I Can Buy My Life

Come on, author, update as soon as possible. I suggest you strengthen the protagonist again. It's a bit vain.

I said I've been waiting for a few days, but why hasn't it been updated? If you are a eunuch, you can't do this Actually, what you wrote is okay, but you haven't been able to Who cares? I think it's because you don't have anything main plot Also, I read your synopsis. What do you think about the protagonist's abilities? The setting is actually very good, and I think it's pretty good when I think about it. But why is no one watching? I think you are right about the shortcomings 1. There is no main plot. In the final analysis, the protagonist has no spirit. Belief in God, no ideals (sounds a bit ridiculous) (light), but there is no main line, and the subsequent script will be It is difficult to intersperse, such as the copy with fire folding, Don't you think it's strange? There's also a circus deputy This is also the case. In short, you don't have a main line to connect all the Wear the copy, for example, investigate why it is heavy students, why do supernatural events begin? The source is What, what should we do in the end? 2. There is no one force. For example, if you want to write the protagonist It's okay to establish a force, then start the weird race Tian, it is better for the protagonist to join a force, than Like working as a mercenary for the government, and then working as a foodie People, in short, it is difficult to carry out the plot alone, so There is interaction. If we can handle the good and the evil, the evil will If there is righteousness in the middle, then we can transcend the mysterious resurgence (that Writing about people and super ghosts) 3. Don't imitate the mysterious resurrected Yang Jian, mysterious The beauty of "Xusu" is that he writes ghosts and super gods. In fact, this A ruthless, bloodless and lawless protagonist, I personally I don't like it, have you ever thought about creating a person with Love is righteous, but a master who can handle things with a knife angle 4. No matter how good or bad the writing is, it will not work if you are a eunuch.

Even if you want to have the surgery, no one will tell you that it's not okay. Those who say no will insist on two hundred pieces.

This book is beautiful, come on, write it quickly

The big hand comparison is fascinating. Keep up the good work. This book will become a hit.

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It's pretty good. I'll keep an eye on you if you write well.

A very good rebirth article, I recommend updating it as soon as possible