After Reaching the Level of Cultivation Game

As for the style of this book, I believe not everyone likes it, but I really like it. Maybe the author's early writing was a bit lacking, but overall it's really good. This is the only book I've been following. The style of novels about cultivating immortals is really in line with my taste. I support the author a lot. Also, if you want to be a cultivator, you can also discuss it. I forgot to take a screenshot. I only have this photo.

When I first read the title, I thought it was another slap-in-the-face novel. After reading it carefully, it suited my taste. The invincible and laid-back protagonist plus three apprentices with different personalities (all female, why do novels about cultivating immortals like to recruit female disciples? Is the protagonist just playing around to cultivate →_→, ╯^╰ shameless) formed a quiet and happy picture. There are not many novels like this that are neither impatient nor impatient, so cherish them! The author must be steady and don't write too fast. It doesn't matter if the writing is appropriate.

After reading more than ten chapters of Poison, I vomited blood and reached the world of cultivating immortals at full level. I wanted to be ordinary and to be like the light, but ended up acting in all kinds of unique ways, making clothes and sweatshirts and sweatpants? When someone else wears your sweatshirt and pants in ancient costume, do you call it ordinary? You say it with your mouth, but think in your heart, be ordinary, be ordinary, but in the end, you stand out and you are high-profile, what do you think? I usually don't want to comment on other people's works, but you are really disgusting and invincible in the world. You either become high-profile, or you act like an ordinary person, talking low-key, thinking low-key, and end up making yourself conspicuous and nondescript? The high profile is compared to a human, the low profile is compared to a demon, you call this nondescript transvestite? The cliché is so cliche, the city lord's son is a bully and a playboy. You mentioned it in your article as cliché, so why did you write about this person yourself? A follower of a high-level cultivator, knowing full well that the spiritual root of a pear tree cannot be improved unless a major practitioner of great luck can improve it, ends up forcibly erasing the possibility of the influence of the protagonist, thinking that the pear tree itself has made progress, and killing the pear tree that cannot be caused by the protagonist to become spiritual, why? A small follower has felt the extraordinary temperament in the protagonist several times (the important thing is the temperament similar to his husband, that is, a high-level practitioner), but he is still arrogant. Who is this little guy following? Immortal King? Look down on the people of the world? Who gave him the capital? Even if he is a practitioner who is weaker than his master, can he be offended by just a servant? Is this called the world of cultivating immortals? Call it Erhan World, everyone is so stupid.

This book is very good, very Xiaoyao, worthy of the author naming the protagonist Xiaoyaozi. "There is a way of seeing mountains as mountains, and water as water. Mountains are not mountains, and water is not water. Mountains are still mountains, and water is still water." It is very rare nowadays. It is really good! There is just one thing that is not good, that is, there are too many women. It would be better to add some male compatriots, so that it would be better (●°u°●) "

If you can hit a negative score, labor and management will definitely hit a 100% negative score. You will be invincible. Do you still want to be an ordinary person? I accept being an ordinary person. After all, Buddha is like a pig's trotter. But since I want to be an ordinary person but find it troublesome to do housework and don't want to use magic. Is it because of calcium deficiency in my brain? This is not called Buddhism, this is called stupidity. Since you dislike your own cultivation and don't want to use it, then you might as well just abolish it. It is absolutely ordinary and can't be hanged even if you want to hang it. Isn't it more ordinary? I have read novels for several years and have never seen any kind of poison, but I have only read 8 chapters of this novel and I can't stand it anymore. The poison has reached a new level, so the author still has something.

First of all, the power system is very confusing. In addition to knowing that the protagonist is invincible, the others are gods from classical mythology, mountain gods, and river gods. They are also foundations and souls of modern cultivation. They are saints and semi-saints. It is inexplicable to upgrade, and it is inexplicable whether the characters are awesome or not. It is simply a hodgepodge of immortals. The second is the protagonist. A modern man traveled to the world of immortality with invincible game attributes and became a teacher. This is all OK. But except for the occasional practice, most of the pages are actually preaching through language. I don't know whether this is the character of the protagonist, or whether the author wants to vent his personality of being a teacher through the novel. The protagonist has to tell everyone a paradoxical truth to convince people. The third is dialogue. The novel is filled with a lot of dialogue, and there is always a sense of pretentiousness that cannot be concealed between the lines of what everyone says. Everyone doesn't talk clearly, they always want the other person to appreciate and appreciate everything carefully. The wording is actually quite classical, and it can be seen that it actually has a certain literary background. However, the feeling of showboating and contrivedness that comes over the whole novel is very uncomfortable. The fourth is the plot. Either using a city as a chessboard or playing with the fate of a country in the middle of applause, it looks very grand. But every time the story is always unclear, the beginning is inexplicable, the development is inexplicable, the ending is inexplicable, plus the pretentiousness between the words, I feel uncomfortable. I read it very carefully. I was attracted by the creativity at the beginning, but I was completely withdrawn by the above four points step by step. I really feel uncomfortable and unhappy, so please be careful.

I have always emphasized that I should be ordinary and be an ordinary person. Author, look at what you have written. If you want to be ordinary, you can live in the mountains and farm. First, you need to master various magical powers, and then settle in the city. You want to be ordinary, but then you find it troublesome to hire a nanny. How can you be a beggar? Who knows the calligraphy you write? You write about the world, you like to practice, there are no private schools in this city, how do you know the calligraphy, and then you want to be ordinary and open a private school, like to be an educator, and then write a heroine because you have broken the mirror, and then you want to be your student. Since you know how to make the clothes you ordered, why didn't you buy the fabric and go back to make it yourself? You also made a bet with others. In the end, the cloth shop owner's wife died, and you still wanted to save her. You said it yourself when your students fight with others. When tree fellers meet each other, they will fight each other and only one of them will survive. You still have to help her, and you have to help her become a saint. Author, you might as well open your own sect, or recruit disciples, or open a private school, completely break away from the private school, and live an ordinary life. You might as well go to the ends of the world with your sword, and only the women will be killed, which will save you the need to find excuses to add a harem.

I really like this novel. We are all mortals. After all, we pretend to be pigs and eat tigers, but we still do evil with the restlessness and false thoughts in our hearts. This article has changed the structure and adjustments of the novels I have read before; the content is enriched with the principles of "Tao", and the author's writing style is solid and the author's three views are correct.

1. A seemingly high-ranking person was deprived of peace of mind for a month because his waiter took two copper coins. It is only natural for people to take money for doing things for you. 2. I want to be lazy and leisurely, but I make a fire and cook meals and keep busy. I also want to be free, but I am the most tiring teacher. Such contradictory behaviors cannot be unified, which makes people look awkward. 3. Confusion of power is the most taboo in invincible writing. It cannot give readers a sense of involvement. In the final analysis, the novel is for others to read, not the author's one-man show.

I like to read the genre written by the author (･ิϖ･ิ)っ but my book review was off ( ) ~→I also gave the vote