This up Walks Sideways

Friends, what are we? A: It's water friends! B: I'm a book friend! C: It's dad! What is our desire? A: There are so many novels to read! B: Endless investment! C: Endless recommendation votes! What is our task today? ABC: Urgent update! Urgent update! Urgent update! The author's home is just ahead! Tell me, what should we do? A: Put him in a dark room! B: Let him be a ruthless coding machine! C: Put him into women's clothes! AB:! ?! ABC: Lock him up and code words in women's clothing (hissing and cracking lungs)!!! ABC: Lock him up and code words in women's clothing (hissing and cracking lungs)!!! ABC: Lock him up and code words in women's clothing (hissing and cracking lungs)!!!

A. LV1 B. LV2 C. LV3 D. LV4 My number is LV4 AC. LV5 AB. LV6 Someone should be LV6, right?

This book is good. If you keep reading, it will become popular. The plot is okay, looks like a new author? The word count is a bit short, so I won't comment too much for now, but some things can still be seen, such as the small theater where others watch the video after uploading the work, and the fun of barrage, etc. It is quite vivid and enjoyable to watch. Secondly, the emotional scenes came too quickly and seemed too scene-based. Although there was no need to cover everything, there was nothing natural and natural. To put it simply, it means that the plot is there, but there is no further in-depth description of the psychology, environment and other aspects, which is not interesting enough (to put it more straightforwardly, it means that it cannot leave an impression on the readers, just like the plot of the supporting characters, they will be forgotten after reading it). But it is obvious that the author has made progress compared to the first twenty chapters...? (Self-doubt) Single women should continue to be single. Also, the punctuation at the beginning was a little discouraging. Some words were not given periods at the beginning, and some ellipses were replaced with three periods. I forgot which chapter it was. But later on, this shortcoming seemed to be gradually corrected by the author, but it may also be because I did not read the book carefully. Finally, I personally think that the plot in the school is a little flawed. It may be because I have read too many books of the same type before, and my vision is a bit high. It feels a bit... How to put it, it is different from the general world view of that type of division that I used to live in. It is not very reasonable, such as things like Chapter 13 and Chapter 15 (but I feel relieved when I think about it as an incidental plot). I hope the author can write this military training plot well. P. S. The last suggestion... I hope the author's writing will not be too formalistic (I didn't say that it exists now. What I mean by formalism is not to be happy just for the sake of pleasure. For example, the chapter about "Married Publishers" is quite comfortable to read, but similar plots do not need to be repeated. Two or three times are enough to adjust the protagonist, not too many, and the severity should be appropriately differentiated, there is a little time difference) Some people write books that get better and better as they write, while some people write books that become duller and duller, and the novelty of getting into it for the first time is lost as you look at it. I hope the author is the former. Hehe, come on↖(^ω^)↗ ~~~ That's right, I've updated the Storyteller series again Praise me, be proud One article and one book a day, see how many days I can stick with it The premise is that there is time Tsk Slipping away gorgeously

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March 21, 2021, in memory of the author's first day before she dressed as a woman! Make me cry!

It's not enough to read, so it doesn't make sense if I don't update seven or eight chapters in a day ('-'*)

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March 21, 2021, the first day of praying for the author to wear women's clothing

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