
Dota System of Apocalyptic Zombies
by Jue Mingzi
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Official(25)Scraped 11d ago
The protagonist is a bit selfish, feeling that he only lives for himself. In the chapter with the brainwave zombies,
In the chapter with the brain wave zombie, you can obviously find a way to kill him first, and you can run away if you are desperate. Why must you be so cruel? It is too inhumane. There is no way out.
The old bookworm has some suggestions.
This book is not well written. First of all, how did you get the knife in Chapter 1? There are many loopholes that are completely unknown, incomprehensible and incoherent. Why is the male protagonist so naturally cold? Unconscionable.
At the beginning there was a woman who looked down on him
Prerequisite tip: Except for the poor reading experience at the front, the back is pretty good. As always, I was green at the beginning. I don't know what that woman is. At the beginning, he was cheated by a strange and strange person. It is obviously a taboo in novels, but why is this routine so repetitive? I'll just say it. In this type, there are basically these modes. I look down on the series: In the beginning, the male protagonist is allowed to support him, and then someone sees the woman at the beginning, and the men who see him are basically very handsome. There are two options here, let him in, or break him in. There is a chance that the main game will return, but it does not happen here. The probability of being green in this series is still very high. General series: This woman will hide herself very well, and will tell the male protagonist if there is someone nearby, but basically she will not become the protagonist's woman. Help series: No matter what state the woman is in, she will have a cooperative relationship with the male protagonist and will help the male protagonist and even fall in love with him. Under normal circumstances, the first type of dismissal will be very high, because some people do not like such plots. If it is not handled well, the dismissal rate will be very high. If the second route is handled well and the person can be saved by taking the second route, the dismissal rate will drop a lot. However, this woman has too many plots, which often have the opposite effect. The situation like yours will persuade you to quit, but it will be relatively rare. Scenario 2: As long as nothing too bloody happens, there will basically be no major problems. Type 3: This kind of plot may dissuade some people who don't like the harem, but as long as it stimulates the charm of women, it will also play a certain role in attracting readers. There are many more routes that I don't need to go into details about. There are so many routes, but you have to choose a dog-girl route. No one likes green characters when reading novels. Reading novels is just for fun. When I started reading the novel, I had been guessing. When the male protagonist left for two days, I was sure. I guessed that the woman would follow a more powerful man and attack the male protagonist. The author feels that this is his route, which is fine and right. After all, everyone's style is different, so it's fine for you to just delete me. I am also the author of a doomsday series that has not been released yet, but the system, route, world view, and other details have been set. My concept is biased toward salvation. I won't describe too much characters who I think won't live too long. A plot like yours will only arouse a certain degree of disgust. After all, that bitch man and woman described a lot of plots. But I'm also wondering if my ideas conflict too much with yours. Comment posted by a reader. Ps: There are many ways to stimulate the protagonist's growth, but this is really a bad idea.
Why hasn't anyone else awakened? It can't be a single player, right?
Not bad, the author is very good
There is still room for improvement, but the subject matter is very good. The main reason is that the protagonist's skills are too easy to obtain. If you get them too easily, you feel like you don't care much about them. You should pay attention to this. Also, the protagonist and the system are just... A little bit toxic. After all, the protagonist's survival depends on the system. What's more, it's too monotonous. One or two hundred chapters of this kind of world view that is not very rich will be overwhelming, and it will only last a few hundred chapters. It will not be new if you continue to write it. Well, keep up the good work! Take good care of you. Let's go and see Cocoon's Another World. He is a top student in the university. It is different for an educated man to write novels. Hey-hey. Happy New Year.
Why do I, a single mother who has been single for more than ten years, feel a touch of sadness when I see the protagonist hugging me?
come on
You can still write well, don't pay attention to these bad dogs
Saw thirteen pictures
Let me ask you, when will Cheng Xiaoxiao die?
Give you five stars
Keep up the good work, and novices should not place too much emphasis on results.
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Official(25)Scraped 11d ago
The protagonist is a bit selfish, feeling that he only lives for himself. In the chapter with the brainwave zombies,
In the chapter with the brain wave zombie, you can obviously find a way to kill him first, and you can run away if you are desperate. Why must you be so cruel? It is too inhumane. There is no way out.
The old bookworm has some suggestions.
This book is not well written. First of all, how did you get the knife in Chapter 1? There are many loopholes that are completely unknown, incomprehensible and incoherent. Why is the male protagonist so naturally cold? Unconscionable.
At the beginning there was a woman who looked down on him
Prerequisite tip: Except for the poor reading experience at the front, the back is pretty good. As always, I was green at the beginning. I don't know what that woman is. At the beginning, he was cheated by a strange and strange person. It is obviously a taboo in novels, but why is this routine so repetitive? I'll just say it. In this type, there are basically these modes. I look down on the series: In the beginning, the male protagonist is allowed to support him, and then someone sees the woman at the beginning, and the men who see him are basically very handsome. There are two options here, let him in, or break him in. There is a chance that the main game will return, but it does not happen here. The probability of being green in this series is still very high. General series: This woman will hide herself very well, and will tell the male protagonist if there is someone nearby, but basically she will not become the protagonist's woman. Help series: No matter what state the woman is in, she will have a cooperative relationship with the male protagonist and will help the male protagonist and even fall in love with him. Under normal circumstances, the first type of dismissal will be very high, because some people do not like such plots. If it is not handled well, the dismissal rate will be very high. If the second route is handled well and the person can be saved by taking the second route, the dismissal rate will drop a lot. However, this woman has too many plots, which often have the opposite effect. The situation like yours will persuade you to quit, but it will be relatively rare. Scenario 2: As long as nothing too bloody happens, there will basically be no major problems. Type 3: This kind of plot may dissuade some people who don't like the harem, but as long as it stimulates the charm of women, it will also play a certain role in attracting readers. There are many more routes that I don't need to go into details about. There are so many routes, but you have to choose a dog-girl route. No one likes green characters when reading novels. Reading novels is just for fun. When I started reading the novel, I had been guessing. When the male protagonist left for two days, I was sure. I guessed that the woman would follow a more powerful man and attack the male protagonist. The author feels that this is his route, which is fine and right. After all, everyone's style is different, so it's fine for you to just delete me. I am also the author of a doomsday series that has not been released yet, but the system, route, world view, and other details have been set. My concept is biased toward salvation. I won't describe too much characters who I think won't live too long. A plot like yours will only arouse a certain degree of disgust. After all, that bitch man and woman described a lot of plots. But I'm also wondering if my ideas conflict too much with yours. Comment posted by a reader. Ps: There are many ways to stimulate the protagonist's growth, but this is really a bad idea.
Why hasn't anyone else awakened? It can't be a single player, right?
Not bad, the author is very good
There is still room for improvement, but the subject matter is very good. The main reason is that the protagonist's skills are too easy to obtain. If you get them too easily, you feel like you don't care much about them. You should pay attention to this. Also, the protagonist and the system are just... A little bit toxic. After all, the protagonist's survival depends on the system. What's more, it's too monotonous. One or two hundred chapters of this kind of world view that is not very rich will be overwhelming, and it will only last a few hundred chapters. It will not be new if you continue to write it. Well, keep up the good work! Take good care of you. Let's go and see Cocoon's Another World. He is a top student in the university. It is different for an educated man to write novels. Hey-hey. Happy New Year.
Why do I, a single mother who has been single for more than ten years, feel a touch of sadness when I see the protagonist hugging me?
come on
You can still write well, don't pay attention to these bad dogs
Saw thirteen pictures
Let me ask you, when will Cheng Xiaoxiao die?
Give you five stars
Keep up the good work, and novices should not place too much emphasis on results.













