
The Opening of the Ancient City is Exquisitely Crafted, Making Sister Zhou Cry!
by Riceyyds
About This Novel
Game experience engineer Lin Mu traveled to a parallel world where virtual reality technology and somatosensory equipment are very developed, but game resources are very scarce. Players also suffer from the torture of drawing cards every day and often spending money. Fortunately, Lin Mu awakened the god-level game system and started to create "Jingjue Ancient City". The weird plot, perfect interaction, and super quality have instantly become a global hit game. The game character Shirley Yang is even more popular and has become a national virtual idol. When all players felt that "Jingjue Ancient City" was the pinnacle of the gaming world, Lin Mu took action again. Super games such as "Lua Lu" and "Silent Hill" are now online again...
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Official(61)Scraped 3d ago
Chapter 144 The exquisite ancient city is not over yet
It's basically just a waste of money. I don't have the energy to pay anymore to pursue it. I don't recommend it to those who want to read it. If you like slow-paced reading, it doesn't matter. There are 144 chapters in Jingjue Ancient City. According to the author's writing style, it is estimated that there will be 500 chapters after Yunnan Worm Valley. There are about 600 chapters, and you will be charged 10 coins for each chapter. You can calculate how much it will cost after reading two chapters. Gui Blowing the Lantern seems to have a total of 8 chapters. It really drags the plot. After finishing Gui Blowing the Lantern, you can write notes on tomb robbing. With such awesome game production equipment, can you just write so many novels casually? Does the writing have to be so watery?
To be honest
When I first started reading it, I was thinking about it, so I felt very disgusted and angry when I saw the logic bugs and the halo of intelligence. But I still caught up with the latest chapter without knowing it. After calming down, I found that this book is also attractive. Advantages: The plot of the game is very well written, especially the step-by-step growth of Sister Zhou to Shirley Yang. This writing method gives people a very good reading experience. Disadvantages: Realistic logic is very irritating, such as the plot of Goose Factory that targets the protagonist without thinking. When the archaeological team and Sister Zhou discovered that the ancient tomb in reality was exactly the same as in the game and three people had been sacrificed, they all thought about how to clear the game and watch others clear the game to ensure the safety of the archaeologists, instead of looking for the protagonist, the game producer, to be a consultant. I hope the author will consider this realistic logic. Overall, this book has its own merits, so you can read it without overthinking it.
Guanhouyu
I can only say that the idea of writing so many chapters for a game is good and the overall pace is very slow. There are more than 100 chapters in a game that is not over yet, and the protagonist does not have his own company, so others will definitely suspect something. The company is just a shell company and others can check it out clearly. Don't others suspect that you are coming up with the next game? If you come up with such a high-quality game for no reason, you can make the first game yourself for a long time and no one else will doubt it. I can only say that the writing was okay, but the main character's role is relatively small and unnecessary. At least create a company and give something to the people under you to do it. You can't just fabricate people out of thin air, it's not sb either.
I can't stand watching the game anymore when I see it mirroring reality. I write one plot and one character over and over again. It's just making up the numbers and it's disgusting!
The game line and the official archeology line are both pretty good, but the main character keeps jumping around and the number of words taken up is really disgusting.
The game plot and the official archaeological plot are both quite interesting, but can you make the presence of the pig's feet lower and stop making people disgusting? Are you a loser? The main character can't continue writing if he doesn't pretend to be cool, and all the staff are downgraded.
If you haven't seen it, be cautious before entering. If you don't have full poison resistance, it is recommended to avoid it.
It was quite enjoyable at first, but as soon as I saw the plot of the fight with Goose Factory, I was addicted again. I flipped through the table of contents and found that the next one or two hundred chapters were still going on and I was addicted to it. The purpose of reading cool novels is to relax and have fun. Why do you do all these bloody plots? The main character looks like an idiot. The whole book has more than 400 chapters, almost half of which is about a wonderful ancient city. It's another book from a studio that just doesn't make enough money.
It's written that the protagonist personally went to rob a tomb, wouldn't it be nice to write about the game? The further back, the uglier it becomes
Studio Literature Bar, there is also a book called "Making Qixing Lu Palace" that scared Sister Zhou to tears
G Yeah, it's good. It's well written, but it's so messed up. I'm still not happy with it.
It feels okay, just a little lacking😊😊
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Official(61)Scraped 3d ago
Chapter 144 The exquisite ancient city is not over yet
It's basically just a waste of money. I don't have the energy to pay anymore to pursue it. I don't recommend it to those who want to read it. If you like slow-paced reading, it doesn't matter. There are 144 chapters in Jingjue Ancient City. According to the author's writing style, it is estimated that there will be 500 chapters after Yunnan Worm Valley. There are about 600 chapters, and you will be charged 10 coins for each chapter. You can calculate how much it will cost after reading two chapters. Gui Blowing the Lantern seems to have a total of 8 chapters. It really drags the plot. After finishing Gui Blowing the Lantern, you can write notes on tomb robbing. With such awesome game production equipment, can you just write so many novels casually? Does the writing have to be so watery?
To be honest
When I first started reading it, I was thinking about it, so I felt very disgusted and angry when I saw the logic bugs and the halo of intelligence. But I still caught up with the latest chapter without knowing it. After calming down, I found that this book is also attractive. Advantages: The plot of the game is very well written, especially the step-by-step growth of Sister Zhou to Shirley Yang. This writing method gives people a very good reading experience. Disadvantages: Realistic logic is very irritating, such as the plot of Goose Factory that targets the protagonist without thinking. When the archaeological team and Sister Zhou discovered that the ancient tomb in reality was exactly the same as in the game and three people had been sacrificed, they all thought about how to clear the game and watch others clear the game to ensure the safety of the archaeologists, instead of looking for the protagonist, the game producer, to be a consultant. I hope the author will consider this realistic logic. Overall, this book has its own merits, so you can read it without overthinking it.
Guanhouyu
I can only say that the idea of writing so many chapters for a game is good and the overall pace is very slow. There are more than 100 chapters in a game that is not over yet, and the protagonist does not have his own company, so others will definitely suspect something. The company is just a shell company and others can check it out clearly. Don't others suspect that you are coming up with the next game? If you come up with such a high-quality game for no reason, you can make the first game yourself for a long time and no one else will doubt it. I can only say that the writing was okay, but the main character's role is relatively small and unnecessary. At least create a company and give something to the people under you to do it. You can't just fabricate people out of thin air, it's not sb either.
I can't stand watching the game anymore when I see it mirroring reality. I write one plot and one character over and over again. It's just making up the numbers and it's disgusting!
The game line and the official archeology line are both pretty good, but the main character keeps jumping around and the number of words taken up is really disgusting.
The game plot and the official archaeological plot are both quite interesting, but can you make the presence of the pig's feet lower and stop making people disgusting? Are you a loser? The main character can't continue writing if he doesn't pretend to be cool, and all the staff are downgraded.
If you haven't seen it, be cautious before entering. If you don't have full poison resistance, it is recommended to avoid it.
It was quite enjoyable at first, but as soon as I saw the plot of the fight with Goose Factory, I was addicted again. I flipped through the table of contents and found that the next one or two hundred chapters were still going on and I was addicted to it. The purpose of reading cool novels is to relax and have fun. Why do you do all these bloody plots? The main character looks like an idiot. The whole book has more than 400 chapters, almost half of which is about a wonderful ancient city. It's another book from a studio that just doesn't make enough money.
It's written that the protagonist personally went to rob a tomb, wouldn't it be nice to write about the game? The further back, the uglier it becomes
Studio Literature Bar, there is also a book called "Making Qixing Lu Palace" that scared Sister Zhou to tears
G Yeah, it's good. It's well written, but it's so messed up. I'm still not happy with it.
It feels okay, just a little lacking😊😊









