All Heavens: I Am King Arthur
About This Novel
Arthur's legend was supposed to begin with the drawing of the sword from the stone. Who would have thought that when he was young, he would meet an old wizard from the future who once studied at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. "Hello, where is this place?" "Dear sir, this is Camelot!" "Oh, this is the right time. Then kid, what's your name?" "Others call me Walter, my real name is Arthur!" "Fuck, King Arthur. Sign your name for me, no, I'm your teacher now, my name is Merlin!" When Arthur pulled out the sword from the stone, who would have thought that he would meet Merlin from another world and King Arthur from another world. Hey, why am I a woman in another world? "And your flower magician, sunny and cheerful brother, you are also Merlin!" "And you, magical girl Merry, you are also Merlin!" And you, black gun idiots, black sword idiots, white spear idiots, blue sword idiots, bow idiots, skill idiots, all kinds of idiots, you are also King Arthur!
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Official(2)Scraped 3d ago
Go make a big change! Stupid authorᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)
I see the problems you mentioned about yourself, and I also see the potential of your work. At present, there are two good ways to take shape in the setting. One is to complete the legend of Arthur as King, and the other is to enter other worlds and synchronize the legend. This is good, but between the two, you didn't have a good grasp of the switching of worlds or the telling of stories from other worlds. In the former, I suddenly stopped writing "Travel World" in the middle of writing, and in the latter, I wrote something strange. The setting is good, but you didn't write it well. It is better to write the story steadily before Walter becomes king; after drawing the sword, we can continue to grow his faith and improve himself by traveling through the mirror to other worlds. The legendary synchronization setting is very good. It is about sword and sword, king and king's identity. Even the plot settings of Arthur's identity and the story about the Valkyrie's love in "The Nibelungen" are good, but these good settings are written by you so that they don't match up before and after. It's already very nondescript. (=Ｘェｘ=) Promise me, make major changes. Just write down the story from behind the Black Tortoise Gate to before drawing the sword, shape the transition after drawing the sword, and revise the story of the Nibelungen. In addition, Xingyue's story is pretty good right now, so there's no need to make any big changes. As an old bookworm, I am optimistic about you, but also feel a little sorry for you. Why are you so careless? If you feel that what I said is what you want, adjust the outline or make a new one! According to me, this is much better than the current Chimeraᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)
Beowulf is still alive, how could a living person get this Noble Phantasm?
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Official(2)Scraped 3d ago
Go make a big change! Stupid authorᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)
I see the problems you mentioned about yourself, and I also see the potential of your work. At present, there are two good ways to take shape in the setting. One is to complete the legend of Arthur as King, and the other is to enter other worlds and synchronize the legend. This is good, but between the two, you didn't have a good grasp of the switching of worlds or the telling of stories from other worlds. In the former, I suddenly stopped writing "Travel World" in the middle of writing, and in the latter, I wrote something strange. The setting is good, but you didn't write it well. It is better to write the story steadily before Walter becomes king; after drawing the sword, we can continue to grow his faith and improve himself by traveling through the mirror to other worlds. The legendary synchronization setting is very good. It is about sword and sword, king and king's identity. Even the plot settings of Arthur's identity and the story about the Valkyrie's love in "The Nibelungen" are good, but these good settings are written by you so that they don't match up before and after. It's already very nondescript. (=Ｘェｘ=) Promise me, make major changes. Just write down the story from behind the Black Tortoise Gate to before drawing the sword, shape the transition after drawing the sword, and revise the story of the Nibelungen. In addition, Xingyue's story is pretty good right now, so there's no need to make any big changes. As an old bookworm, I am optimistic about you, but also feel a little sorry for you. Why are you so careless? If you feel that what I said is what you want, adjust the outline or make a new one! According to me, this is much better than the current Chimeraᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)
Beowulf is still alive, how could a living person get this Noble Phantasm?
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