Pokemon Pokemon Login

It can be seen that your writing level is gradually improving, at least the problem of word shortage that was often seen before is gradually disappearing. . . However, there are some suggestions I still want to make: First, the pits dug and the supplementary settings made me confused. Not to mention the combat power settings of the stacked bed frame house. You have fully used the functions of the house provided by the system, but only Ninja and Gardevoir have been described as entering. Don't you think it is a bit wasteful? Did I miss something when the protagonist's sister's dream was not mentioned at all in the recent chapter? Sister Baicai hasn't appeared in a long time, right? Against Chiri? How long has it been since the protagonist saw the favorability panel? What's his future? Remember to fill the hole when you dig it? Also, I feel like the "color" qualification is completely unnecessary. . The strength of Pokémon must be described in actual combat to give readers a true feeling. The colors you give are equivalent to classifying Pokémon into three, six, or nine grades in advance. This conflicts with the "there is no best Pokémon" in the article. Second, I know that you play Genshin Impact, and I also know that you feel resentful about the unfairness of the Tokyo Olympics. There is no problem with reflecting your personal emotions, but can you be a little more tactful? It's quite scary to watch something happen suddenly. . Personally, when I play Genshin Impact, all the five stars are ice and wind. At most, I can add Zhongli, which is a big guarantee made with krypton gold. Illustration fans are quite envious of you for having Keqing. . . Third, in the recent chapters you have clearly created a hysterical Japanese character. His nationality, arrogant, greedy and sinister attitude, disdain for his companions, and cheating are all debuffs that are almost full. . I have to admit that it is a common routine to stir up opposing emotions to create a sense of substitution and make people unconsciously think about the protagonist, but is this thing really useful? Logically speaking, the dark character of this character who conforms to or even emphasizes the stereotype of the Chinese people towards the other side cannot be without antecedents. Is he a target you set up to vent your emotions towards the other side? If there are any gaps in the outline, please dig deeper into this person's story. Personally, I still hope to see him change his ways after being educated, after all. . A guy with this kind of personality will definitely fight back after being beaten in pain. We also want to see a neighbor who has reformed and is friendly, right? In addition, Teyvat Continent has already said it from the mouth of the system. Are you really considering letting people make a cameo? Anyway, I look forward to better articles.

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If this book was really written by a newcomer, it would be okay overall. There are no big problems, but some details are not done well. And what I want to complain about the most is the introduction of the elf. To be honest, there is nothing wrong with adding a qualification introduction, but if every elf comes here, the number of words is really high. Also, the elves came out too fast, and they were already full before even ten chapters. I personally think that except for the initial elves, all other elves can design a story about their encounters, and then slowly extend it. This must be at least 100 chapters, right? Next, let's complain about the mythical beasts. I don't know what to say if I like the mythical beasts appearing in the early stage. But when writing this kind of novel, it's best to appear later, and the fastest is to wait for other people to come in before appearing again, right? ! It's really not that interesting to appear in the early stage. It's not enough for you to describe other elves? Seriously, does the protagonist have too many abilities? Plug-ins, Tokiwa's power, waveguide power, super powers, what's the use of writing so much? It feels like it's accelerating the collapse of this book. But it's still a good first time for the author to write, and it deserves encouragement! Come on!

It's okay, I think, but what I want to complain about is that I was halfway through reading it. Why did the qualification change into a color after the system upgrade? I think something like King of Champions is better. At least it has a specific concept, but it's more difficult to understand when you make a color, and it's a bit uncomfortable to look at.

I just didn't write anything about Blue Star. For example, I wrote something about the government or the government's search for civilian trainers. How much should I write about? People in Pokémon are physically able to fight with fairies. Blue Star and the government didn't write about politics. It will be difficult to write in the later stage. I won't write it when the two planets are combined.

The author stopped updating and started writing a new book. I think the pace of this book is too slow. I mainly want to see other people get into the game, but the author has written so much and is still in the early login stage. I don't like the human form very much, and the author wrote the original Pokémon novel, so I hope to follow the structure of the original novel. If only the world of Pokémon is used, and the others are all online games, then I can accept the human form. The 4 stars are mainly because I wrote so much, plus there are too few articles about Pokémon online games.

Metagross is also very handsome, how about one?

It's been 3 days. The author will update soon.

I hope that the protagonist is a loner with no sister. Even if he does, don't bring him in. It always feels a bit awkward.