Full-time Master: Following You Everywhere
About This Novel
Non-system Luoyang, who has played in the Russian league for five years, is called the "Shadow God" because of his bizarre style of play. After winning four championships, they failed to successfully defend the title in the fifth season due to the team's cunning operations. After the club wanted to get rid of his captaincy, Luoyang chose to return to China. Not only for the sake of his sister who was still in a coma, but also for a change of environment. It's time for the current Glory Alliance to recall the suppressive power of the Exorcist back then!
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Official(29)Scraped 5d ago
It would look better without my sister
Does that one have a female protagonist? The heroine, I hope it's Tang Rou
Without this sister, the data would probably be much higher.
Bai Shuiwen
First, I read the title of the book at 80,000 words, but I don't know that it has anything to do with Like a Shadow. It doesn't even have anything to do with the protagonist in your novel, or does it have to be written at 100,000 words before it comes out? Second, it's too watery, not just because of the word count. After watching it, I didn't have much impression at all, and there were no exciting points about the protagonist. Some plots couldn't be written, so I found excuses to quit, and just made a cameo, like a supporting role. The key points are not outstanding and the daily word count is large. Can't make people's eyes brighter.
Without telling the author, who is the heroine?
It's so poisonous!
Reminds me of a certain book from the past, with one protagonist and three names! The changes are getting bigger! Since you don't want to play professional games, why write about professional masters? You are worthy of the author! Birth is birth! What does the protagonist want to do? Is there a main line? 💩💩💩
Indeed, Shadow. Shadow of the original. Everything follows the main plot
Why do all the fan fiction choose to follow the protagonist?
The first 200 pictures were great, but the ending was wrong. If the author starts over and starts over, retaining the first 150 pictures, deleting some unnecessary parts of the later plots, and then streamlining the main plot, then the novel will be a very good novel, and the rest of it will be Some of the authors may not have written an outline, which resulted in the main plot being confusing and detached. For example, part of the game against a small team could be deleted. That part of the game against an unknown team could basically be guessed to be a crushing one, but it still showed up, making the chapter seem a bit watery.
The main character looks like a nanny? And how did his sister become a vegetative state?
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Community(0)
Official(29)Scraped 5d ago
It would look better without my sister
Does that one have a female protagonist? The heroine, I hope it's Tang Rou
Without this sister, the data would probably be much higher.
Bai Shuiwen
First, I read the title of the book at 80,000 words, but I don't know that it has anything to do with Like a Shadow. It doesn't even have anything to do with the protagonist in your novel, or does it have to be written at 100,000 words before it comes out? Second, it's too watery, not just because of the word count. After watching it, I didn't have much impression at all, and there were no exciting points about the protagonist. Some plots couldn't be written, so I found excuses to quit, and just made a cameo, like a supporting role. The key points are not outstanding and the daily word count is large. Can't make people's eyes brighter.
Without telling the author, who is the heroine?
It's so poisonous!
Reminds me of a certain book from the past, with one protagonist and three names! The changes are getting bigger! Since you don't want to play professional games, why write about professional masters? You are worthy of the author! Birth is birth! What does the protagonist want to do? Is there a main line? 💩💩💩
Indeed, Shadow. Shadow of the original. Everything follows the main plot
Why do all the fan fiction choose to follow the protagonist?
The first 200 pictures were great, but the ending was wrong. If the author starts over and starts over, retaining the first 150 pictures, deleting some unnecessary parts of the later plots, and then streamlining the main plot, then the novel will be a very good novel, and the rest of it will be Some of the authors may not have written an outline, which resulted in the main plot being confusing and detached. For example, part of the game against a small team could be deleted. That part of the game against an unknown team could basically be guessed to be a crushing one, but it still showed up, making the chapter seem a bit watery.
The main character looks like a nanny? And how did his sister become a vegetative state?
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