Lol: I Am Invincible

Lol: I Am Invincible

by Qing Moyan

Length:
690Kwords307chapters
Latest:
Ch. 307再认真一次吧
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7.2QD Score

About This Novel

After opening his eyes, Lin Yu found that he had traveled to the singles on the champion, and there was a world-class competition in front of him? Lin Yu was confused. As a silver goalkeeper, what else could he do when facing professional players? "Ding, congratulations to the host, you have received a gift package for newbies!" With the system in hand, I have the world, and I can use black iron to defeat the king! But, the game is just the beginning, awesome actor! Billionaire! All-around star! ...

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琦er60mo ago

Why do some people think it's so bad that they can watch it? It's all rubbish, nothing at all

Why do some people think it's so bad that they can watch it? It's all rubbish, nothing at all

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☠☤nicola65mo ago

personal opinion

1: There are too many typos. At least 10 words in one chapter are typos. Didn't the author check it after finishing the study? Elementary school students also need to check their compositions after they finish them. 2: The plot jumps too fast. It jumps from a game novel to a fairy tale and then to an urban novel. 3: Even if there is a system, it cannot be a one-on-one fight with five, it is still zero-death. Although it is a cool article, it is a bit too direct. 4: Although it's not easy for you to write a book, you can't think of it one at a time. It's not easy for anyone nowadays. Again, it doesn't matter if the plot is too jumpy or too direct. Can you check for typos? It's going to hit your head. The above are purely personal opinions and are for reference only. Don't comment if you don't like it, it doesn't matter if you comment, I don't read comments anyway

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Xiaoོkui and Liang ꦿ℘゜এ71mo ago

Just change the name, but don't add an emotional line. Just play games and don't make a mess. In the other book, I was speechless when I saw hanging out and singing songs. Just write and add your mother's emotional line. It's not like I don't have a girlfriend in reality, come on.

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Eat Soft Candies Hard_ba71mo ago

I haven't read this book, but when I hear you talk about plagiarism, I just want to say that imitating one person is called plagiarism, and imitating many people is called borrowing. It is not easy for authors to write books, and most novels nowadays have similar contents.

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用户116243542972mo ago

Can you still copy it in an obvious way?

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Chronic Homelessness_ea54mo ago

Don't look at it, it has nothing to do with the game.

When I came in, I thought it was about the main league. Most of the articles were about the league. However, after I came in, I realized that it had nothing to do with the league. It only focused on playing games to earn skills. The other authors didn't know how to write, so they wrote about cities, racing, starting a company, etc. Your name and category are in the game! As a result, you wrote about the city, and here comes a cultivator to restore the family. Will you dare to build a family after the founding of the country? Why build a family? Rebel?

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Fenchaloupu59mo ago

grandstanding

The plot is completely divorced from reality and the plot cannot withstand even the slightest scrutiny. Please don't read this article.

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A.Kun63mo ago

It's so bad, it's so bad, it's so bad, the author is wow............oh............

It's so bad, it's so bad, it's so bad... Oh...

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Lonely63mo ago

**********

The author's writing is quite good, why don't you fill in the gaps?

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女王
女王的守护骑士64mo ago

Boss, if you write Lol, just write Lol. What else are you writing about?

I came in because of the title of the book. The result is a pit You write it like this. Just change your name

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