
The Supreme Evil Wife
by Cocoa Quiet
About This Novel
She is the king of poison doctors and killers. She was feared by the organization and betrayed her. When she died together with the organization, the Chaos Ring reborn her soul into the Apocalypse Continent. In this world where martial arts is valued and women are superior to men, let's see how she becomes a strong person step by step to save her father and mother, and how she meets the one she loves and joins hands for a lifetime.
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Adding more detailed descriptions can make the characters more vivid. For example, for the washing of bones and marrow just now, you can add more detailed descriptions and metaphors. (Description of sweating) For example: His whole body was dripping with sweat, his clothes were soaked with sweat, his face was covered with fine beads of sweat, and his whole body looked like he had been fished out of the water. Just sweating can add a lot of description, and washing the marrow and bones must be very painful and tiring. There are many descriptions that can be added. For example, when it hurts, don't just write about how painful it is. Write down what kind of pain it is and how it behaves when it hurts. For example: the face is pale with pain, the veins on the hands are bulging, the lips are bitten white (or the tip of the tongue is biting and bleeding), the muscles are tightly stretched, etc. To create the image of a character, you need to express it through many things. Don't directly say what the person is like. Say something through someone else's mouth instead of directly saying it. This will be more concrete and natural. A person's preferences, such as what kind of clothes he wears, what colors he likes, what dishes he likes to eat, etc., Can all express a character's personality and what he does. Take the villain as an example. He has a blood-red skull painted on his black clothes and is murderous. I like black and have a gloomy personality. Likes to drink blood, be bloodthirsty and cruel, etc.
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On the formation of the cold-blooded killer character
Generally speaking, there are two types of killers in novels. The first is the agent of the Communist Party, and the second is the killer of the organization. Agents are not so ruthless and will do whatever it takes to achieve their goals, but killers are different. They are ruthless and perverted murderers who will do whatever it takes to achieve their goals and can kill innocent people. This is the difference between the two methods. How is character formed? First of all, killers receive strict training in the organization, and then they are constantly eliminated through fighting (for example, only one out of 20 people can survive), and generally killers should be trained since childhood. She is used to cold-blooded killing. In her opinion, killing is normal. This is the result of different concepts, just like the environmental impact mentioned before. Having been in such a bloody environment since childhood, it is inevitable that his personality will be biased. (Just like polygamy in ancient times when men were superior to women. We think this is wrong now, but people in ancient times thought it was correct.) Killers kill people to gain profits. Maybe the people they kill have nothing to do with them or even know them. Killers are different from normal people. Their psychology is already pathological. There is no difference between killing people and killing chickens. These are all caused by environmental reasons and human guidance. In terms of human guidance, killer organizations usually have a mentor to teach them, including not only force and resourcefulness. There is an idiom that raises tigers, and organizations must absolutely control them, such as subconscious control, deep hypnosis, etc. (These are actual specific cases) You can imagine what their character will be like under these circumstances. The one you wrote belongs to the latter, so she is cold-blooded, she is perverted, she is unkind, and she will do whatever it takes to achieve her goals. These are all normal.
The author hasn't updated for a long time. Is he going to update the book?
It's okay if the heroine dies, just in time to open the next book. I suggest you write about quick travel in the next book. Your ** is suitable for writing about quick travel.
Alas, school starts tomorrow, and I feel so panicked.
When can it be updated?
Please update, please update, please update... I say important things three times
It's so beautiful. Is there anything I can watch at once?
I really like reading it. Dear, are there any books like this?
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Official(96)Scraped 5d ago
Adding more detailed descriptions can make the characters more vivid. For example, for the washing of bones and marrow just now, you can add more detailed descriptions and metaphors. (Description of sweating) For example: His whole body was dripping with sweat, his clothes were soaked with sweat, his face was covered with fine beads of sweat, and his whole body looked like he had been fished out of the water. Just sweating can add a lot of description, and washing the marrow and bones must be very painful and tiring. There are many descriptions that can be added. For example, when it hurts, don't just write about how painful it is. Write down what kind of pain it is and how it behaves when it hurts. For example: the face is pale with pain, the veins on the hands are bulging, the lips are bitten white (or the tip of the tongue is biting and bleeding), the muscles are tightly stretched, etc. To create the image of a character, you need to express it through many things. Don't directly say what the person is like. Say something through someone else's mouth instead of directly saying it. This will be more concrete and natural. A person's preferences, such as what kind of clothes he wears, what colors he likes, what dishes he likes to eat, etc., Can all express a character's personality and what he does. Take the villain as an example. He has a blood-red skull painted on his black clothes and is murderous. I like black and have a gloomy personality. Likes to drink blood, be bloodthirsty and cruel, etc.
Check-in building·Sign-in building
I found that there was no check-in building, so I created one, and everyone actively checked in!
On the formation of the cold-blooded killer character
Generally speaking, there are two types of killers in novels. The first is the agent of the Communist Party, and the second is the killer of the organization. Agents are not so ruthless and will do whatever it takes to achieve their goals, but killers are different. They are ruthless and perverted murderers who will do whatever it takes to achieve their goals and can kill innocent people. This is the difference between the two methods. How is character formed? First of all, killers receive strict training in the organization, and then they are constantly eliminated through fighting (for example, only one out of 20 people can survive), and generally killers should be trained since childhood. She is used to cold-blooded killing. In her opinion, killing is normal. This is the result of different concepts, just like the environmental impact mentioned before. Having been in such a bloody environment since childhood, it is inevitable that his personality will be biased. (Just like polygamy in ancient times when men were superior to women. We think this is wrong now, but people in ancient times thought it was correct.) Killers kill people to gain profits. Maybe the people they kill have nothing to do with them or even know them. Killers are different from normal people. Their psychology is already pathological. There is no difference between killing people and killing chickens. These are all caused by environmental reasons and human guidance. In terms of human guidance, killer organizations usually have a mentor to teach them, including not only force and resourcefulness. There is an idiom that raises tigers, and organizations must absolutely control them, such as subconscious control, deep hypnosis, etc. (These are actual specific cases) You can imagine what their character will be like under these circumstances. The one you wrote belongs to the latter, so she is cold-blooded, she is perverted, she is unkind, and she will do whatever it takes to achieve her goals. These are all normal.
The author hasn't updated for a long time. Is he going to update the book?
It's okay if the heroine dies, just in time to open the next book. I suggest you write about quick travel in the next book. Your ** is suitable for writing about quick travel.
Alas, school starts tomorrow, and I feel so panicked.
When can it be updated?
Please update, please update, please update... I say important things three times
It's so beautiful. Is there anything I can watch at once?
I really like reading it. Dear, are there any books like this?










