The God of War in the Training Ground

The front is really nice (reason for Samsung). (Reason for missing two stars) But I forgot when it started. It was probably after the protagonist cultivated to the God of War. I don't know if it was because of the battle power. It felt like it was written by a different person. The writing level dropped too much. The plot seemed to be under the word count and the dialogue was like a child's.

I can't hold on for three chapters. I can't write anything else except women.

It's so outrageous, from 50 to 99.9 In two days, it's so funny

It feels like an AI-generated novel, with a lot of grammar and weird word usage.

I finally wrote about the God of War, and it was very enjoyable to write down.

Others have three golden cards, you have one golden card

I have seen 380 chapters so far, and around 270 chapters I started to feel that I was not decisive enough to kill, and some people jumped to the point and jumped sideways repeatedly. I'm here to see the cool stuff, not the ridicule. I would like to give it to new book friends, just read 200 pictures, but I don't recommend the rest.

The front part is okay, but the back part is very poisonous. I can't understand many of them, and I always feel that it's inexplicable.

Although the beginning of this book is in the system category, the system and Gou Dao jointly wrote it well, which is great. The beginning of this book is not bad, and it is okay to give it a 4-star rating, because Gou Dao also gets extra points. Unfortunately, the more I write, the more I deviate from Gou Dao: 1. This system can count the increase of Qi and blood by 0.1, But cannot remember the current Qi and blood value. It also needs a school watch. Isn't the school watch connected to the Internet? Then how can you keep going? 2. The background setting is that talent will not be tested until college, but the difference between D-level and S-level is set to be more than 20 times. So in a world where death can happen at any time, how much loss will it be if S-level talent dies before reaching college? So how could we wait until college to get tested? 3. The protagonist in the first chapter is the first day the protagonist comes to this world. According to data calculation, he only cultivated 0.4 Qi and blood, and the remaining 7.2 Qi and blood were cultivated by Jiang Chi. So 20 times is only 8. Even if it is rounded to 10, the second day after the protagonist comes, which is the third day of training, Han Qianqian's qi and blood is 69.9, Which is the third day of official training. The average daily qi and blood is 23.3? Isn't it funny? 60 Times difference? 4. Han Qianqian had 69.9 Qi and blood in three days, with an average of 23.3 Qi and blood per day. After another four days, 108, the average is about 9.3 Per day? What is this? Could it be that it was already the eighth day of training when the protagonist met Han Qianqian? Then Zhao Feiyun had 49.2 Qi and blood on the ninth day, which is about 5.5 Per day on average? So what is the difference between A-class 800% and S-class 2000%? 5. The protagonist practiced on his own for 12 hours on the first day and gained 7.2 Qi and blood, with a total value of 7.6 And 0.4 Left by his predecessor. The next day, I found my sparring partner Liu Hong and got 9.9, And I got 5.4. The total value should be 22.9, Not 22.7. Han Qianqian got 69.9 That day. On the third day, Zhang Luo's sparring hour was 1.8, 12 Hours was 21.6, And Liu Hong was 6.6. The total value should be 51.1, Not 54.5. Zhao Feiyun was 49.2 That day. On the fourth day, Zhang Qingyao trained for 20 hours, a total of 84, which should be 135.1 Or 139.5, Not 140 On the fifth day, Liu Hong's sparring score was 164. Not counting the details, Han Qianqian's score was 99.9 That day. On the sixth day, I took medicine 5, I spent 10.5 Hours with Hua Yingyue, 6.3, I was 11.7 In 6.5 Hours, and after 2 hours of sparring with Liu Hong, it was 7.4. Zhao Feiyun was 78 on the day, Zhao Feiyun was 28.8 In three days, an average of 9.6 Per day, Han Qianqian was 108 on the day, an increase of 9.1 In one day, which is lower than Zhao Feiyun. 6. The protagonist is practicing combat skills all the time, and then sleeps with his arms folded in his arms, allowing Han Qianqian to discover that the battery of the bracelet is low. The point is that he plays a person who does not seek to make progress, so why is he still wearing the bracelet? The bracelet only has enough power for three days? Why did Han Qianqian casually take off the bracelet she got from his hand? The point is that after Han Qianqian gets the bracelet and wears it on her hand, it will take some time for testing to get the results, but when she gets it, she can see the protagonist's 194.4 7. Even if Han Qianqian discovers the protagonist's vitality and blood points, it doesn't matter. But Han Qianqian knew that the protagonist wanted to hide it and decided to hide it for him. Why did she take the protagonist to the battlefield? This is not the most ridiculous thing. What is even more ridiculous is that the protagonist and the others have not been in school for half a month, and the school has organized freshman idiots to experience the battlefield. These people have no fighting skills at all. After all, there are only 30 days until the end of the month. To sum up, this book borrows Gou Daowen's title and is indeed a good book. What's more, the system of the previous system book cannot actually count Qi and blood. You need to use a bracelet, and the settings of a system book are actually messed up. This book deserves 2.5 Stars, which is good. Giving 3 stars is an encouragement.

Virtual battles, repeated plots, shock, numbness, constant substitutions