I Practice Martial Arts and Kill Gods in a Fantasy World

To be honest, the author's writing is okay, but the problem is also obvious. The plot development is too dry, or the protagonist's path is too smooth. But on the other hand, the protagonist's smooth path is not a fault in itself. If you follow Gou Daoliu, there shouldn't be too many conflicts in the plot. However, the cheats the author gave to the protagonist are too strong, the crisis is too fierce and the time is too close. The combination does not match Gou Daoliu. Such a fierce attack should be paired with a pure and refreshing routine of slashing and upgrading all the way. This is what JiaDianliu novels are like, the main character upgrades like crazy all the way, similar to the type of fighting to support fighting. Otherwise, you have to make it smaller. It's the kind of stream that never ends. Therefore, the author needs to control the speed of the novel. The protagonist's upgrade speed in the early and middle stages of the novel can be relatively well controlled. To put it bluntly, this book is that the big crisis of the White Lotus Sect appears too early, and there should not be so many channels for the protagonist to absorb spiritual power too early. Instead, the world view should be gradually opened up as the protagonist's strength increases and the map is changed. Then the protagonist has access to items that can absorb spiritual power. The absorption method of directly trapping ghosts and gods should not appear until the middle of the book. It is relatively easier to write a high-quality story by opening it step by step, but a pure and refreshing plot that does not suppress the protagonist at all will test the author's writing skills. It is very difficult to write well and attract people, and it is easy to fail to write later!

I've been reading the author's books since I was a Cong Daqian Martial Saint, and they're pretty good. It's almost meaningless, too dry and dry. For example, in this book, there can be multiple senior sisters, but they are already together after opening the book. Don't touch the peach blossoms outside? The peach blossom results don't need to be together to achieve the effect by just having fun, so there is no need to lose so much fun? So it's dry, there is no secret coolness, it's all about practicing martial arts and scanning pictures, it's like hanging up.

These are troubled times. If someone can become a gang leader, it would be inappropriate for you to describe him as a pig-brained person, right? There is no right or wrong between good and bad villains, only different positions. Don't write the villain as anything.

My realm is slow and I talk too much. I obviously have the opportunity to improve my realm, but I'm just afraid of it. I just make excuses to show off my numbers.

It's beautiful, I need more updates.