story about her father. The author is really hardcore hhhh. Well, I don't have much advice after reading it. After all, the manuscript has 240,000 words, and the finished book of about 300,000 words may collapse if I revise it. And the daily life of this book seems pretty good to me. Maybe there is another style: telling the story without procrastination like "Story Club". There are probably two suggestions for the next book. One is that if the author doesn't have time to polish it and just wants everyone to read the story, he can continue writing it like this; the other is that if the author wants to make money by writing book subscriptions, he needs to expand the details appropriately. For example, add some background to the era and lengthen the main line: growing up from a small village to a character who can influence a party; for example, enriching the psychology, background and special encounters of other characters: how Liu Dahe learned to be a good person and work in the carpenter's house, Liu Dahe's imagination of his future life, future and "world view" when he went to other people's homes to see their lives when he was an apprentice, etc. But this is just my personal opinion.