Devouring Starry Sky Time Simulation

Is the part about Fang Qing's assassination of God of War nonsense? Humanity is about to perish. It's a good idea to devote all our efforts to cultivating talents, but to assassinate high-level generals at will? It's okay that no one knew about the assassination in private. He was surrounded by many gods of war, and the communication system sent a red message asking for help. When the result came, he just asked if it was private or public? It doesn't matter if you kill the generals at will. Have you arranged the tradition of private affairs and public affairs? And you also said that even if Yang Wu is not dead, if he is dead, there will not be as much compensation as me? It's only a few billion, and even the middle-level warriors can earn it. This is the compensation for killing a high-level warrior casually? If the top leaders of the human race had only such a vision, they would have been wiped out long ago. How could they have developed to this point? Moreover, Lu Qing in the team is the daughter of the God of War, and his father doesn't care at all? Don't tell me that Fang Qing won't silence him after killing Wang Zhi. Go back and read the original work carefully. Even if the planet level harms the warrior's family, as long as the evidence is conclusive, he will definitely die. How dare you claim to have read it ten times? Don't swallow the insult.

I don't want to brag, but I only saw the end of the book. Compared with my expectations, there is still a certain gap, so I will only comment on what I saw. The descriptions of realms, laws, mysteries, and essence, which are related to the protagonist's stage of strength, are a bit rough. In addition to realms, it can be summarized by at least several realms. The rest can only be summarized as getting stronger and stronger, one move can last for seconds, and one move can't stop, which can only be used to summarize the protagonist's strength and weakness. When fighting, there are too few descriptions of fighting movements, body skills, and moves, and they fail to grasp the key points. They are more descriptive. If you are a reader who has read the original work of Swallowing Stars, I can make an analogy. Just like Luo Feng took the path of the essence of the law, and the other path is the path of perception. The fighting in this book seems to be based on imagination. There is basically no description of speed and strength. Except for using the speed of sound as a reference unit when we are still on Earth, there is basically no description after the feasible star level. Strength can only be seen as the amplitude data increases, but the actual fight is not described. It is still a very honorable description of only one sword second, and one sword cannot last a second. The content is uneven, and even less and less is written later. By the time of the genius battle, I can hardly see it. The character of the protagonist is very fragile, but this book's setting of character is the basis for establishing a human being. It didn't meet my expectations. The protagonist has no persistence of his own. A few words from people around him, some insignificant actions and words, can make his heart fluctuate and make him review himself repeatedly. No one is perfect. This is normal. It just depends on the size of the matter. The protagonist sets limits on his own thoughts. He is easily moved and impulsive, and even encounters situations that are of no real use to him. He would also do things, people, and behaviors, think about them, etc. He was not a person with extraordinary xinxing. The Earth stage was okay, and he could see some xinxing. At least he did not say one thing and do another. After leaving the earth, until before the World War I saw, the subject matter was a bit off, developing in the direction of Shuangwen. It was easy to be satisfied. He did not have a standard for himself. When something happened, he had to choose a better choice between good and better. This is a limited thinking. During the Genius War, the character design of passerby characters showed emotional value through dialogue. This part was a bit average. Those who are high up, those who are immortal or above, are also prone to mood swings. Moreover, with the setting of Swallowing Starry Sky, the further you go in genetic evolution, you will have more thinking, memory, and energy, and you can even divide your consciousness into one. A lot of things can be done in one second, not to mention that the computing power of the brain is comparable to that of a computer, but it is not. When I saw the video of the protagonist and the others fighting, I couldn't even tell the clues. When I opened my mouth and shut up, I always started with layman's terms. Then they are not those at the top of the human race, just like the retired uncle downstairs. But I still give this book five stars. For this book, Devouring the Stars, if you don't have a smart brain, the data will be confused by the author, and not many calculations can be understood. Most of them barely maintain the settings of the original work. It is not easy to continue the settings, let alone the big picture of the original work. The plot is almost difficult to handle, and it is normal to have flaws. To be honest, this book is one of the top among fanfics with devouring themes, so even though it has some shortcomings, it is still relatively good overall. Some die-hard fans of the original work still recommend reading it. As for me personally, I don't quite understand the author's way of thinking. I don't really like books that focus on face. I prefer protagonists with charismatic personalities. That's why I gave up reading it for personal reasons.

For this matter, I still won't forgive myself

The protagonist is so brainless. He regards his original parents as his biological children after traveling through time for 3 years. Even though he would feel warm even if he were a stone for 3 years, he still feels uncomfortable. During the simulation, he also had to choose his personality. He didn't even dare to choose selfishness or anything like that. It was so holy.

It can be seen as a whole, there are too many hydrology, flow of water, nonsense, verbosity, ink marks, explanations, speculations, examples and side descriptions. It is 2.45 Million words. If you simplify it, it will be more comfortable to read to 900,000 words. The author said that everyone is welcome to point out mistakes and has a good attitude. He said that he has read the original work more than ten times. Overall, most of the plot is basically written by splitting and reorganizing the plot of the original work. Some typos in the early part were corrected, but typos started to appear frequently in the middle and late stages. There are inconsistent plots, and many fields were copied too seriously from the original work and were not changed according to the plot. Many chapters and sometimes even several chapters in a row are copied from the original work with just a few words changed. The main character Yang Wu has a sister, a brother, and parents. After reading it, I found out, oh, it wrote a lot of family plots, trivia about daily life, etc., And the number of words was very low. It even included a sister who led to a brother-in-law. The brother-in-law's realm has almost surpassed the sister's two realms. The brother-in-law's entire family is arrogant and brings disaster to the universe in the name of the protagonist. The whole text is disgusting. Comparing the protagonist before immortality with the original Luo Feng, the protagonist is stronger, but after immortality, he is incomparable to Luo Feng. The immortal Luo Feng kills the Venerable in one blow, and the immortal protagonist kills the Barking Mirror King for a long time. The protagonist of the Venerable is in the same realm and cannot even break the opponent's divine body. It is the author who forced the protagonist to cheat, using the innate secret method Eyes of Time to find flaws in the opponent's divine body and treasure armor... This is the first time I have seen someone looking for flaws in the swallowing starry sky, which is outrageous. The author may be afraid of not being able to grasp the problem of talent, so he keeps suppressing it. The kind of talent that cannot break the first bottleneck of the rhinoceros game at the Venerable level, or the kind of talent that can barely break the first bottleneck only after simulating and simulating. Some details about the original work are still in place at the beginning, but not at the back. The more I write, the more confusing it becomes. Some of the self-created plots are quite outrageous and illogical. In the middle and later stages, things that have been written before started to appear and the author forgot to write them again. The author has a deep understanding of hydrology. There are a lot of hydrology and hydrology in many places. Sometimes it feels like he is watching hydrology. The protagonist has a tangled and hesitant character. This character is present throughout the entire novel. The author writes too much about this aspect for the sake of word count, and it is extremely toxic. The description of the mood is that the protagonist is like Luo Feng, with a heart as sharp as a mirror and a heart as sharp as a knife. This has been achieved on Earth. What is the heart of a strong man? However, it can only be said that the author is not good at describing the mood and insists on writing it in detail. It is embarrassing. Then the protagonist becomes a suture monster who is both responsible for gains and losses and has a heart as sharp as a knife. He is not firm in the heart of a strong man and is afraid that others will surpass him. It is written that the protagonist has never dared to face his own system, and did not admit that his gains depended on the system. He always told himself that relying on the system alone was not good and that was not good. Then the CPU himself said that even if there is no system, he must be the strongest and the pinnacle person. After that, every time his progress was slow and he was about to be surpassed, he started to imitate the system anxiously. When it failed, he started to look for the father of the system. Is this still the heart of a strong man and the mentality of a heart like a knife that has undergone several transformations? It's really a stitching monster, it looks both upright and upright. I don't have a firm heart. I simulated and hesitated nine times out of ten times. I was curious about this and that. It was too poisonous. When the protagonist is the God of War, he writes for more than ten chapters every day that he needs to use a lot of dragon blood to reach the peak of the God of War... And then he also writes about the thousand-year-old willow heart and grass spirit to help the protagonist advance to the planet level... Bloodline is bloodline, and genes are genes. The original work separates these two settings. The author directly changed the domain lord level bloodline to quadruple genes. The author also said that he wondered why the original work was so cheap for only a few dozen Hunyuan. At first, he thought it was the author's second design, but later found out that it was not. The author also explained in the comments that the domain lord level bloodline gene was quadruple. He was speechless. Because Bolan changed the route to comprehend the Chaos Monument of the Universe in advance, he successfully passed the sixth floor of Tongtian Bridge in the ninth year after entering Chaos City, completing the thirty years of the original work in eighty-nine years. In order to highlight that the protagonist is more powerful than Luo Feng in the original work, it is said that it is because he was given a huge treasure. Military merit in the foreign battlefield required 10 trillion, while the treasure Luo Feng was given in the original work was only 10 trillion. It is really outrageous. In the original work, Luo Feng's team that just entered the battlefield outside the territory was not mentioned as dead in the ending. It was not written at all. The team that the protagonist just entered the battlefield outside the territory was written to death in order to highlight the description of the protagonist's rescue after leaving the team and becoming stronger. The plot of the earth's exposure has gone a long way from the initial simulation to the reality. When the reality was exposed, the protagonist had enough strength to completely protect the earth. In the end, he gave away part of the land as a courtesy and let others come. This is really wrong. When Luo Feng in the original novel was strong enough, he just drove everyone else away. The author is Zhenjian A. The protagonist, the Lord of the Universe, has a fifth-level combat power. The strongest of the three tribes needs to take the lead in gathering a group of people. The Lord of the Universe kills the protagonist. He also repeatedly said in the comments how and how the Lord of Yuan'ao died? That's not just because the original will of the universe wants him to die, but the whole universe wants him to die. He has no background and no support, and he has been beaten for a long time by a bunch of masters of the universe and the strongest person. The protagonist has no strength, no matter the level of the treasure, no background, and he really just outsmarts his opponent. The writing started to collapse later. There were 100 million first-level realm beasts, and each evolution required 33. As a result, when there were still more than 30 million left, the protagonist killed 30 million in one blow, and when there were still more than two million left, most of the remaining ones were second-order ones, and there were basically no first-order ones. Not to mention how the protagonist knew about it without enslaving the realm beasts. As for the specific number, just saying that the protagonist kills more than 30 million in one strike is outrageous. The secret method with a fifteenth level of law perception is indeed powerful, but the protagonist is still the Lord of the Universe and the divine power route has not yet reached the third level. Moreover, the quality of the Divine Power of the Lord of the Universe is far from that of a True God, and at this time, he also used divine power to enslave a world beast. The more I write, the more outrageous it becomes.

The protagonist's character is indeed very soft. With such a character, he still wants to explore the stars? What about dreaming? In my opinion, he has to let a few of his relatives die or die, otherwise he will not know what despair is at all. Luo Feng worked very hard before cheating, and the protagonist wanted to be bad before cheating. From this, we can see that the protagonist has a very bad character. After getting the simulator, I upgraded too quickly, I was never hunted down, and I never experienced any major hardships. There are not many poisonous points, but it is not very comfortable to read. There is always an inexplicable sense of depression when reading this novel. I feel that the protagonist's way of living is inexplicably depressing.

The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. If you say he was happy with this writing, he is not happy. Instead, it makes people feel disgusting and rubbish.

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I can write the Earth chapter faster🤗 I'm still at the apprentice level after all this time

It's so stupid, and you kneel down and lick the pig's feet. If someone else had used this golden finger, he would have been invincible, and he still feels, feels**