Conferred God: Got Cramped at the Beginning

You didn't even make it clear in the first chapter. Did the protagonist travel through time to the Gods of the game? Still traveling back in time to the orthodox mythology of the Gods, Luo Li talked about a lot of plot content without explaining anything clearly. I don't know what you want to write.

A race that has survived from ancient times to the present, it is still the largest dragon clan among the four remaining races in the sky. There is no such thing as confiscation of the family and property, and there are no ancestral skills at all. The family has just declined and has not been confiscated. The dragon clan only has cultivation consumables and no advanced skills. How did they survive from ancient times to the present? Moreover, the dragon clan's inheritance is engraved in the blood, and you don't believe in any powerful inheritance? (Some level of writing but not much)

The biggest problem with many books: It's the state of overwhelming the protagonist Then increase the protagonist's combat power In the end, he participated in a fatal incident, The perfect contradictions and conflicts in the author's eyes are revealed, and a lot of words can be written, which is simply sick. After upgrading and improving your realm, you will be done with whatever your identity is and what level of story you write. Do you have to write a divisive story to appear contradictory and conflicting, and then you can write a novel? Take a look at how the story written by the master arranges the plot. Don't indulge in self-pleasure. The author's writing style is very good, but this problem cannot be corrected. The same is true for the previous book.

More than 700 chapters later, he is still an insect and has not yet become a great person. He was forced to kill half of the body he had worked so hard to cultivate. He is capable of scheming against the protagonist by himself.

Nezha slapped your dragon tendon, but you knelt down and licked it, forcing explanations, and the writing was nondescript and meaningless. In addition, the decline of the dragon clan happened in the last calamity. Except for the beginning of the canonization, you did not participate at all. Many places were written in a nondescript manner.

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why QQ Reading is strong is that it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say. However, Poujie cannot get royalties and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed updates, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it.

Don't understand what the author is trying to write? The background is like a combination of a TV series and "The Romance of the Gods", but the author didn't write it well. Many of the stories are incoherent, and the characters are also very confusing. The author wants to write the protagonist as someone who values ​​love and justice, but in my opinion, the protagonist is like a licking dog. Moreover, the author also wants to write those innate saints as if they are mentally retarded, and drink with the protagonist at a player's house.

The predecessor was twitched by Nezha. Even the predecessor must take revenge, right? Did you add this? One more thing, when you go out to hang out during the period of being a god, is it because you think you can't die quickly enough? Even if there is a cheat for the killing system. Anyway, the content in the front is quite awkward, and I can't stand the rest of it.

It feels very ordinary. To be honest, the subject matter of this novel is very good. However, I feel that the content is messy. The protagonist has to investigate everything by himself, and the forces behind him seem to be unimportant.

The author's intention is very good, but combining the game with the ancient world is a little bit nondescript. Using a game to explain the ancient world and conferring gods is better than just watching it without talking about the game. There is a lot of nonsense to explain why she is not called Aunt Li. She originally came here with great intentions, but she was immediately persuaded to leave here.