A Conferred God

Author, write quickly, it's too slow and I keep seeing you in the water

I've always liked reading the old aunt's books. I don't know why they feel so good, but I finished the last book too quickly and I was exhausted🤗🤗🤗 This new book has just come out. It has a big world view. It mainly focuses on resisting foreign invasion. The protagonist is a reborn person. Although he was very poor in his previous life, he has a good wife. Well, he should be the heroine. The protagonist's ability so far is mainly to consume physical energy to change the properties of objects to meet the requirements he needs. Judging from the title of the novel, this should be the main plot. According to the old aunt's style, there should be some emotional drama in the middle, but not too much. Let me first talk about what appeals to me about this book. 1. The world view is in a moment of danger when invaded by foreign enemies. For now, the internal team is relatively united and there are no brainless NPCs. 2. The protagonist can find his own position, and there is no meaning of pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger. This is more to my liking. After all, the world is in danger and you still just want to protect yourself? 3. The plot setting is pretty good, and the writing is quite fluent, just like a senior author should be. Finally, if the old lady sees it, remember: it's not enough! ! !

To be honest, old aunt, I am one of the first to read this book of yours. Since I read Chapter 25, I am not surprised that you seem to have jumped into this situation. After reading these chapters today, I want to ask you a few questions. 1. Where is the main line? ? ? After the protagonist entered the research institute and participated in the research (eating, drinking, exercising), the main plot seemed to be revealed, and then you changed the subject and the protagonist went to school to be a teacher. What the hell? I can understand your arrangement, although it is difficult to accept it. So I would venture to ask, the school should be a branch plot to pave the way for the heroine, right? So you regard the protagonist as the Prince Charming that many female compatriots fantasized about when they were young, right? To be honest, it's hard to attract male readers with your writing style. 2. The pretense technique is very blunt. After the protagonist entered the school where the heroine is, the name-changing skill as the main plot was not mentioned at all. Then he almost lost contact with his family, friends, and research institute. It was like the male protagonist of a female channel novel dropped into the school from the sky. Let me ask, this is a writing method that is not used in third-rate female channel novels now. 3. Old aunt, aren't you a full-time writer? Seeing the results like this, I am even more anxious than the emperor. You have too few words, and the plot is dry and the description is boring. The main plot is thrown away. The inexplicable recognition of the god sister makes it impossible to find any promotion or other effect on the plot. The subject matter is okay, but to be honest, if you write it like this, you might as well vote for a female channel. These are my personal opinions. If you want to continue writing and still make a living, read books like Big Brother and Chess, which are on the top of the list of new books. These are the pathfinders for the future mainstream of the novel world. If you don't want to continue writing, just open another book.

I'm on the first floor🥺🥺🥺🥺

Old aunt, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

Old aunt, why can't I find new books?

Come on. . . . . . . .