
The War of Resistance Begins with the Militia
by Talking About War And Moonlight
About This Novel
I don't see you, the Han Dynasty's army is over, and the weak crowns are tied to the prisoners and they ask for long tassels. I don't see you, Ban Ding is far away, Jueyu Qingqi urges Zhan Yun! The wind is roaring, the horses are braying, and the Yellow River is roaring. One billion soldiers on the Great Wall, commanding a hundred thousand tiger and wolf brigades, leaping on horses and raising swords, compose a soul-stirring hymn of iron and blood under the shining of the red star. It all started with the militiamen in the remote mountains.
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Official(8)Scraped 11d ago
If you don't know how to write about women, don't write about it. It's as disgusting as Tang San.
Your writing is good, but it also has shortcomings
Explain the situation. The narrative is very coherent. But writing a lot of political stuff can easily lead to problems. Brother, you should pay more attention.
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I personally don't like the character Su Lan very much. It's like there's an extra mouse poop in the porridge. The character of the county-level cadres during the Anti-Japanese War was written like this. I knew many people would die.
The war of resistance must start with the generals, otherwise it will be boring!
Make up the numbers, make up the numbers, make up the numbers, I don't know what to write, just make up the numbers
The book is actually okay, but your writing is too perfunctory. I have died hundreds of times behind the enemy lines. The main reason is that it is not rigorous. In fact, systematic writing can be written on the front line or in a place where you have already established a foothold. It is better to be more rigorous. In the past, many people had no education but were not fools. Military writing is actually very difficult to write. This is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.
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Official(8)Scraped 11d ago
If you don't know how to write about women, don't write about it. It's as disgusting as Tang San.
Your writing is good, but it also has shortcomings
Explain the situation. The narrative is very coherent. But writing a lot of political stuff can easily lead to problems. Brother, you should pay more attention.
How to say
I personally don't like the character Su Lan very much. It's like there's an extra mouse poop in the porridge. The character of the county-level cadres during the Anti-Japanese War was written like this. I knew many people would die.
The war of resistance must start with the generals, otherwise it will be boring!
Make up the numbers, make up the numbers, make up the numbers, I don't know what to write, just make up the numbers
The book is actually okay, but your writing is too perfunctory. I have died hundreds of times behind the enemy lines. The main reason is that it is not rigorous. In fact, systematic writing can be written on the front line or in a place where you have already established a foothold. It is better to be more rigorous. In the past, many people had no education but were not fools. Military writing is actually very difficult to write. This is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.
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