Traveling Through the Blessed Girl Yuenong Gate

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[B-] Traveling through ancient farming stories, there is a bit of house fighting between parents and shortcomings. It is the kind of story where the plot is very ordinary and can be watched smoothly. However, the author's depiction of the story is not very skillful, and some parts look very awkward and unpleasant. The protagonist travels through a car accident at the beginning and is reborn directly in ancient times. The family she lives in is an uncomplicated one, with two grandparents, four parents and five younger generations. There are usually some unpleasant parents who are short-lived, but overall it is still warm. The village where the protagonist is located is also an ordinary village. Although the background setting has dynasties, it is more like the Republic of China. The overall atmosphere is very harmonious, but there are still some conflicts between neighbors, causing some gossip and the like. Overall, this is a daily farming article. Since you have traveled through time, you have to make money to improve your life. The protagonist took the opportunity to return a gift to the doctor who treated her, showing her talent in understanding medicinal materials, and then took advantage of the mysterious doctor's slip of the tongue to agree to learn medical skills from him. So using this excuse, the protagonist not only learned to read and write from his brother who went to school at home, but also started to make money by collecting and selling medicines after working with a doctor once. In the early stages of the story, the protagonist made his first pot of gold by selling medicine and saved a small treasury. However, he still felt that the money came too slowly and could not improve his life. The characters in the story are simple and their sides are clear. At home, she has a mother and grandmother who love her, an uncle who has little plans, and an aunt who is looking for trouble. The younger generation feels like they are all fighting and making trouble. Although there are conflicts, they are not serious. In the village, there are friends from poor families, young men who hunt for a living, uncles and aunts who like to gossip, and enemies with evil intentions. There is also only a small part of the city dweller, He Yazi. In general, the character relationships are relatively simple and easy to understand. The reason why it is hay is because there are too many flaws. First of all, the protagonist's parents have died in his previous life and he has a complete family in this life. It is normal to feel the existence of family affection and decide to cherish the present, but the author's description is a bit deliberate and looks unnatural. Secondly, the villain girl in the article actually killed someone because she was "someone else's child"? Isn't this too perfunctory? A bit witty. Then there are some fairy plots in the story that are too frustrating, such as the part where the grandson secretly eats wild plums that are sold for money, and he is forced to hire outsiders to collect medicine... Where does the moral kidnapping of the gods come from? Finally, the author seems to have a misunderstanding about the employment relationship. The protagonist hired his best friend to go to the mountains to collect herbs. He taught her how to recognize the herbs and processed the herbs at home. The two of them did the work together. In addition to the basic salary of three cents a day, the best friend could also get 40% of the money from selling the medicinal materials? It's the kind where she gets 40% of whatever is sold in the drugstore, without mentioning the cost or investment. This is not an employment relationship but a partnership, right? It's almost like getting on a pole and giving money to people, right? Moreover, in the first few days, my best friend earned four to five hundred Wen. According to the original article, this money was enough to "feed a family of three for half a year"? Her stepmother couldn't help but ask how she got so much money back home so quickly? Knowing that selling medicinal materials is so profitable, why not force her to go it alone and give all the money she makes to her own family? Dou Mien is angry with Mi En! How much will be divided when your two relatives come? 40% Per person, you still have to pay for it

It is a farming novel, in which the heroine travels back in time and struggles to grow up in ancient times. She eventually leads her family out of the farm and reaps happiness. Warm and pastoral style, focusing on struggle, not many top-notch items. The author's writing style is online, the three views are correct, the plot is not bad, there are no logical flaws, and the updates are stable.

(Shameless self-recommendation) An article about peasant women farming. After the death of the heroine, she traveled back to ancient times and used her intelligence to lead her family out of poverty and gain happiness. Guaranteed no pitfalls. Disadvantages: A bit slow to heat up, seedlings Rating: ❤️❤️❤️❤️ (you can read it in Shuhuang)