Douluo: Unlock the Secrets of the Human Body and Become a Free Demon

I am very satisfied with the author's book. I think I can't write the real Gu. I don't want to insult the masterpiece in my heart. The third young master of the Tang family is really disgusting and has sealed too many books. It is much simpler to write about Douluo. For Douluo, the master of the three soul beasts was on the verge of extinction but abandoned the entire soul beast clan at the last moment. It would be more fun to write a book to lead the soul beasts to revive like New China and finally kill them in Tangshan. I would like to make some bold suggestions: when you finally enter the God Realm, use the help of the will of the world to pull Dou Yi out of his unhappiness and let him reward Xiao Wu. Killing Tang San directly is too cheap for him. Considering that the picture of the reward is not easy to describe, just write the result after the reward, such as his complexion and the environment around his body. . . . I have never given five stars to QQ readers for so long. You are the first one and probably the last one.

***, Dou San's book cannot be separated from Gu Yuena. I really hope it will be something dark, but it doesn't work. I want to write one myself. What is there to write about this heroine? Raise livestock and use them as food later? Doesn't it smell good?

The extras are better than the main text😑, so exciting, especially Mr. Xiong's heart-breaking words to Gu Yuena of the Tang family universe at the end are really wonderful

Maybe it's my personal reasons. I feel that there is some kind of flaw in the protagonist's character, which I can't describe. Gu Yue feels a little licked? I personally think the emotional development is a bit strange. It doesn't feel like a steady flow but feels like it must be written together. I think the insertion of some truths and poems is a bit abrupt. And the whole process seems to be the protagonist guiding Gu Yue to do things and make decisions. Everything is following the protagonist's ideas. There is no opinion of his own and no character arc. But this book is definitely a masterpiece among many Douluo fans😓

In Dou San Chapter 1583 "Blue Hair Flying, Tang San Protects His Child", Gu Yuena was imprinted by Tang San's spirit, and at the beginning Na'er lost her memory and happened to meet Tang Wulin in a coastal town. 😂Dou Er Chapter 620 Xiao Huo Feidao Zhong wrote that Tang San exerted a subtle influence on Huo Yuhao through Tang Wutong and divine consciousness. 😂

Extras are a true sublimation of the main storyline. Gu Yuena has been manipulated throughout her life in the real sense of the world. In the end, there was a deity who stripped off his soul beast identity and became an adult, and ended up kneeling down and calling Xiao Wu Ma. Although it is sad, at least the original work still places a god king in the position, and Tang Wulin's feelings for her are not fake. I hope the author can open a book about two gods. There are six god kings in the Tang family, and Wang Dong'er is not one of them. No matter how sad Gu Yuena is, it is just framed by outsiders. Wang Dong'er is really controlled by her relatives, and finally becomes a second-level god.

The cold wind blows in the lonely valley, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young man returns. At Danghun Mountain, the stone man sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders and the demon heads north. Thousands of immortals on the upstream river have retreated, and love has lost its hold on tears. Destiny means success or failure. The immortal regrets but I don't. Even at an early age, I knew that things were going to be difficult, but I was still able to fly like a hero among the clouds. The cold wind blows all the way, causing the sea to rise and fall, and the traveler walks alone. A sword is forged with painstaking efforts and painstaking efforts. Nowadays, the sword is pointed at the clouds, practicing Gu, practicing human beings, and practicing heaven.

If you can write down the ancient chief's mental journey well, I think this book is good. In the context of the current homogenization of Douluo fandom, it has its own independent ideas and can clearly depict the growth of the main characters (mainly the Silver Dragon King). Even if the character of the protagonist sometimes looks a bit weird, I think this book is well written and the flaws are not hidden. The pace is fast, but there is no pointless plot. The emotional drama is average, but it expresses an understanding of the original characters. All in all, it would actually be four stars at most, but - the homogeneity of Douluo writing nowadays is too serious. It is a bit rare to see such "innovative" novels. There are even few fans of Dou San. It is still rare to see such a book. I will add one point to encourage it hh.

Disadvantages: The number of words is too small, the main text plus extras are less than one-eighth of the original work; I don't quite understand the protagonist's training system, especially at the end of the text when the protagonist kills the God King with his hand, the span is too big. Advantages: I didn't lick my face and go to Aolai City to intercept Hu Naer for no reason (this is the beginning of many Dou Santong humanities classics. Sometimes I wonder, aren't I really afraid that some mysterious power will obliterate you?); I can stay rational when dealing with anyone, and I am neither stupid nor unsupportive (it does not mean that if you are a beauty, I will definitely lick you, as long as I reach a certain level, all beauties are just a passing cloud); Remain absolutely rational until you have no strength. Your mentor was arrested and still didn't show up. Your strength has reached the point where everything has been settled. The main line is to cultivate immortals, and the side line is to save the spirits of the plane (like saving the soul beast is really just incidental); There are not so many mindless competitions. Unless necessary, you are too lazy to take action (Douluo has millions of words, and the Soul Master Competition accounts for most of it. Although it may be an exaggeration, a competition that was clearly written in one or two chapters in the original book was only completed in ten chapters); The fighting scenes are okay, but there aren't that many psychological descriptions and detailed character introductions; The extra chapter sublimates the entire text, comparing the situation of the four universes without the protagonist Douluo, and the original story of Gu Yuena's calculated life and the lament of the soul master. There are no pure-blooded true dragons left, and the last guardian of the soul beast is still a fierce tiger with an immature mind. Beast, Mr. Xiong would rather die than surrender and be worthy of the title of "Jun". Gu Yuena is no longer a true dragon, but just a human with the blood of the Silver Dragon King. The soul beast is completely enslaved. (Dou Si's definition of evil soul beast is not explained in the original work. I guess Ji is a large carnivorous soul beast, in the final analysis, it is just a business for humans), the Human Federation has long been in the possession of Shrek Academy and the Tang Sect (the most powerful weapons are all from the Tang Sect, and the senior leaders of the Spirit Transferring Tower basically graduated from Shrek's inner academy). Basically, the entire Human Federation has the surname Tang, but the top human lifespan is still limited. Yun Ming has not mastered the creation of the divine throne ten thousand years ago, and only a few Shrek people are immortal.

It feels good, although there are some boring places in the middle and some watery places. However, I saved up my like coins and bought them all at once, so I persisted in reading it despite my boredom and wanting to give up. In the end, when I saw Nana in the parallel world wanting to help the soul beast, no matter what the cost, I felt that she seemed to have woken up. See Mr. Xiong die under the 600,000-year calamity When Nana and Bai Xiuxiu came to him, his first words to Nana were that he was his master, but to Bai Xiuxiu he told her to get out of the Star Forest. But when he was about to dissipate, he found that Gu Yuena had really turned into a human being, so he wanted to take Gu Yuena away, and then said, "You are not My lord, you are a human being... You are pretending to be her!" It can be seen that Mr. Xiong really doesn't want to believe that the Silver Dragon King has really become a human being, so Mr. Xiong really believes and trusts the Silver Dragon King and cannot imagine that the Silver Dragon King has become a human being, so he can only deceive himself. It also shows that he trusts the Silver Dragon King, the co-leader of the soul beasts, rather than the human Gu Yuena (my own understanding in this book). I think this book is good and I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! ! I wish you better results in your next book.