
Beginning: I Was Sent to the Sky by the School Belle
by Covering The Sky With Hands
About This Novel
The school beauty goddess Luo Yan, who has been secretly in love for several years, suddenly asked Xu Chuan to meet in the woods... Xu Chuan went happily (*'ε`*) Luo Yan: "Want to travel through time?" Xu Chuan: "??" Luo Yan: "I can send you through time!" Xu Chuan: "?_?" Luo Yan: "Are you willing to travel through time?" Xu Chuan: "I am willing..."... Before 'you big-headed devil' could finish speaking, his vision went dark... Please enter the text? [QQ group: 33842887...]
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Official(62)Scraped 12d ago
It's about to be put on the shelves, let me say a few words!
So far, this book has written 200,000+ words and has collected 2,000+. It is definitely a hit. Although the comment section is basically full of people scolding me, there are also many veterans who silently support me. I'm here to say thank you. To be honest, I am an old bookworm. I write books because I like it, and I don't expect to make a living from it! Therefore, I carefully thought about the reason why this book was scolded. It was because it did not cater to the tastes of many readers, and it even touched on the pain of many people, so it was scolded. However, the style of this book has been set and it is impossible to change it. As long as I have time, I will insist on updating and writing all the plots set. If you like it, you don't need to say more. If you don't like it, you can insist on scolding it to the end. Finally, thank you to everyone who supported this book! Just leave it at that! I hope that when I wake up tomorrow, this book will still be updated...
No, I have to come back and say a few words
As soon as I saw the protagonist being threatened by a woman in the ancient forbidden land, I was persuaded to quit, but I was unhappy if I didn't.
Which one is the protagonist, Xu Chuan or Luo Yan? Will Luo Yan be written to death later? I hope she dies.
The protagonist feels that he is being used all the time and is very unhappy.
Thanks for your comments and support!
Read the comment section... First of all, thank you for your attention. Regardless of whether it is good or bad, comments at least show that someone is reading this book. As for the male protagonist's dog-licking character, to be honest, it's a problem with the author's writing skills. I never thought of writing a dog-licking male protagonist. It was just that the outline set that he would be kidnapped by Luo Yan in the early stage of the plot, but I forced him to write a dog-licking character! This... I am also very helpless! However, subsequent plots will gradually change this! After all: the protagonist of this book cannot be Luo Yan! Finally, thank you for your attention and support! I'm not afraid of comments scolding me, but I'm afraid of being dead and no one pays attention!
The dog doesn't even look at it, it licks the dog in the early stage, is extremely poisonous in the mid-term, and collapses in the later stage.
I don't have any suggestions. The more I get stuck, the more annoying I become. I suggest the author change the subject. This subject is not suitable for you.
The main character is trash
Go back to the original world and kill the group leader, and beat him with a Maomao? Da Luo is the Immortal Emperor, and you just cut him off by two levels.
I don't understand. I think differently from you.
You can slow down a bit when it comes to the protagonist being a dog licker. After more than 60 chapters or a few chapters, he has already seen through his inner demons and is not a dog licker. To be honest, the mentality of dog licking is normal. After all, it is ordinary people. According to the author's description, the protagonist was still a loser in the beginning. Maybe the author's description is a bit too much, but it is harmless. After all, the psychology has been corrected in the middle period. What I don't understand is that I think Luo Yan's performance is fine, even very good, except for being a little temperamental. First of all, let you, an ordinary person, go to the world of cultivating immortals. It is an opportunity. This is a noble person. He also gives you plug-ins. Moreover, it is a world of novels. You can predict the situation in advance and know the opportunities in advance. If you don't succeed in hiding what the big boss will happen in advance, it will be your own problem. If you really don't want to become an immortal, by the way, no one wants to live a long life in cultivating immortals. You can go back to the original world. You can go back if you choose at the beginning. What a conscience. Secondly, you think she exploits group members and enjoys benefits, so why can't she enjoy them? She gave you even the opportunity to cultivate as an immortal, and she gave you system plug-ins. Do you feel exploited? Imagine if you don't think about Luo Yan's gain, would it be beneficial to have a subsystem? It provides the function of exchanging points for things in other worlds. You have already seen the exercises you handed in. The exercises you have seen can be exchanged for points to exchange for other exercises and magic weapons. They are extra things in themselves. Many people want to be exploited and there is no subsystem. In fact, many people are selfish and substitute themselves into the protagonist. They feel that Luo Yan can get things without having to work. Put yourself in the role of the protagonist and feel that everything must be yours. Why is Luo Yan the main system and you are the subsystem? Why do you have to be unhappy? Then a group of people took the role of the protagonist and thought why they were jealous because they were just a minor official, not a general, or that was what the protagonist thought. In the end, a bunch of people felt that they had to kill Luo Yan. I really felt that there was nothing to say. Didn't they just want the main system? Do they think Luo Yan had cheated the protagonist? If it must be said that Luo Yan cheated the protagonist and the protagonist was righteous and righteous, then where was the crow? How many people have been deceived. He wants to kill the protagonist, which is righteous and right for him. When it comes to Luo Yan killing group friends, those group friends are always quarrelsome and complain and curse. They are kind to them but they bark. Isn't it a dog biting Lu Dongbin? Instead, the protagonist killed a lot of people he didn't know in the Holy Land, killing families and destroying the Holy Land at every turn. Speaking of those weird friends, not the ones who were tricked, it was purely their own problem, asking why they borrowed the first point. If you have to say that you are the protagonist, you have to get the main system, otherwise you should read a really brainless and cool article, the kind of person who becomes invincible every second after appearing on the scene. Why can't this book become a breath of fresh air? Who said that the protagonist has to be the main system, and there must be a system to limit yourself. If you really want to be invincible, don't be jealous of others. Cultivate to a certain level, get rid of the subsystem, transcend the system, and compare it with those who have the system to highlight the power of the protagonist. I hope it can be enlightening to the author and readers. Thank you. Is there any group of authors?
Isn't training boring? Xu Chuan has been able to practice for so long, but maybe it's because he wants to become stronger, so he doesn't feel bored. Opening up the sea of suffering means that he can take a step closer.
That school beauty is a bit arrogant
To be honest, I feel like a lot of people won't like your character.
What a good looking guy, he can beat a saint in the wheel and sea realm
In the future, will a saint be able to defeat the emperor?
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Official(62)Scraped 12d ago
It's about to be put on the shelves, let me say a few words!
So far, this book has written 200,000+ words and has collected 2,000+. It is definitely a hit. Although the comment section is basically full of people scolding me, there are also many veterans who silently support me. I'm here to say thank you. To be honest, I am an old bookworm. I write books because I like it, and I don't expect to make a living from it! Therefore, I carefully thought about the reason why this book was scolded. It was because it did not cater to the tastes of many readers, and it even touched on the pain of many people, so it was scolded. However, the style of this book has been set and it is impossible to change it. As long as I have time, I will insist on updating and writing all the plots set. If you like it, you don't need to say more. If you don't like it, you can insist on scolding it to the end. Finally, thank you to everyone who supported this book! Just leave it at that! I hope that when I wake up tomorrow, this book will still be updated...
No, I have to come back and say a few words
As soon as I saw the protagonist being threatened by a woman in the ancient forbidden land, I was persuaded to quit, but I was unhappy if I didn't.
Which one is the protagonist, Xu Chuan or Luo Yan? Will Luo Yan be written to death later? I hope she dies.
The protagonist feels that he is being used all the time and is very unhappy.
Thanks for your comments and support!
Read the comment section... First of all, thank you for your attention. Regardless of whether it is good or bad, comments at least show that someone is reading this book. As for the male protagonist's dog-licking character, to be honest, it's a problem with the author's writing skills. I never thought of writing a dog-licking male protagonist. It was just that the outline set that he would be kidnapped by Luo Yan in the early stage of the plot, but I forced him to write a dog-licking character! This... I am also very helpless! However, subsequent plots will gradually change this! After all: the protagonist of this book cannot be Luo Yan! Finally, thank you for your attention and support! I'm not afraid of comments scolding me, but I'm afraid of being dead and no one pays attention!
The dog doesn't even look at it, it licks the dog in the early stage, is extremely poisonous in the mid-term, and collapses in the later stage.
I don't have any suggestions. The more I get stuck, the more annoying I become. I suggest the author change the subject. This subject is not suitable for you.
The main character is trash
Go back to the original world and kill the group leader, and beat him with a Maomao? Da Luo is the Immortal Emperor, and you just cut him off by two levels.
I don't understand. I think differently from you.
You can slow down a bit when it comes to the protagonist being a dog licker. After more than 60 chapters or a few chapters, he has already seen through his inner demons and is not a dog licker. To be honest, the mentality of dog licking is normal. After all, it is ordinary people. According to the author's description, the protagonist was still a loser in the beginning. Maybe the author's description is a bit too much, but it is harmless. After all, the psychology has been corrected in the middle period. What I don't understand is that I think Luo Yan's performance is fine, even very good, except for being a little temperamental. First of all, let you, an ordinary person, go to the world of cultivating immortals. It is an opportunity. This is a noble person. He also gives you plug-ins. Moreover, it is a world of novels. You can predict the situation in advance and know the opportunities in advance. If you don't succeed in hiding what the big boss will happen in advance, it will be your own problem. If you really don't want to become an immortal, by the way, no one wants to live a long life in cultivating immortals. You can go back to the original world. You can go back if you choose at the beginning. What a conscience. Secondly, you think she exploits group members and enjoys benefits, so why can't she enjoy them? She gave you even the opportunity to cultivate as an immortal, and she gave you system plug-ins. Do you feel exploited? Imagine if you don't think about Luo Yan's gain, would it be beneficial to have a subsystem? It provides the function of exchanging points for things in other worlds. You have already seen the exercises you handed in. The exercises you have seen can be exchanged for points to exchange for other exercises and magic weapons. They are extra things in themselves. Many people want to be exploited and there is no subsystem. In fact, many people are selfish and substitute themselves into the protagonist. They feel that Luo Yan can get things without having to work. Put yourself in the role of the protagonist and feel that everything must be yours. Why is Luo Yan the main system and you are the subsystem? Why do you have to be unhappy? Then a group of people took the role of the protagonist and thought why they were jealous because they were just a minor official, not a general, or that was what the protagonist thought. In the end, a bunch of people felt that they had to kill Luo Yan. I really felt that there was nothing to say. Didn't they just want the main system? Do they think Luo Yan had cheated the protagonist? If it must be said that Luo Yan cheated the protagonist and the protagonist was righteous and righteous, then where was the crow? How many people have been deceived. He wants to kill the protagonist, which is righteous and right for him. When it comes to Luo Yan killing group friends, those group friends are always quarrelsome and complain and curse. They are kind to them but they bark. Isn't it a dog biting Lu Dongbin? Instead, the protagonist killed a lot of people he didn't know in the Holy Land, killing families and destroying the Holy Land at every turn. Speaking of those weird friends, not the ones who were tricked, it was purely their own problem, asking why they borrowed the first point. If you have to say that you are the protagonist, you have to get the main system, otherwise you should read a really brainless and cool article, the kind of person who becomes invincible every second after appearing on the scene. Why can't this book become a breath of fresh air? Who said that the protagonist has to be the main system, and there must be a system to limit yourself. If you really want to be invincible, don't be jealous of others. Cultivate to a certain level, get rid of the subsystem, transcend the system, and compare it with those who have the system to highlight the power of the protagonist. I hope it can be enlightening to the author and readers. Thank you. Is there any group of authors?
Isn't training boring? Xu Chuan has been able to practice for so long, but maybe it's because he wants to become stronger, so he doesn't feel bored. Opening up the sea of suffering means that he can take a step closer.
That school beauty is a bit arrogant
To be honest, I feel like a lot of people won't like your character.
What a good looking guy, he can beat a saint in the wheel and sea realm
In the future, will a saint be able to defeat the emperor?










