Swallowing the Starry Sky: Hong, Jidao Pifu System
by Rebirth
About This Novel
[Divine Power to God Style], also known as [Wild Man Style], is the killing route for the strong. Travel through the flood and obtain the [Ji Dao Pei Fu] system. [The first level of the extreme path, the body becomes a furnace. [Second Level of Extreme Path, Life Leap. [The third level of the extreme realm, the ultimate transcendence. ... [Smelt 1000 grass and tree spirits and obtain 2 extreme points. [Smelt 10 wood crystals to obtain 1 Ji Dao point. ... [Smelt 1 piece of the most powerful treasure and get 100000^00 Ji Dao points. [Consumption of 1 Ji Dao point will increase your strength to the seventh level of the planet. [Consume 10 Ji Dao points to upgrade your physical talent to the 'Elementary Miniature Galaxy' level. The Jidao Pifu system focuses on improving physical strength and talent, which is exactly what Hong wants. There are many types of talents, including understanding, affinity with laws, and powerful souls... 'Hong' believes that physical talents, which no one has ever paid attention to, are the first. The body is the most basic and powerful. Strengthen the body's natural potential and develop the most original strength. ... In the genius battle, facing 'Rong Jun', Hong Man said arrogantly, "Don't mess with me online, I'll beat you to death offline!" In the qualification battle, facing the original secret realm genius 'Bo Lan', Hong boasted, "Today you call me the genius of the apocalyptic secret realm and I won't challenge you. What will you call me after the qualification battle?" Exploring the secret realm, facing the strong, "Watch me 'shoot out like a dragon' with my gun, watch me 'turn my gun into a swimming dragon', watch my 'gun pierce through reincarnation'. Forget it, watch me 'turn my body into a gun' and beat you to death!" Many years later, Luo Feng watched as he punched the demon clan to death
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Official(3)Scraped 2d ago
This is not the right start for you. What is Hong's state of mind? If you write about Luo Feng's era, that era had the most good things. Moreover, the character you chose is not right at the beginning. As you wrote it, you can actually write it as Thor. After all, what you wrote is so exciting, what can I say? It's just inexplicable. Thor, that state of mind is also inexplicable to me. It comes up as soon as you think about it, or you can create a new character, a character that is not in the novel. Add it in and you won't think so much. No matter how you write it, it will have 200,000 or 300,000 words?
It doesn't match Hong's state of mind. Sister Li can't handle it.
Feeling inexplicable, whirring
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Official(3)Scraped 2d ago
This is not the right start for you. What is Hong's state of mind? If you write about Luo Feng's era, that era had the most good things. Moreover, the character you chose is not right at the beginning. As you wrote it, you can actually write it as Thor. After all, what you wrote is so exciting, what can I say? It's just inexplicable. Thor, that state of mind is also inexplicable to me. It comes up as soon as you think about it, or you can create a new character, a character that is not in the novel. Add it in and you won't think so much. No matter how you write it, it will have 200,000 or 300,000 words?
It doesn't match Hong's state of mind. Sister Li can't handle it.
Feeling inexplicable, whirring
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