
Zhu Xian: Starting from Saving Xiaobai, Becoming an Immortal
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Ye Jingtang has traveled through the world of Zhu Xian for three years, and has been concentrating on practicing and signing in everywhere. Obtained the Chaos Divine Weapon Hunyuan Wine Flask that can smelt all things into wine. Obtained the same double eyes as the perfect world that sees through all illusions, and the supreme immortal body with the posture of becoming an immortal. Three months before Gui Li and Jin Ping'er made a big fuss in Fenxiang Valley, they signed in and obtained the most precious Xuanhuojian. When the night finally came, he took advantage of the chaos to enter the Xuanhuo Altar of Fenxiang Valley, and before rescuing Xiaobai, the nine-tailed sky fox, he signed in and obtained the Yuelao Concentric Lock. In the third floor of the Xuanhuo Altar, Ye Jingtang stared at the nine-tailed sky fox: "Before I rescue you, can you open a lock for me first?" ......... A hundred years after entering the mortal world, his ascension is imminent. The nine-tailed sky fox looked at Ye Jingtang beside him: "Husband, that lock not only locked my person, but also locked my heart. Wait for me!" Lu Xueqi: "Jingtang, even without that lock, I think I would still fall in love with you!" Jin Ping'er: "Husband... Before I become an immortal, you must remember to miss me..." Night Terror Hall, looking back to the human world: "The road to immortality is invincible, and it takes a hundred years to become an immortal. Everyone, please don't cry, I'm waiting for you in front..." On this day, he opened the sky with one sword! On this day, he killed the immortal with one sword! On this day, he took off from the same spot!
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Official(44)Scraped 13d ago
About the heroine of this book
In the early stage... Or in other words, I currently have three female protagonists planned. One: Nine-tailed Sky Fox Xiaobai Second: Acacia Pie Golden Ping'er Third: Qingyun Sect Lu Xueqi As for the rest, I haven't thought about it yet, at least not while I can write this book! As for the plot, it's more about daily life. Of course, there will also be some about spiritual practice and fighting, but it won't be too long. Please show mercy to those two-star professional households!
What the hell are you writing? First, the storyteller is very dramatic, and then he takes stock of the stunning list, reveals this, reveals that, and shows that you are very capable? Aren't you going to live in seclusion? If you do it in such a high-profile manner, you don't need to be so high-profile to make money, right? It's better to stop living in seclusion and go out to fight. It's better than this.
It's nice to read, very good. Please write more and don't stop updating.
Do you have Yu Ji Suigetsu? Can I collect it?
Ye Jingtang likes Xiaobai a little too much, and is full of intentions to take advantage of his other women.
It seems to be similar to Tomato's, just a harem with no bright spots and no passion.
The protagonist dressed a little too late, so she probably won't be able to be with Lu Xueqi. Alas, I can't help it. Xiaobai is also very beautiful anyway.
The pace of this book is a little slower. It doesn't matter whether you torture the protagonist or not. The main thing is to write the emotional line in a more detailed way. In the beginning, when Xiaofan becomes Guili, it's very boring to chase Naiqi with that lock.
As long as you want to break the Xuanhuo Chain, there is a very extreme way to go, that is to chop off the claws, not to mention that what he is locking is the claws, not the body.
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Community(0)
Official(44)Scraped 13d ago
About the heroine of this book
In the early stage... Or in other words, I currently have three female protagonists planned. One: Nine-tailed Sky Fox Xiaobai Second: Acacia Pie Golden Ping'er Third: Qingyun Sect Lu Xueqi As for the rest, I haven't thought about it yet, at least not while I can write this book! As for the plot, it's more about daily life. Of course, there will also be some about spiritual practice and fighting, but it won't be too long. Please show mercy to those two-star professional households!
What the hell are you writing? First, the storyteller is very dramatic, and then he takes stock of the stunning list, reveals this, reveals that, and shows that you are very capable? Aren't you going to live in seclusion? If you do it in such a high-profile manner, you don't need to be so high-profile to make money, right? It's better to stop living in seclusion and go out to fight. It's better than this.
It's nice to read, very good. Please write more and don't stop updating.
Do you have Yu Ji Suigetsu? Can I collect it?
Ye Jingtang likes Xiaobai a little too much, and is full of intentions to take advantage of his other women.
It seems to be similar to Tomato's, just a harem with no bright spots and no passion.
The protagonist dressed a little too late, so she probably won't be able to be with Lu Xueqi. Alas, I can't help it. Xiaobai is also very beautiful anyway.
The pace of this book is a little slower. It doesn't matter whether you torture the protagonist or not. The main thing is to write the emotional line in a more detailed way. In the beginning, when Xiaofan becomes Guili, it's very boring to chase Naiqi with that lock.
As long as you want to break the Xuanhuo Chain, there is a very extreme way to go, that is to chop off the claws, not to mention that what he is locking is the claws, not the body.


















