
The Fight Starts with Hugging Yunyun's Thigh
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Official(12)Scraped 16d ago
When I read fanfics, I really hate the original protagonist. After a normal friendship, it's nothing. He's licking this person hard before they even know you and doesn't know who you are. He's doing all kinds of help. He's doing this before he's even made friends. This makes me feel that Xiao Yan is still the protagonist of this book. Apart from this, everything else is well written. I'm torn about whether to read it or not.
The plot is good
The plot is good, and the character setting is also excellent, but I personally think that you can make friends with the protagonist Xiao Yan, but that is based on at least meeting and getting to know each other, and the behavior of the protagonist in this book is basically a bit like licking the protagonist. Secondly, I personally suggest that it is better not to have too many female protagonists. Although Dou Qi Continent is ancient Feudal, but it is not feudal influenced by the "Zhu Xi Thought" group, and it follows the forest law of "the strong is respected". Let's not talk about others. Yun Yun has attracted much attention since she was a child. She has extraordinary talent in training and is a well-deserved proud daughter of heaven. She has a sense of arrogance in her heart. How can she accept "several women serving one husband"? Is the Yun Yun who has accepted it still the Yun Yun we love? Love is the most selfish from beginning to end.
Thank you for your hard work, author! But can I get a few more pictures?
I hope there will be more emotional lines with Yun Yun, I really like it👴
I like this kind of protagonist very much, and the emotional line is also very reasonable. Come on, author, I will always be your most loyal fan.
eunuch
Eunuch eunuch eunuch eunuch eunuch eunuch eunuch eunuch eunuch
May I ask when this book will be on the shelves? ?
I knew it when I saw someone in the comments saying that you licked the main character. I knew there was no need for this book. It had no achievements at all and I couldn't continue writing it.
I think it is better to have fewer female protagonists, and there is no need to add Xiao Xun'er. Since we are interested in making friends with Xiao Yan, there is no need to add her. Too many female protagonists make the protagonist passionate, so you can try the setting of a dedicated male protagonist.
It's okay. A few years ago this kind of fanfic was okay, but now it's not good. It's all the same plot.
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Official(12)Scraped 16d ago
When I read fanfics, I really hate the original protagonist. After a normal friendship, it's nothing. He's licking this person hard before they even know you and doesn't know who you are. He's doing all kinds of help. He's doing this before he's even made friends. This makes me feel that Xiao Yan is still the protagonist of this book. Apart from this, everything else is well written. I'm torn about whether to read it or not.
The plot is good
The plot is good, and the character setting is also excellent, but I personally think that you can make friends with the protagonist Xiao Yan, but that is based on at least meeting and getting to know each other, and the behavior of the protagonist in this book is basically a bit like licking the protagonist. Secondly, I personally suggest that it is better not to have too many female protagonists. Although Dou Qi Continent is ancient Feudal, but it is not feudal influenced by the "Zhu Xi Thought" group, and it follows the forest law of "the strong is respected". Let's not talk about others. Yun Yun has attracted much attention since she was a child. She has extraordinary talent in training and is a well-deserved proud daughter of heaven. She has a sense of arrogance in her heart. How can she accept "several women serving one husband"? Is the Yun Yun who has accepted it still the Yun Yun we love? Love is the most selfish from beginning to end.
Thank you for your hard work, author! But can I get a few more pictures?
I hope there will be more emotional lines with Yun Yun, I really like it👴
I like this kind of protagonist very much, and the emotional line is also very reasonable. Come on, author, I will always be your most loyal fan.
eunuch
Eunuch eunuch eunuch eunuch eunuch eunuch eunuch eunuch eunuch
May I ask when this book will be on the shelves? ?
I knew it when I saw someone in the comments saying that you licked the main character. I knew there was no need for this book. It had no achievements at all and I couldn't continue writing it.
I think it is better to have fewer female protagonists, and there is no need to add Xiao Xun'er. Since we are interested in making friends with Xiao Yan, there is no need to add her. Too many female protagonists make the protagonist passionate, so you can try the setting of a dedicated male protagonist.
It's okay. A few years ago this kind of fanfic was okay, but now it's not good. It's all the same plot.









