Invincible Heroes: the End of the Road

I have read about two to three hundred novels, among which online games are one of my favorite genres... To be honest, I prefer the author's novels in the online game genre, but I have to say that the author's first few articles made me feel a little anxious. I don't understand why the author would write the protagonist to join a company, and I don't understand why a game group established as a company does not set up a trade union, and as an employee, why do you have so much freedom? And I don't understand why the company has not given the protagonist a task (10 gold coins? The protagonist earns the difference... I don't want to comment). To put it cliché, why do I feel that the protagonist is surrounded by good people? It feels like something is missing. In fact, I mainly don't like the company that the protagonist joins and the protagonist can sponsor others at will, because I don't think people can be so free in the company... (I hope you don't criticize, I am just a passerby, I just want to express my own opinions, I haven't read it later, so maybe there is something wrong with my views, please don't complain, don't blame me)

I read Chapter 14 and found it to be really retarded. A girl in her 20s had a virtual pet die in the virtual world and cried like a 2-year-old child. Her father died and her mother was sick. We also want to make money in the virtual world. Can the author stop making such mentally retarded plots and lower the IQ of readers?

The poison test is completed. The skills of the third young master of the Tang family. Xiaobai. Watch if you like. Don't spray.

There is nothing wrong with the writing, but one problem is that it is too laborious, too long, and has no purpose. It just writes useless things in a long way. It makes my head hurt. The writing is very good, and it should be very good. However, it turns out that I have a headache after reading what you wrote. , It's too long, the plot is too over-paced and too slow. After writing more than 200 chapters, I still don't know what the protagonist is. He is said to be strong or not, weak but not weak. He just completes tasks here and there. After completing the tasks, he is exhausted. This kind of novel seems really laborious, so I skipped reading it.

You are becoming more and more willful now, and you can stop whenever you want. If you are like this, what can you do to attract readers?

Rubbish, long-winded, without center, a lot of nonsense.

It is recommended to skip the first few chapters. The writing is really bad and long-winded. Just know some of the game settings and the protagonist's divorce and find a new company to work. It's always a gathering of colleagues. Isn't it awkward for you, the author, when you write it yourself? Do you write urban or online game novels? Moreover, there are language errors from time to time during the dialogue. The paragraph is so long. It is very tiring to watch. My patience is almost worn out. I suggest the author change the beginning, such as the paragraph where the protagonist's residence is in the new company. Such a long list is useless, etc. After changing it, it can at least increase some readers.

The alarm clock really lost its memory! I always forget to update. I used to update twice a day, then once a day, but now I keep updating all the time! I feel bad! Such a good book!

I really like it and keep following it. Good luck to the author.

Even if there are no updates, five recommendation votes will be given every day. Support alarm clock! Even if you have a monthly pass, you have to spend it!