Personalized Customized Devil

How much is this one percent?

Everyone is staying at home, and if you don't write a book, what are you going to do? Are you quarantined? Even if you are quarantined, you still need to write! ! !

Author, I have been reading your books for a year or two, and your Super Card System is the best One Piece fanfic I have ever read, bar none. Your novel is also one of the best demon novels I have ever read. I will support you forever and ever, and you must continue writing! Don't let us readers who support you down! I know my power is of little use, but I will always support you until you stop writing novels...

I was really speechless after reading the first few chapters. I felt that the protagonist's IQ was too low and it was off-putting.

A: Can you make me despair with just one sentence? B: Your wife has a mole on her left hip. A: Can you rekindle my hope with one sentence? B: She and I were roommates in kindergarten. A: Make me despair again. B: Who still remembers the kindergarten? A: Let me rekindle my hope again. B: I took photos at that time. A: Make me despair again. B: And I reconfirmed it yesterday. A: Let me rekindle my hope again. B: I saw the photo again yesterday.

Sure enough, the author's daily routine is to take a few months off...

I originally read it just for the free 1 book coin, but I found it to be a quality article. First of all, although the plot used in the article is also time-travel, the author's portrayal of a premature little devil still attracted me to a certain extent. After all, other novels are invincible or reborn and scheming with cheap relatives after time-travel, which makes people want to vomit. Therefore, although this beginning cannot be said to be very creative, it is much better than those crappy writings! Secondly, the identity setting of the devil means that the protagonist has great freedom of action or adds a lot of uncertainty to the development of the plot. Just imagine, when a modern man's soul encounters the devil's rules, can it (he) still act in accordance with the original values? Then, through the life after entering hell, the combination of the protagonist's two values ​​​​as a person and a reincarnated demon is completed, so that people will not have a sense of confusion of values. This arrangement gives the reader a strong sense of substitution. At least I can understand the protagonist's mental journey of gradually accepting some of the devil's values ​​​​in the constant killing. I am also an old bookworm. This book may not be a masterpiece yet, but I believe it is definitely capable of occupying the top ten of this category! Come on, author, I will accompany you until the end, no matter what the outcome is! ! !

Demons and the Cthulhu Mythos, picture six book avatars

The protagonist is still not ruthless enough! Wouldn't it be nice to throw a few bottles of biochemical viruses that are highly infectious, spread quickly, and have low evolutionary potential into a low-demon world?

It is said that writing a novel requires three golden chapters. I saw the fifth chapter. Let me talk about my feelings. First, it's too watery, with a lot of unnecessary descriptions and psychological activities. If you said it was more watery, I would understand, but it's really unreasonable to be so watery at the beginning. Secondly, the protagonist's IQ is also a bit unbelievable. In the comment section, it was said that he had just hatched from an egg in a different world and then observed the environment for more than half an hour? ? Let me take you in, you have traveled through time, crawled out of the egg, and discovered that you are a devil. Looking at the densely packed eggs around you, your choice is 1. (Cowardly) It feels a bit dangerous and weird. Hurry up and run away. Second, (recklessly) smash two eggs to taste what they taste like The protagonist's choice is to watch in place for half an hour If he hadn't been dominated by the devil's instinctive hunger and eaten the egg he crawled out of, I guess he could have stared blankly longer. Third, when other demons hatch out and smash the unhatched eggs, the protagonist's choice is to stand there and watch vigilantly. It really doesn't move at all. Fourth, when the protagonist finally fucked him to death and collected a soul, he still stood there holding the soul and wondering what he was doing. Until a demon was attracted by the soul in his hand, something even more unexpected happened. The protagonist wanted to use a soul to build a gun with unlimited ammunition, but then he was surprised to find that he couldn't build it. Fifth, when the protagonist killed the demon, he collected the demon's soul and put it into the system. It may not seem like much at first glance, but it gives me the feeling that (If you don't get a slap, you don't know what it means to keep your wealth from being exposed) What did you do early? Before, you just kept a soul in a daze and lured a demon to fight for you before you knew how to collect it into the system? Sixth, be stunned for a moment, be stunned for a moment, or be stunned for a moment. Is the protagonist a fool? I read five chapters in total. The author made the protagonist stunned for five times in a large area of scenery description and psychological description. Chapter five, that's all I can say. If anyone feels that their poison resistance points are full, go read it. Finally, I would like to mention that all the comments section belongs to the author🐶