
Tokyo: I Loaded the Love Advice System
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Travel through Tokyo. The second palace law, who only wants to study, make money, and improve his social class, is equipped with a love advice system. As long as he has effective advice from an S-level girl, he can become stronger. Ritsu Ninomiya: "Sakurai-san, what kind of boys do you like?" Karin Sakurai: "I like boys with good grades." Ritsu Ninomiya: "So how can I become a top student like you?" Karin Sakurai: "First of all, you must listen carefully in class, and secondly, you must complete your homework after class, and then with a little bit of hard work, I believe Ninomiya-kun's grades will definitely improve." Ding. Listen carefully in class, complete homework after class, and study hard for more than ten hours, and your high school test-taking skills experience value will be +1. More than half a month later. Ninomiya Ritsu: "Sakurai-san, I got a recommendation from Tokyo University!" Sakurai Karin: "..."
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Official(78)Scraped 10d ago
While talking about being responsible, he is all kinds of scumbag, scumbag male protagonist
I was almost finished watching it, but it turned out to be more and more scumbag, and it was the kind of deliberate expression of being played by women. I didn't think that scumbags are forced by bad women. It's disgusting. You, a male protagonist, can have a sense of responsibility when you open a harem? From the beginning to the end, I kept making promises even though I couldn't do it. I said I didn't want to hurt, but at the same time, I hurt someone intentionally. And there is that Nana Kobayashi, who is obviously capable of hitting her enough and just being a passerby is enough, but she still has to be turned into a pet for training. She has no feelings and even takes the first time. She claims that the tattoo can be washed off to teach a lesson, but she takes the first time away and still trains her every day. It seems that the physical things are easy to wash, and the psychological things are easy to wash. This author's views are extremely wrong. Even in harem novels, he has the most disgusting male protagonist.
suggestion
Now updated to the point that the protagonist has entered the House of Representatives. This is a point. You can focus more on the House of Representatives. Try not to describe the second generation. For women, use the power of the family to suppress it. Then the protagonist uses that childish strategy to solve the problem. It is too cliché. It is a poorly written plot. It is okay to have twists and turns in love. After all, your main plot is love. If you have a smooth career in the official career, it will be over. You can also write about the parents, the public, the media, etc. For the protagonist's participation in the House of Representatives at a young age.
If you can write, write, if you can't, then cut it off. Is it so procrastinating to have a writing competition? Hurry up and advance the plot. A good article should be enjoyable to the end. Don't get stuck one after another.
Don't force the plot! ! !
The first part was good, but by the 32nd chapter, I just lost my mind in pushing the plot. Earlier I could still run on the treadmill, but then I had to run on a rainy day, which was really no brainer! ! ! I really don't understand
I really want to scold directly. This protagonist is so scumbag. He uses the system and uses others to improve himself. However, in this case, he deceived many very good girls, such as Sakurai Kari. The moment I saw her saying that she was not going to continue school, I felt that the protagonist and her efforts were completely unequal. From the perspective of outsiders, it was the protagonist who persisted in a lot of things in order to chase her, but from our God's perspective, we would feel that the protagonist What kind of scum is a character? And for a girl who can wait for you and give up something she originally wanted for you, which is very important to her, if you don't give the same equal and dedicated affection, it will make people look disgusting, because the person who deceived is a good girl. In this case, the person who deceived is a type of girl like Nana Kobayashi, who is not so good, but will not be so emotional. In short, the scum protagonist is not worthy of so many good heroines.
I was given three golden cards. What do I think about it later on? At the beginning, I confessed to others in public. They were kind enough to block other people's attacks for you, but you still continue to do this? Isn't it soul time-traveling? Doesn't he understand a little social discourse? From the protagonist's obscene perspective, does he think that as long as he does it, he will definitely achieve his goal without considering the consequences? From the perspective of others, the protagonist is just a person with poor looks, poor brains, and poor emotional intelligence. It is difficult to rationalize the plot when his performance suddenly skyrockets. You have to describe the protagonist's childish words and say that the protagonist is 100% Dragon King plus NT.
A deceptive book that tries to persuade everyone to quit within ten chapters.
The protagonist asks questions without being able to guide, and has lived in vain for decades. If he wants to improve his physical fitness, he should use relevant questions to guide him. But any elementary school student understands this, right? Except for the green tea girl, all the members are mentally retarded and imbecile. . . Just speechless
It's extremely poisonous. It's rare to see romance novels written in such a retarded way. Starting from the beginning, every chapter is poisonous.
Obviously the characters were well sketched at the beginning, but after about 20 chapters, the character description took a turn for the worse. The protagonist looked like a rogue, which made him more and more disgusting. The female supporting characters also looked as uncomfortable as if they had taken aphrodisiacs. After reading it today, it didn't look like it was written by a single person who couldn't stand it and said goodbye.
Can't stand it anymore
A piece of history. Is this thing written by a machine? Not even as good as the one in 🍅. When did the threshold here become so low?
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Official(78)Scraped 10d ago
While talking about being responsible, he is all kinds of scumbag, scumbag male protagonist
I was almost finished watching it, but it turned out to be more and more scumbag, and it was the kind of deliberate expression of being played by women. I didn't think that scumbags are forced by bad women. It's disgusting. You, a male protagonist, can have a sense of responsibility when you open a harem? From the beginning to the end, I kept making promises even though I couldn't do it. I said I didn't want to hurt, but at the same time, I hurt someone intentionally. And there is that Nana Kobayashi, who is obviously capable of hitting her enough and just being a passerby is enough, but she still has to be turned into a pet for training. She has no feelings and even takes the first time. She claims that the tattoo can be washed off to teach a lesson, but she takes the first time away and still trains her every day. It seems that the physical things are easy to wash, and the psychological things are easy to wash. This author's views are extremely wrong. Even in harem novels, he has the most disgusting male protagonist.
suggestion
Now updated to the point that the protagonist has entered the House of Representatives. This is a point. You can focus more on the House of Representatives. Try not to describe the second generation. For women, use the power of the family to suppress it. Then the protagonist uses that childish strategy to solve the problem. It is too cliché. It is a poorly written plot. It is okay to have twists and turns in love. After all, your main plot is love. If you have a smooth career in the official career, it will be over. You can also write about the parents, the public, the media, etc. For the protagonist's participation in the House of Representatives at a young age.
If you can write, write, if you can't, then cut it off. Is it so procrastinating to have a writing competition? Hurry up and advance the plot. A good article should be enjoyable to the end. Don't get stuck one after another.
Don't force the plot! ! !
The first part was good, but by the 32nd chapter, I just lost my mind in pushing the plot. Earlier I could still run on the treadmill, but then I had to run on a rainy day, which was really no brainer! ! ! I really don't understand
I really want to scold directly. This protagonist is so scumbag. He uses the system and uses others to improve himself. However, in this case, he deceived many very good girls, such as Sakurai Kari. The moment I saw her saying that she was not going to continue school, I felt that the protagonist and her efforts were completely unequal. From the perspective of outsiders, it was the protagonist who persisted in a lot of things in order to chase her, but from our God's perspective, we would feel that the protagonist What kind of scum is a character? And for a girl who can wait for you and give up something she originally wanted for you, which is very important to her, if you don't give the same equal and dedicated affection, it will make people look disgusting, because the person who deceived is a good girl. In this case, the person who deceived is a type of girl like Nana Kobayashi, who is not so good, but will not be so emotional. In short, the scum protagonist is not worthy of so many good heroines.
I was given three golden cards. What do I think about it later on? At the beginning, I confessed to others in public. They were kind enough to block other people's attacks for you, but you still continue to do this? Isn't it soul time-traveling? Doesn't he understand a little social discourse? From the protagonist's obscene perspective, does he think that as long as he does it, he will definitely achieve his goal without considering the consequences? From the perspective of others, the protagonist is just a person with poor looks, poor brains, and poor emotional intelligence. It is difficult to rationalize the plot when his performance suddenly skyrockets. You have to describe the protagonist's childish words and say that the protagonist is 100% Dragon King plus NT.
A deceptive book that tries to persuade everyone to quit within ten chapters.
The protagonist asks questions without being able to guide, and has lived in vain for decades. If he wants to improve his physical fitness, he should use relevant questions to guide him. But any elementary school student understands this, right? Except for the green tea girl, all the members are mentally retarded and imbecile. . . Just speechless
It's extremely poisonous. It's rare to see romance novels written in such a retarded way. Starting from the beginning, every chapter is poisonous.
Obviously the characters were well sketched at the beginning, but after about 20 chapters, the character description took a turn for the worse. The protagonist looked like a rogue, which made him more and more disgusting. The female supporting characters also looked as uncomfortable as if they had taken aphrodisiacs. After reading it today, it didn't look like it was written by a single person who couldn't stand it and said goodbye.
Can't stand it anymore
A piece of history. Is this thing written by a machine? Not even as good as the one in 🍅. When did the threshold here become so low?
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[Final article][Ni Qing] It's just so-so. It's used to kill time. It's pretty good at the beginning, but it feels a bit awkward at the end. -- It's so difficult to pass the trial




Traveling through Tokyo, can you become stronger by following advice? Why don't I have such a system? I'm super obedient😭




2/5 It's a Tokyo-style work that's barely catchy. It has multiple female protagonists: the class beauty, a beautiful teacher, and the beautiful president of a club with only one person (Nori). Mainly by exercising according to the "requirements" of the love goal, you can obtain the corresponding skills, and you can also add points. The protagonist will improve quickly. There is a flaw in the system settings. Once the love target agrees to the male protagonist's confession, he can no longer provide "requests", so the male protagonist will procrastinate at this time. In addition, looking for other love targets to confess, it is really a bit scumbag. In terms of plot, there are some fixed old-fashioned plots: bad guys, bullying, NC villains.




Travel through Tokyo. The second palace law, who only wants to study, make money, and improve his social class, is equipped with a love advice system. As long as he has effective advice from an S-level girl, he can become stronger. Ninomiya Ritsu: "Sakurai-san, what kind of boys do you like?" Sakurai Karin: "I like boys with good grades.' Ninomiya Ritsu: "Then how can I become a top student like you?" Sakurai Karin: "First of all, you have to listen carefully in class, and secondly, you have to complete your homework after class, and then with a little bit of hard work, I believe Ninomiya-kun's grades will definitely get better. "Ding." Listen carefully in class, complete homework after class, and study hard for more than ten hours, and your high school test-taking skills experience value will be +1. More than half a month later. Ninomiya Ritsu: "Sakurai-san, I got a recommendation from Tokyo University!" Sakurai Karin: "..."













