Travel to a Primitive Tribe to Farm and Raise Cubs

Oh, don't you have to thank Haitang's stepmother? ! Because she treated everyone equally and harshly, these children all had a good relationship. ! Damn, this is good. Although the stepmother ran away, it is rare that these children have a good relationship!

The article is very good and the content is very attractive! But there are many problems. Lots of typos! Especially when the author likes to say something in many chapters! This will give people the impression that they are trying to increase the number of words! People who read books will skip those, but now many people like to listen to books when they are tired of reading. If you listen too much, you will get bored. It is a pity to abandon it if you are tired of listening!

The sentences don't make sense, there are a lot of different words, and you're just guessing! ! !

Shi Hu needs to take good care of his health, and don't do anything stupid. Do you think the children will eat well if you don't eat them? You children are very sensible and well-behaved! Moreover, it is right for fathers to raise their children, but it is also right for children to honor their parents! Come on, rush the duck

? ? Haitang, the stepmother, is really good enough! After Haitang's father had his hand bitten off by a wild beast outside, he left his twins and ran away with someone else? ? Tsk tsk tsk, don't you feel guilty doing this? ?

1: The world setting is another reincarnation of the earth. Although the starting setting is the Stone Age, there will still be cloth and some tools made of wood. As for how it came about, please read the plot. Two: The heroine and the hero are a pair for life. As for the cruelty, sorry, there is a race war. Three: The heroine's main goal is to develop agriculture. She cannot be a high-ranking person and go to war. She also focuses on the future of the tribe. The heroine will not fight for power and gain, nor can she become a clan leader. She can only have a career such as a wise person. Four: The orc tribe will have reforms. The male protagonist and the female protagonist will influence the tribe the most, which is agriculture. Let the male protagonist charge into battle. If you don't see him, he will only have a child and support his wife. If you transform into a beast, you will basically start transforming into a beast at the age of ten, but you can also transform into a beast earlier if the conditions are met. Five: Updates are made twice a day. One update is divided into 4,000 words, which is very similar to others. One update of 1,000 words is eight updates. In addition, don't talk about why subscribing to a chapter requires twenty coins because of the number of words. Also, thank you for your support.

Can we not use the word "at the moment"? Appeared too many times

There are so many typos in every paragraph! The sentences are not fluent... I don't know if I don't know how to use the punctuation marks or if I accidentally put them in the wrong place... Words don't convey the meaning... It's quite hard to watch.

I rarely review books, but this one is really unbearable. There are a lot of redundant words, such as "when" and "then", "directly", "get up" and "under such circumstances". I think they are all redundant and uncomfortable to watch. The content is okay, but the expression is not good. You can reduce this kind of mantra appropriately. I am just giving you a suggestion. [Emot=default,16/]

The plot is good, but there are too many typos, causing some sentences to not make sense. I hope you can pay attention to the homework.