
Secret Love Kiss Goodbye
by M. J. Z.
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The author has made great progress, come on, come on, come on, come on
August 4th, Happy Chinese Valentine's Day
Come on author, support you, I like it very much, and it is also somewhat close to reality.
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Take a look! I hope someone will read my book, thank you!
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The author has a lot of problems with his punctuation. For example, in a conversation, "Thank you." Is like this, not like this: "Thank you." Also, psychological description does not need to be marked with {}. There is also the logic... Now that he has entered high school, the senior high school senior is more eye-catching because he is the first in his grade, or he is the president of the student union, etc. It is a bit strange to always emphasize that he was the top scorer in the previous high school entrance examination. That's it for now.
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Official(4)Scraped 5d ago
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The author has made great progress, come on, come on, come on, come on
August 4th, Happy Chinese Valentine's Day
Come on author, support you, I like it very much, and it is also somewhat close to reality.
Does anyone have a look?
Take a look! I hope someone will read my book, thank you!
some suggestions
The author has a lot of problems with his punctuation. For example, in a conversation, "Thank you." Is like this, not like this: "Thank you." Also, psychological description does not need to be marked with {}. There is also the logic... Now that he has entered high school, the senior high school senior is more eye-catching because he is the first in his grade, or he is the president of the student union, etc. It is a bit strange to always emphasize that he was the top scorer in the previous high school entrance examination. That's it for now.









