The Crisis of the Armored Warrior is Coming

The Crisis of the Armored Warrior is Coming

by Star Palace Maple Leaf

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About This Novel

Because Lin Feng has been an armor fan since childhood, he was brought to the world of one to two armor warriors by the super armor system, but Lin Feng said, "I want to go back, I don't want to stay here." (Group: 1094340869) (If you want to urge me to update in the group, I will see the situation. Recently... I am busy with my studies...)

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Zhao Xinkai72mo ago

besides

There should be a period here. Take a look at the most basic installation location of your missing period in the novel. Should be placed to. "I've read the novel, but... I really can't write these punctuation marks." If it is divided into emphasis here, the emphasis should be an exclamation point. "I've read the novel, but... I really can't write these punctuation marks!" Here, use a period if you just want to finish the topic or escape to the next paragraph. "I've read the novel, but... I really can't write these punctuation marks." The period indicates the end of the topic. For example, if the action words in the novel are separated from words or expressions, use periods.

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Ling Yufan Faiz66mo ago

The author is great

Dear author, can you write another novel in which the protagonist possesses the Emperor Armored Warrior and the Five Elements Armor, he possesses the ultimate Yin Yang and Five Elements bloodline, and the Chaos System, and travels to the world of the Knights of the Ring? I think this setting is very suitable.

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Jinfu Pushed Back Three Hundred and One People72mo ago

this category. .

I found an armored warrior in the military? When I think about it carefully, there seems to be nothing wrong with it.

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It's Xiao Wang72mo ago

Sorry, author

Excuse me. I should support you, but I don't like anything I see related to Naruto.

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Zhao Xinkai72mo ago

Take a look at the picture

Most of them come from the novel "Detective Conan: The Mobile Bomb". They have periods, commas, and double quotation marks. Listen to the difference between having a period and not having a period. It shouldn't be called a gap, it should be said that it is fast. The period divides the novel into one theme and one theme. The comma is just a paragraph, and the double quotation marks represent attention. But without the period, it feels like a wild horse running wild, and the next paragraph is reached before you can hear it clearly, like pepper in milk. If a book contains sour, sweet, bitter, spicy, and salty, then the period is the label. It is not sweet and salty, but the ingredients are purposefully made into delicacies. Commas are like division of labor. If you write a novel with thousands of words in a chapter without commas and periods, it will be uncomfortable to listen to it. Double quotation marks are like a butler, telling you that this is a staple food or this is a main dish, so that you will not be unable to find it when you look for it again.

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Zhao Xinkai72mo ago

look here

There should be a period after the last person here. You can find out by downloading QQ Reading and listening to a paragraph to compare it with other novels with periods.

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Xin Feiyu is Covered with Mist62mo ago

for this book

Actually, I have already thought about how this book will develop in the future, but because I failed to write the previous part, I don't know whether to fill in some of the previous pitfalls. As for The Eunuch, to be honest, I thought about whether this book should be The Eunuch for a while in the past few months, but this is also the first one I have published. The book, The Eunuch, is not good, so it has not been updated until now, but I don't want the eunuch, but I really don't know how to write it later. I have thought about the plot, but now I really don't know how to write this section, and I still have studies, so I don't know if this book can really be finished.

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User 53770076838572mo ago

Very nice🤗!

So pretty! 🤗

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Zhao Xinkai72mo ago

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

To add a period after each section, just press the second symbol at the end.

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Deny72mo ago

Come on, come on, come on, keep updating

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