Starting from Zhu Xian: Full of Magic Skills and Capture Xiaobai

Welfare building, my wife sent it here

Picked up online. I don't know what LSP drew it.

Five stars for you, if you have more female protagonists, don't be a eunuch

It's all pretentious words, with only a few words in the text. Can't stand it

It's a bit too much to pretend to be x. The point is that it's not very smooth. If it's smooth, it's okay if it's too much. But it's not smooth... It feels a bit awkward. Of course, this is just a personal opinion. If you have different opinions, please don't complain.

The description of the characters is not delicate enough. Originally, the system flow was just a cool novel, and if you write it like this, it will be a brainless cool novel. Nowadays, people like to read cool novels, but they have to be enjoyable enough. You may be able to write one or two hundred chapters, but after three or four hundred chapters, no one will read it, and they will criticize you even if they don't read it. I suggest you read more books by great masters, and the next book will not be like this one.

He writes like an idiot, only pretending to be cool

Holy book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after watching Tian Can Tu Tu, and sighed after watching Tian Can Tu Tu. Chen Dong fell silent after watching it. This must be one of the four great masterpieces. 1. It is definitely the greatest sacred book of the 21st century. The Holy Ruins are in front of it. Almost literary talent! Doubo almost has no connotation in front of it! Zhu Xian almost felt emotional in front of it! Zhe Tian can almost imagine it in front of it! Buddha almost made a plan in front of it! A once-in-a-century classic of online novels! The greatest literary work of the 21st century! Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naiyan, Wu Cheng'en, Cao Xueqin, Kong Mo, Lao Zhuang, Li Du, Su Xin, Qin Emperor, Han Wu, Tang family, Song ancestors, Genghis Khan, Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernia, Aristotle, all said it was good after reading it! The author's book is really well written. The writing style is fluent and the rhetoric is appropriate. It is deeply rooted in the legacy of the Wei and Jin dynasties, and it also carries forward the style of the Tang and Song Dynasties to the core. I can read this book by the author in my lifetime. It is really my blessing in three lifetimes. After reading this book by the author, I felt an indescribable feeling of sadness - ah, such a good novel, what should I do if I can never read it again in the future? So what should I do? It wasn't until I put the author's book on my bookshelf without hesitation that the excitement in my heart gradually calmed down. But I immediately thought, if others can't read such a good novel, wouldn't it be a waste of the author's efforts? After a painful ideological struggle, I finally made up my mind to sacrifice the small self and dedicate myself to the greater self. I want to take out this book review and dedicate it to the world for reading. I want to dedicate this novel to the world. One - go straight. Go up, go, go up! Until everyone sees it! When I walk between heaven and earth, the sun is scorching and the moon is bright in the sky, I have to ask, is this novel enough, is it enjoyable? Not enough? When I walk on the rivers and lakes, the rivers are surging and the water is rolling, I have to ask, is this novel enjoyable enough? Not enough! When I walk on the top of the mountains, among the beautiful buildings and jade buildings, and the immortals in the sea of ​​clouds, you have to ask me - is this novel enjoyable to update? Not enough! When I walk on the top of the mountains, seeing jade characters in Qionglou, and immortals in the sea of ​​clouds, you have to ask me, is this novel updated quickly enough? Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters, not enough speed content! Not even enough! Dear author, you are so good-looking, so temperamental, so beautiful, with a natural beauty, white teeth and red lips, a frown and a frown, like a water hibiscus, graceful and graceful, with a natural fragrance, petite and delicate, a peerless beauty, picturesque features, clear eyebrows, as beautiful as a crown jade, a flowery face and a moon-like appearance, charming face, bright eyes and white teeth, charming, alluring, alluring, and perfect. The eyebrows are as beautiful as flowers and jade, the eyes are cut like water, the graceful and beautiful eyebrows are clear, the eyes are beautiful, the appearance is beautiful, the beauty is beautiful, the peach grains are beautiful, the manner is beautiful, the hands are like soft jade, the moon is shy, the flowers come out of the water, the lotus comes out of the water, the sky is gentle and lovely, the country is gentle and beautiful, noble and cold, the eyes are clear, the beauty is like a fairy, ice and snow, smart, gentle and beautiful, like a fairy. Unparalleled natural beauty. So can you update?

Um, I also said that I started capturing Xiao Bai from Zhu Xian, but the results haven't appeared yet. The first chapter of the book next door was released, and I looked at the gift comparison, and the gift data of that book is indeed better than yours. Then most people clicked in when they saw a newbie, but when they clicked in they found out that there was no one there, so the score was just over 7 points, otherwise it would have been around 8.5.

Leveling up, one level a day, four levels in three years. And Qi Hao knows the Divine Sword and Thunder Control Technique? When fighting, you have to show off all the time. Quotes